[观钓鱼]钓鱼的作文

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2019年11月17日 23:28

【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【生】【活】【就】【像】【一】【杯】【咖】【啡】【,】【感】【动】【是】【缕】【缕】【醇】【香】【;】【生】【活】【就】【像】【一】【壶】【热】【茶】【,】【感】【动】【是】【丝】【丝】【温】【暖】【;】【生】【活】【就】【像】【一】【簇】【鲜】【花】【,】【感】【动】【是】【片】【片】【绚】【丽】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【在】【我】【的】【房】【间】【里】【有】【一】【个】【花】【篮】【,】【里】【面】【装】【满】【了】【我】【的】【感】【动】【,】【它】【比】【任】【何】【一】【篮】【鲜】【花】【都】【要】【夺】【目】【。】【从】【收】【集】【感】【动】【的】【那】【天】【开】【始】【,】【我】【便】【拥】【有】【了】【幸】【福】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【记】【得】【前】【不】【久】【,】【我】【生】【病】【了】【,】【上】【学】【放】【学】【便】【由】【爸】【爸】【接】【送】【。】【星】【期】【二】【那】【天】【,】【我】【要】【参】【加】【竞】【赛】【班】【,】【所】【以】【不】【能】【正】【点】【放】【学】【。】【可】【爸】【爸】【不】【知】【道】【,】【那】【样】【的】【话】【他】【会】【在】【外】【面】【等】【很】【久】【的】【。】【我】【想】【给】【爸】【爸】【打】【电】【话】【告】【诉】【他】【一】【声】【,】【可】【却】【来】【不】【及】【,】【也】【只】【能】【让】【爸】【爸】【等】【了】【。】【竞】【赛】【班】【一】【下】【课】【,】【我】【便】【急】【匆】【匆】【地】【往】【楼】【下】【跑】【,】【心】【想】【:】【爸】【爸】【会】【不】【会】【等】【不】【到】【我】【先】【走】【了】【?】【可】【我】【一】【出】【校】【门】【,】【发】【现】【爸】【爸】【背】【着】【手】【,】【依】【然】【站】【在】【那】【里】【,】【月】【光】【下】【的】【身】【影】【很】【长】【。】【看】【着】【远】【处】【的】【爸】【爸】【,】【觉】【得】【他】【好】【像】【不】【再】【那】【么】【年】【轻】【了】【。】【爸】【爸】【什】【么】【时】【候】【开】【始】【老】【的】【?】【是】【在】【送】【我】【上】【学】【的】【路】【上】【吗】【?】【我】【的】【鼻】【子】【酸】【酸】【的】【。】【爸】【爸】【见】【我】【出】【来】【,】【微】【笑】【着】【向】【我】【招】【招】【手】【,】【我】【点】【了】【点】【头】【,】【在】【爸】【爸】【转】【身】【的】【瞬】【间】【抹】【了】【一】【下】【眼】【睛】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【一】【路】【上】【,】【爸】【爸】【关】【切】【地】【问】【我】【身】【体】【好】【些】【了】【吗】【?】【有】【没】【有】【咳】【嗽】【?】【中】【午】【饭】【吃】【了】【多】【少】【?】【我】【沉】【默】【着】【不】【说】【话】【,】【怕】【只】【说】【一】【个】【字】【就】【又】【会】【掉】【眼】【泪】【。】【爸】【爸】【见】【我】【不】【说】【话】【,】【小】【心】【翼】【翼】【地】【问】【:】【“】【怎】【么】【了】【?】【不】【舒】【服】【吗】【?】【”】【我】【摇】【了】【摇】【头】【,】【深】【吸】【一】【口】【气】【,】【说】【:】【“】【很】【好】【啊】【,】【只】【是】【我】【今】【天】【忘】【了】【说】【要】【参】【加】【竞】【赛】【班】【的】【事】【,】【让】【您】【等】【了】【这】【么】【久】【。】【”】【爸】【爸】【见】【我】【身】【体】【无】【恙】【,】【便】【松】【了】【一】【口】【气】【,】【漫】【不】【经】【心】【地】【说】【:】【“】【我】【早】【就】【想】【到】【你】【今】【天】【要】【上】【竞】【赛】【班】【的】【,】【所】【以】【晚】【来】【一】【会】【儿】【,】【也】【没】【等】【多】【久】【。】【”】【原】【来】【爸】【爸】【知】【道】【啊】【,】【我】【心】【中】【的】【愧】【疚】【感】【顿】【时】【消】【了】【一】【半】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【回】【到】【家】【中】【,】【妈】【妈】【一】【见】【我】【们】【就】【问】【:】【“】【怎】【么】【了】【?】【怎】【么】【这】【么】【久】【才】【回】【来】【?】【”】【爸】【爸】【连】【忙】【说】【:】【“】【不】【久】【不】【久】【,】【也】【没】【多】【久】【啊】【。】【”】【妈】【妈】【疑】【惑】【地】【看】【了】【爸】【爸】【一】【眼】【,】【又】【看】【了】【一】【眼】【表】【,】【说】【:】【“】【怎】【么】【不】【久】【?】【都】【快】【1】【个】【小】【时】【了】【!】【”】【1】【个】【小】【时】【?】【我】【疑】【惑】【地】【看】【着】【爸】【爸】【,】【顿】【时】【也】【明】【白】【了】【,】【原】【来】【爸】【爸】【在】【凛】【冽】【的】【寒】【风】【中】【等】【了】【我】【1】【个】【小】【时】【!】【愧】【疚】【感】【重】【又】【充】【满】【了】【我】【的】【心】【中】【,】【沉】【甸】【甸】【的】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【吃】【饭】【时】【,】【我】【一】【直】【是】【沉】【默】【的】【,】【因】【为】【心】【里】【很】【过】【意】【不】【去】【。】【爸】【爸】【见】【状】【慢】【慢】【地】【开】【口】【道】【:】【“】【孩】【子】【,】【生】【气】【了】【?】【我】【不】【是】【故】【意】【骗】【你】【,】【只】【是】【不】【想】【让】【你】【担】【心】【,】【你】【爸】【爸】【我】【身】【强】【体】【壮】【,】【吹】【吹】【风】【就】【跟】【挠】【痒】【痒】【一】【样】【,】【没】【什】【么】【大】【不】【了】【!】【”】【我】【望】【着】【爸】【爸】【,】【一】【下】【子】【笑】【出】【声】【来】【,】【随】【即】【又】【说】【:】【“】【爸】【爸】【,】【我】【怎】【么】【会】【生】【您】【的】【气】【呢】【,】【女】【儿】【只】【是】【心】【里】【觉】【得】【过】【意】【不】【去】【,】【要】【是】【我】【和】【爸】【爸】【说】【一】【下】【,】【就】【不】【会】【让】【爸】【爸】【苦】【等】【了】【。】【爸】【爸】【,】【以】【后】【你】【要】【是】【等】【不】【到】【我】【,】【你】【就】【先】【走】【,】【我】【自】【己】【也】【能】【回】【家】【的】【!】【”】【爸】【爸】【笑】【着】【点】【头】【,】【眼】【里】【流】【露】【出】【一】【丝】【欣】【喜】【与】【安】【慰】【。】【我】【吃】【着】【可】【口】【的】【饭】【菜】【,】【觉】【得】【满】【嘴】【都】【是】【幸】【福】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【屋】【外】【寒】【风】【呼】【啸】【,】【我】【的】【心】【却】【温】【暖】【无】【比】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【(】【指】【导】【老】【师】【:】【王】【水】【娟】【)】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【你】【写】【我】【读】【:】【文】【章】【的】【情】【节】【设】【计】【得】【很】【巧】【妙】【。】【特】【别】【是】【第】【四】【自】【然】【段】【“】【我】【”】【与】【爸】【爸】【的】【对】【话】【并】【没】【有】【什】【么】【感】【染】【人】【的】【地】【方】【。】【但】【读】【到】【结】【尾】【人】【们】【才】【发】【现】【,】【爸】【爸】【其】【实】【是】【说】【了】【假】【话】【。】【这】【样】【一】【来】【,】【当】【我】【们】【读】【完】【全】【文】【,】【才】【感】【受】【到】【第】【四】【段】【中】【的】【语】【言】【描】【写】【和】【情】【节】【设】【计】【不】【是】【可】【有】【可】【无】【的】【,】【是】【与】【结】【尾】【相】【互】【作】【用】【的】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【微】【格】【素】【材】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【闲】【花】【只】【好】【闲】【中】【看】【,】【一】【折】【归】【来】【便】【不】【鲜】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【【】【出】【处】【】】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【清】【·】【刘】【廷】【玑】【《】【偶】【成】【》】【(】【见】【清】【·】【袁】【枚】【《】【随】【国】【诗】【话】【》】【卷】【十】【四】【第】【四】【十】【条】【)】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【【】【哲】【理】【链】【接】【】】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【那】【些】【闲】【野】【中】【的】【花】【,】【只】【适】【宜】【在】【闲】【野】【中】【观】【赏】【,】【一】【把】【它】【们】【摘】【折】【回】【来】【,】【就】【不】【新】【鲜】【了】【。】【一】【切】【美】【的】【事】【物】【都】【要】【合】【乎】【自】【然】【,】【人】【工】【的】【做】【作】【改】【造】【,】【会】【把】【原】【来】【的】【美】【好】【本】【质】【破】【坏】【。】【又】【可】【以】【用】【来】【说】【明】【做】【任】【何】【事】【情】【都】【要】【因】【地】【制】【宜】【,】【要】【具】【体】【情】【况】【具】【体】【对】【待】【,】【比】【如】【引】【进】【人】【才】【、】【引】【进】【外】【地】【的】【先】【进】【经】【验】【,】【都】【要】【充】【分】【地】【考】【虑】【到】【自】【己】【地】【区】【、】【单】【位】【的】【情】【况】【与】【彼】【处】【的】【差】【异】【,】【要】【注】【意】【分】【析】【人】【才】【、】【经】【验】【在】【什】【么】【“】【土】【壤】【”】【中】【生】【长】【的】【,】【不】【要】【盲】【目】【引】【进】【,】【呆】【板】【效】【法】【,】【生】【搬】【硬】【套】【,】【免】【得】【“】【一】【折】【归】【来】【便】【不】【鲜】【”】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】

【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【母】【亲】【做】【的】【饭】【菜】【不】【好】【吃】【,】【是】【真】【的】【不】【好】【吃】【,】【天】【知】【道】【我】【是】【怎】【么】【咽】【下】【那】【一】【盘】【盘】【或】【黏】【稠】【如】【胶】【或】【稀】【薄】【如】【水】【,】【令】【我】【昏】【昏】【然】【的】【“】【美】【味】【佳】【肴】【”】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【去】【年】【夏】【令】【营】【,】【吃】【到】【了】【学】【校】【的】【饭】【菜】【,】【真】【好】【吃】【,】【这】【绝】【对】【不】【是】【吹】【的】【,】【让】【我】【“】【乐】【不】【思】【蜀】【”】【。】【一】【个】【多】【月】【了】【,】【我】【很】【少】【往】【家】【打】【电】【话】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【一】【天】【夜】【里】【,】【同】【宿】【舍】【的】【一】【好】【友】【,】【在】【床】【上】【喃】【喃】【地】【说】【着】【梦】【话】【:】【“】【妈】【妈】【,】【我】【想】【家】【。】【”】【我】【心】【里】【一】【惊】【,】【这】【梦】【话】【仿】【佛】【也】【说】【出】【了】【我】【的】【心】【声】【。】【是】【啊】【,】【我】【已】【经】【好】【久】【没】【回】【家】【,】【好】【久】【没】【看】【见】【妈】【妈】【,】【也】【好】【久】【没】【吃】【到】【她】【做】【的】【“】【美】【味】【”】【了】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【窗】【外】【月】【色】【已】【隐】【去】【,】【拂】【过】【的】【夜】【风】【竟】【也】【凉】【凉】【的】【,】【虽】【不】【冷】【但】【却】【令】【我】【清】【醒】【难】【眠】【了】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【第】【二】【天】【从】【图】【书】【馆】【出】【来】【,】【抱】【着】【两】【本】【书】【,】【正】【准】【备】【回】【宿】【舍】【。】【突】【然】【微】【风】【摇】【着】【一】【个】【人】【的】【身】【影】【闯】【进】【了】【我】【的】【眼】【帘】【。】【“】【妈】【妈】【!】【”】【我】【心】【里】【一】【惊】【,】【不】【由】【一】【股】【辛】【酸】【涌】【上】【心】【头】【。】【走】【近】【她】【,】【妈】【妈】【整】【洁】【的】【头】【发】【已】【经】【被】【风】【吹】【得】【凌】【乱】【不】【堪】【了】【,】【丝】【丝】【的】【倦】【容】【还】【徜】【徉】【在】【她】【已】【不】【年】【轻】【的】【脸】【上】【,】【衣】【领】【上】【竟】【沾】【了】【很】【显】【眼】【的】【灰】【尘】【。】【“】【妈】【,】【你】【怎】【么】【来】【了】【?】【”】【“】【哦】【,】【没】【事】【,】【路】【过】【,】【顺】【便】【过】【来】【看】【看】【。】【”】【我】【禁】【不】【住】【上】【前】【搂】【住】【妈】【妈】【,】【轻】【轻】【吹】【去】【那】【些】【尘】【土】【。】【“】【妈】【,】【”】【“】【有】【事】【吗】【?】【”】【“】【没】【事】【。】【”】【我】【的】【声】【音】【有】【些】【哽】【咽】【。】【妈】【妈】【给】【我】【带】【来】【一】【些】【生】【活】【必】【需】【品】【,】【默】【默】【放】【下】【,】【随】【手】【把】【我】【耳】【际】【的】【乱】【发】【顺】【到】【脖】【子】【下】【。】【“】【你】【们】【的】【夏】【令】【营】【快】【结】【束】【了】【吧】【,】【结】【束】【就】【可】【以】【回】【家】【了】【吧】【,】【回】【家】【吧】【,】【你】【爸】【爸】【想】【你】【。】【”】【“】【嗯】【。】【”】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【一】【个】【星】【期】【后】【,】【我】【夹】【着】【大】【包】【小】【包】【进】【了】【家】【门】【。】【看】【见】【我】【回】【来】【了】【,】【妈】【妈】【立】【马】【风】【风】【火】【火】【地】【冲】【进】【厨】【房】【,】【“】【女】【儿】【,】【我】【刚】【刚】【又】【学】【会】【了】【一】【道】【新】【菜】【,】【我】【做】【给】【你】【吃】【啊】【。】【”】【我】【的】【心】【满】【满】【的】【全】【是】【感】【动】【。】【透】【过】【湿】【湿】【的】【水】【汽】【望】【向】【母】【亲】【,】【她】【正】【在】【一】【脸】【笑】【容】【地】【看】【着】【我】【。】【“】【妈】【,】【你】【的】【菜】【煳】【了】【!】【”】【“】【哈】【哈】【”】【,】【我】【和】【妈】【妈】【的】【笑】【声】【传】【出】【了】【那】【么】【远】【,】【震】【落】【了】【树】【上】【的】【知】【了】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【点】【评】【:】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【文】【中】【不】【着】【一】【字】【“】【心】【灵】【的】【浪】【花】【”】【,】【字】【里】【行】【间】【却】【把】【那】【份】【心】【灵】【的】【动】【感】【描】【绘】【得】【淋】【漓】【尽】【致】【。】【只】【是】【因】【为】【妈】【妈】【的】【“】【经】【典】【”】【饭】【菜】【便】【逃】【脱】【似】【的】【在】【外】【“】【乐】【不】【思】【蜀】【”】【。】【同】【学】【的】【一】【句】【梦】【话】【惊】【醒】【作】【者】【内】【心】【深】【处】【的】【思】【念】【,】【想】【家】【,】【任】【谁】【也】【无】【法】【回】【避】【的】【情】【感】【。】【文】【章】【笔】【触】【细】【腻】【,】【语】【言】【生】【动】【有】【趣】【,】【开】【篇】【对】【妈】【妈】【饭】【菜】【的】【夸】【张】【描】【写】【,】【梦】【中】【惊】【醒】【时】【的】【感】【受】【,】【妈】【妈】【衣】【衫】【上】【的】【灰】【尘】【以】【及】【随】【手】【理】【顺】【我】【的】【乱】【发】【的】【情】【节】【,】【真】【实】【感】【人】【。】【结】【尾】【温】【馨】【,】【升】【华】【主】【题】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【(】【指】【导】【老】【师】【:】【郑】【景】【勇】【)】【<】【b】【r】【>】全国污染源普查条例【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【一】【阵】【寒】【风】【吹】【过】【,】【落】【叶】【飘】【飞】【,】【我】【不】【禁】【打】【了】【个】【寒】【战】【。】【今】【年】【的】【冬】【季】【似】【乎】【比】【往】【年】【来】【得】【早】【。】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【一】【晃】【,】【妈】【妈】【离】【开】【这】【个】【世】【界】【已】【经】【七】【个】【多】【月】【了】【!】【我】【常】【常】【翘】【首】【仰】【望】【苍】【穹】【,】【从】【心】【里】【发】【出】【无】【数】【遍】【的】【呼】【唤】【—】【—】【我】【亲】【爱】【的】【妈】【妈】【,】【你】【在】【天】【国】【的】【何】【方】【?】【你】【是】【否】【能】【看】【到】【我】【的】【身】【影】【?】【你】【能】【听】【见】【女】【儿】【对】【你】【深】【情】【的】【呼】【唤】【吗】【?】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【去】【年】【冬】【天】【,】【你】【被】【医】【院】【诊】【断】【出】【患】【有】【间】【歇】【性】【精】【神】【病】【。】【你】【的】【记】【忆】【力】【明】【显】【衰】【退】【,】【有】【时】【说】【话】【语】【无】【伦】【次】【,】【甚】【至】【生】【活】【不】【能】【自】【理】【。】【为】【了】【给】【你】【治】【病】【和】【让】【我】【继】【续】【读】【书】【,】【年】【近】【5】【0】【的】【父】【亲】【不】【得】【不】【外】【出】【打】【工】【。】【这】【时】【的】【你】【既】【要】【忍】【受】【病】【痛】【的】【折】【磨】【,】【又】【要】【挑】【起】【整】【个】【家】【庭】【的】【重】【担】【。】【可】【是】【无】【知】【的】【我】【根】【本】【不】【知】【道】【替】【你】【分】【担】【。】【我】【真】【后】【悔】【,】【那】【时】【,】【我】【应】【该】【放】【学】【后】【多】【陪】【陪】【你】【,】【应】【该】【帮】【你】【分】【担】【家】【务】【,】【让】【你】【开】【心】【,】【帮】【助】【你】【恢】【复】【健】【康】【。】【可】【是】【,】【我】【是】【那】【么】【的】【不】【懂】【事】【,】【竟】【常】【常】【为】【一】【些】【鸡】【毛】【蒜】【皮】【的】【小】【事】【,】【一】【次】【又】【一】【次】【地】【惹】【你】【生】【气】【,】【有】【时】【甚】【至】【还】【与】【你】【大】【吵】【大】【闹】【。】【而】【每】【一】【次】【,】【总】【是】【你】【先】【向】【我】【道】【歉】【。】【唯】【独】【在】【那】【个】【星】【期】【天】【的】【下】【午】【,】【我】【们】【在】【一】【番】【争】【吵】【过】【后】【你】【沉】【默】【了】【,】【没】【有】【对】【我】【说】【什】【么】【,】【而】【是】【独】【自】【地】【回】【到】【房】【间】【,】【躺】【到】【了】【床】【上】【。】【我】【分】【明】【看】【到】【你】【额】【头】【上】【冒】【出】【了】【豆】【大】【的】【汗】【滴】【,】【脸】【上】【流】【露】【出】【痛】【苦】【不】【堪】【的】【表】【情】【。】【因】【为】【赌】【气】【,】【我】【没】【有】【管】【你】【,】【只】【顾】【着】【自】【己】【收】【拾】【东】【西】【,】【然】【后】【就】【气】【冲】【冲】【地】【去】【了】【学】【校】【。】【晚】【自】【习】【结】【束】【后】【,】【我】【正】【在】【教】【室】【里】【收】【拾】【东】【西】【,】【忽】【然】【听】【到】【一】【个】【熟】【悉】【的】【声】【音】【在】【叫】【我】【的】【名】【字】【。】【我】【抬】【头】【一】【看】【,】【原】【来】【是】【妈】【妈】【!】【这】【时】【的】【你】【手】【里】【提】【着】【一】【大】【袋】【东】【西】【,】【倚】【在】【教】【室】【的】【门】【框】【上】【,】【脸】【色】【憔】【悴】【不】【堪】【,】【却】【强】【装】【出】【一】【副】【温】【和】【的】【笑】【容】【。】【我】【赶】【紧】【接】【过】【你】【手】【里】【的】【东】【西】【,】【打】【开】【一】【看】【,】【里】【面】【装】【着】【我】【喜】【欢】【吃】【的】【苹】【果】【、】【巧】【克】【力】【,】【还】【有】【保】【暖】【衣】【…】【…】【你】【将】【我】【拉】【到】【旁】【边】【,】【一】【只】【手】【扶】【在】【我】【的】【肩】【头】【,】【另】【一】【只】【手】【握】【着】【我】【的】【手】【,】【竟】【絮】【絮】【地】【向】【我】【道】【起】【歉】【来】【。】【你】【说】【你】【不】【该】【在】【我】【上】【学】【时】【和】【我】【争】【吵】【,】【你】【不】【该】【顾】【着】【自】【己】【去】【休】【息】【,】【你】【不】【该】【不】【替】【我】【收】【拾】【上】【学】【的】【东】【西】【…】【…】【直】【说】【得】【我】【露】【出】【了】【笑】【容】【,】【你】【才】【高】【兴】【地】【转】【过】【身】【,】【迈】【着】【蹒】【跚】【的】【步】【子】【,】【借】【着】【朦】【胧】【的】【月】【色】【回】【去】【了】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 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】【当】【你】【走】【后】【,】【我】【的】【眼】【前】【总】【是】【浮】【现】【出】【你】【那】【张】【充】【满】【病】【态】【而】【又】【温】【和】【的】【脸】【。】【我】【想】【:】【也】【许】【是】【由】【于】【我】【这】【个】【年】【龄】【段】【女】【孩】【的】【逆】【反】【心】【理】【,】【其】【实】【每】【次】【都】【是】【我】【在】【故】【意】【惹】【你】【生】【气】【,】【故】【意】【找】【碴】【儿】【与】【你】【争】【吵】【。】【如】【果】【说】【有】【错】【的】【话】【,】【那】【可】【是】【全】【在】【我】【呀】【!】【如】【果】【说】【该】【道】【歉】【的】【话】【,】【那】【也】【是】【该】【我】【向】【你】【道】【歉】【呀】【!】【再】【说】【,】【你】【已】【身】【患】【重】【病】【,】【可】【以】【想】【象】【,】【那】【晚】【你】【来】【看】【我】【,】【一】【定】【是】【在】【你】【的】【病】【痛】【稍】【稍】【减】【轻】【后】【,】【才】【手】【忙】【脚】【乱】【地】【收】【拾】【好】【了】【我】【落】【下】【的】【一】【些】【东】【西】【,】【然】【后】【拖】【着】【病】【体】【,】【在】【朦】【胧】【的】【夜】【色】【中】【,】【赶】【了】【1】【0】【多】【里】【的】【山】【路】【而】【来】【。】【看】【样】【子】【,】【为】【了】【不】【打】【扰】【我】【的】【学】【习】【,】【你】【一】【定】【站】【在】【窗】【外】【等】【了】【许】【久】【,】【直】【到】【下】【课】【铃】【响】【起】【,】【你】【才】【怯】【生】【生】【地】【呼】【唤】【我】【的】【名】【字】【…】【…】【想】【到】【这】【里】【,】【我】【愧】【疚】【难】【当】【。】【我】【在】【心】【里】【保】【证】【:】【这】【次】【回】【家】【后】【,】【我】【一】【定】【先】【给】【你】【道】【歉】【,】【并】【且】【从】【此】【永】【远】【不】【再】【惹】【你】【生】【气】【,】【永】【远】【不】【再】【让】【你】【伤】【心】【,】【永】【远】【与】【你】【分】【担】【一】【切】【的】【痛】【苦】【…】【…】【可】【是】【,】【一】【切】【都】【太】【迟】【了】【!】【当】【听】【到】【你】【病】【危】【的】【消】【息】【,】【赶】【回】【家】【时】【,】【却】【再】【也】【没】【有】【看】【到】【你】【站】【在】【门】【口】【焦】【急】【翘】【盼】【我】【的】【身】【影】【;】【再】【也】【没】【有】【看】【到】【你】【接】【过】【我】【书】【包】【时】【的】【那】【张】【笑】【吟】【吟】【的】【脸】【;】【再】【也】【没】【有】【看】【到】【桌】【上】【你】【为】【我】【准】【备】【好】【的】【丰】【盛】【可】【口】【的】【饭】【菜】【…】【…】【我】【知】【道】【:】【你】【是】【永】【远】【听】【不】【到】【女】【儿】【的】【道】【歉】【了】【!】【你】【是】【永】【远】【看】【不】【到】【女】【儿】【的】【悔】【恨】【了】【!】【你】【也】【永】【远】【不】【能】【听】【到】【女】【儿】【呼】【唤】【你】【的】【声】【音】【了】【!】【可】【是】【,】【我】【亲】【爱】【的】【妈】【妈】【,】【难】【道】【你】【就】【不】【能】【再】【给】【女】【儿】【一】【次】【改】【过】【的】【机】【会】【吗】【?】【难】【道】【你】【忍】【心】【让】【女】【儿】【悔】【恨】【终】【生】【吗】【?】【难】【道】【你】【就】【这】【样】【狠】【心】【地】【撇】【下】【女】【儿】【而】【独】【自】【远】【行】【了】【吗】【?】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【不】【!】【妈】【妈】【,】【女】【儿】【舍】【不】【得】【让】【你】【走】【!】【任】【凭】【我】【千】【呼】【万】【唤】【,】【任】【凭】【我】【撕】【心】【裂】【肺】【,】【我】【割】【舍】【不】【下】【的】【亲】【人】【,】【我】【那】【苦】【命】【而】【又】【伟】【大】【的】【妈】【妈】【还】【是】【走】【了】【!】【可】【是】【,】【1】【5】【年】【的】【光】【阴】【啊】【,】【早】【已】【在】【我】【心】【头】【刻】【上】【了】【一】【道】【深】【深】【的】【印】【记】【,】【我】【又】【怎】【能】【忘】【记】【—】【—】【因】【为】【有】【了】【你】【,】【我】【才】【拥】【有】【了】【那】【段】【最】【宝】【贵】【、】【最】【永】【恒】【的】【幸】【福】【时】【光】【;】【因】【为】【有】【了】【你】【,】【我】【才】【从】【一】【个】【懵】【懂】【无】【知】【的】【小】【女】【孩】【成】【长】【为】【一】【个】【知】【书】【达】【理】【、】【乖】【巧】【懂】【事】【的】【中】【学】【生】【;】【因】【为】【有】【了】【你】【,】【我】【才】【享】【受】【到】【了】【世】【界】【上】【最】【无】【私】【、】【最】【伟】【大】【的】【母】【爱】【;】【因】【为】【有】【了】【你】【,】【我】【才】【携】【着】【感】【恩】【上】【路】【、】【满】【怀】【信】【心】【憧】【憬】【美】【好】【的】【明】【天】【!】【亲】【爱】【的】【妈】【妈】【,】【请】【你】【放】【心】【:】【女】【儿】【一】【定】【不】【会】【辜】【负】【你】【的】【殷】【切】【期】【盼】【,】【我】【会】【化】【悲】【痛】【为】【力】【量】【,】【勤】【奋】【学】【习】【,】【掌】【握】【过】【硬】【本】【领】【,】【做】【一】【个】【有】【用】【的】【人】【。】【请】【你】【相】【信】【,】【女】【儿】【一】【定】【会】【说】【到】【做】【到】【的】【!】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【…】【…】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【冬】【季】【是】【确】【切】【地】【来】【临】【了】【,】【门】【前】【的】【那】【棵】【老】【榆】【树】【忧】【郁】【地】【立】【在】【那】【里】【,】【树】【上】【的】【叶】【子】【就】【要】【落】【尽】【,】【只】【剩】【下】【一】【些】【深】【褐】【色】【的】【枝】【条】【,】【杂】【乱】【地】【伸】【向】【天】【空】【。】【一】【只】【乌】【鸦】【呆】【立】【在】【枝】【头】【,】【默】【然】【地】【凝】【望】【着】【我】【那】【孤】【独】【的】【老】【屋】【,】【仿】【佛】【也】【在】【回】【忆】【着】【关】【于】【它】【的】【一】【些】【伤】【心】【往】【事】【。】【遥】【望】【远】【处】【,】【一】【缕】【炊】【烟】【袅】【袅】【升】【起】【,】【我】【的】【思】【绪】【似】【乎】【也】【随】【着】【这】【黄】【昏】【的】【炊】【烟】【飘】【向】【了】【那】【遥】【远】【的】【天】【国】【…】【…】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【亲】【爱】【的】【妈】【妈】【,】【女】【儿】【为】【你】【祈】【祷】【—】【—】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【愿】【你】【在】【天】【国】【一】【切】【安】【好】【!】【<】【b】【r】【>】

【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【敬】【爱】【的】【曹】【先】【生】【:】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【您】【好】【!】【我】【是】【一】【名】【三】【国】【历】【史】【的】【爱】【好】【者】【。】【在】【此】【我】【向】【您】【郑】【重】【奉】【上】【此】【信】【,】【烦】【请】【悉】【心】【阅】【读】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【曹】【先】【生】【,】【后】【人】【对】【您】【多】【评】【价】【为】【奸】【雄】【,】【我】【却】【不】【敢】【苟】【同】【,】【我】【认】【为】【先】【生】【实】【为】【古】【今】【少】【有】【之】【才】【。】【想】【您】【生】【于】【乱】【世】【,】【封】【为】【校】【尉】【,】【血】【战】【沙】【场】【,】【破】【黄】【巾】【,】【擒】【袁】【术】【,】【破】【张】【鲁】【,】【灭】【袁】【绍】【,】【败】【马】【超】【,】【力】【斩】【张】【秀】【、】【吕】【布】【等】【辈】【。】【武】【功】【之】【盛】【古】【今】【罕】【有】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【您】【忧】【国】【忧】【民】【,】【只】【身】【行】【刺】【董】【卓】【,】【联】【十】【八】【路】【诸】【侯】【讨】【董】【,】【那】【是】【何】【等】【的】【豪】【气】【。】【想】【您】【治】【军】【严】【明】【,】【马】【踏】【麦】【田】【以】【发】【代】【头】【受】【刑】【,】【以】【德】【服】【众】【,】【令】【人】【钦】【佩】【;】【官】【渡】【之】【际】【焚】【降】【者】【名】【单】【;】【擒】【关】【公】【而】【不】【杀】【,】【助】【其】【过】【关】【斩】【将】【,】【您】【又】【是】【何】【等】【的】【爱】【惜】【人】【才】【;】【对】【陈】【琳】【的】【声】【讨】【书】【不】【罚】【而】【奖】【,】【此】【是】【何】【等】【的】【宽】【宏】【大】【量】【;】【对】【玄】【德】【数】【次】【不】【杀】【,】【此】【是】【何】【等】【仁】【慈】【呀】【!】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【想】【您】【那】【气】【贯】【长】【虹】【的】【文】【才】【,】【您】【那】【气】【魄】【雄】【伟】【的】【诗】【歌】【,】【清】【俊】【整】【洁】【的】【散】【文】【,】【为】【后】【世】【文】【坛】【留】【下】【了】【一】【颗】【颗】【璀】【璨】【的】【明】【珠】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【您】【一】【生】【未】【称】【帝】【,】【足】【表】【对】【汉】【皇】【忠】【心】【。】【您】【的】【子】【嗣】【亦】【承】【载】【了】【您】【的】【文】【采】【,】【为】【后】【人】【留】【下】【了】【不】【朽】【的】【诗】【篇】【;】【您】【的】【左】【右】【有】【许】【多】【贤】【人】【追】【随】【,】【其】【中】【不】【乏】【英】【雄】【之】【辈】【,】【如】【张】【文】【远】【、】【徐】【公】【明】【等】【,】【亦】【不】【缺】【运】【筹】【帷】【幄】【之】【流】【,】【如】【郭】【奉】【孝】【等】【,】【助】【您】【一】【统】【江】【北】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【您】【的】【一】【生】【最】【大】【的】【败】【笔】【在】【于】【留】【下】【了】【司】【马】【之】【祸】【。】【然】【司】【马】【之】【祸】【,】【过】【亦】【不】【在】【先】【生】【。】【先】【生】【虽】【通】【晓】【天】【文】【地】【理】【,】【然】【终】【无】【法】【看】【透】【百】【年】【之】【后】【世】【,】【亦】【人】【之】【常】【情】【也】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【曹】【先】【生】【,】【您】【的】【一】【生】【驰】【骋】【沙】【场】【,】【落】【笔】【生】【花】【,】【实】【乃】【军】【事】【、】【文】【学】【、】【政】【治】【的】【奇】【才】【啊】【!】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【学】【生】【邹】【航】【谨】【献】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【2】【0】【0】【9】【年】【1】【0】【月】【3】【0】【日】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【(】【指】【导】【老】【师】【:】【葛】【丽】【)】【<】【b】【r】【>】全国污染源普查条例【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【过】【去】【,】【我】【一】【直】【认】【为】【讨】【价】【还】【价】【是】【一】【件】【很】【俗】【气】【的】【事】【,】【有】【时】【在】【市】【场】【上】【看】【到】【别】【人】【为】【了】【几】【块】【钱】【而】【争】【得】【不】【可】【开】【交】【的】【时】【候】【,】【我】【甚】【至】【还】【有】【点】【鄙】【视】【。】【可】【经】【过】【自】【己】【几】【次】【上】【当】【花】【冤】【枉】【钱】【的】【教】【训】【后】【,】【我】【决】【定】【去】【实】【地】【“】【考】【察】【”】【一】【下】【还】【价】【的】【“】【艺】【术】【”】【!】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【机】【会】【终】【于】【来】【了】【!】【星】【期】【天】【,】【老】【爸】【要】【去】【买】【家】【里】【装】【修】【用】【的】【卫】【浴】【用】【品】【,】【在】【我】【的】【百】【般】【央】【求】【下】【,】【爸】【爸】【勉】【强】【答】【应】【带】【我】【去】【,】【虽】【然】【我】【嘴】【上】【说】【只】【是】【去】【散】【散】【心】【,】【其】【实】【是】【想】【学】【学】【老】【爸】【是】【如】【何】【还】【价】【的】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【我】【们】【驱】【车】【来】【到】【了】【“】【望】【湖】【美】【家】【居】【”】【。】【宽】【阔】【的】【商】【场】【里】【,】【各】【类】【家】【装】【用】【品】【琳】【琅】【满】【目】【,】【令】【人】【眼】【花】【缭】【乱】【。】【爸】【爸】【领】【着】【我】【径】【直】【来】【到】【卫】【浴】【专】【卖】【区】【,】【只】【见】【他】【先】【是】【不】【动】【声】【色】【地】【逐】【户】【询】【问】【了】【十】【几】【家】【商】【店】【的】【卫】【浴】【五】【件】【套】【的】【价】【格】【,】【对】【该】【商】【品】【的】【总】【体】【价】【格】【先】【做】【到】【心】【中】【有】【数】【,】【便】【于】【后】【面】【砍】【价】【顺】【利】【进】【行】【。】【之】【后】【,】【他】【挑】【选】【了】【几】【户】【基】【本】【符】【合】【自】【己】【心】【理】【价】【位】【的】【商】【家】【,】【准】【备】【开】【始】【砍】【价】【。】【在】【进】【商】【店】【前】【,】【老】【爸】【把】【我】【拉】【到】【一】【旁】【,】【神】【秘】【地】【告】【诉】【我】【如】【何】【配】【合】【。】【他】【要】【我】【进】【商】【店】【后】【,】【表】【面】【上】【不】【要】【流】【露】【出】【对】【看】【中】【的】【商】【品】【特】【别】【感】【兴】【趣】【,】【先】【去】【看】【其】【他】【的】【商】【品】【,】【让】【店】【主】【摸】【不】【透】【我】【们】【的】【想】【法】【,】【要】【不】【然】【他】【是】【不】【会】【多】【让】【价】【的】【,】【然】【后】【再】【慢】【慢】【转】【到】【我】【们】【所】【需】【要】【的】【商】【品】【上】【,】【先】【是】【大】【幅】【度】【地】【跟】【他】【砍】【价】【,】【一】【般】【是】【报】【价】【的】【一】【半】【,】【因】【为】【一】【般】【这】【样】【的】【商】【品】【利】【润】【很】【高】【。】【当】【双】【方】【僵】【持】【不】【下】【时】【,】【爸】【爸】【让】【我】【在】【一】【旁】【“】【鸡】【蛋】【里】【挑】【骨】【头】【”】【,】【作】【为】【降】【价】【的】【理】【由】【,】【或】【者】【故】【意】【说】【不】【买】【了】【,】【说】【去】【另】【一】【家】【看】【看】【有】【没】【有】【更】【便】【宜】【的】【,】【然】【后】【我】【们】【装】【着】【要】【转】【身】【离】【去】【的】【样】【子】【,】【如】【果】【这】【时】【店】【主】【让】【步】【了】【,】【就】【说】【明】【这】【个】【价】【格】【基】【本】【到】【位】【了】【。】【起】【初】【我】【有】【些】【不】【解】【,】【怀】【疑】【这】【种】【方】【法】【的】【可】【行】【度】【,】【能】【否】【真】【的】【把】【价】【格】【砍】【下】【来】【,】【不】【过】【我】【还】【是】【半】【信】【半】【疑】【地】【跟】【着】【爸】【爸】【进】【了】【商】【店】【。】【我】【们】【如】【法】【实】【施】【精】【心】【排】【演】【好】【的】【双】【簧】【,】【经】【过】【老】【爸】【同】【店】【主】【十】【几】【个】【回】【合】【斗】【智】【斗】【勇】【的】【口】【才】【较】【量】【,】【和】【我】【在】【一】【旁】【煽】【风】【点】【火】【的】【配】【合】【,】【对】【方】【终】【于】【“】【败】【”】【下】【阵】【来】【。】【一】【场】【没】【有】【硝】【烟】【的】【价】【格】【战】【终】【于】【结】【束】【了】【。】【嗨】【!】【你】【还】【别】【说】【,】【原】【价】【3】【2】【0】【元】【的】【卫】【浴】【五】【件】【套】【,】【以】【现】【价】【2】【0】【0】【元】【成】【交】【,】【竟】【省】【了】【1】【2】【0】【元】【哟】【!】【当】【我】【们】【带】【着】【“】【战】【利】【品】【”】【,】【带】【着】【胜】【利】【者】【的】【喜】【悦】【走】【出】【商】【店】【时】【,】【心】【里】【别】【提】【多】【高】【兴】【了】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【在】【回】【家】【的】【路】【上】【,】【爸】【爸】【对】【我】【说】【,】【还】【价】【是】【一】【门】【学】【问】【,】【不】【但】【能】【锻】【炼】【你】【的】【口】【才】【,】【而】【且】【能】【增】【强】【你】【的】【理】【财】【能】【力】【,】【同】【时】【,】【还】【节】【省】【了】【“】【银】【子】【”】【,】【你】【还】【可】【以】【从】【中】【得】【到】【一】【种】【满】【足】【感】【,】【一】【举】【多】【得】【何】【乐】【而】【不】【为】【呢】【?】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【第】【一】【次】【尝】【到】【了】【还】【价】【的】【滋】【味】【,】【真】【爽】【!】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【微】【格】【素】【材】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【欲】【凭】【莺】【燕】【留】【春】【住】【,】【无】【奈】【东】【风】【信】【杜】【鹃】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【【】【出】【处】【】】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【宋】【·】【吕】【人】【龙】【《】【春】【归】【》】【:】【“】【过】【却】【清】【明】【艳】【冶】【天】【,】【梨】【花】【飞】【雪】【柳】【森】【烟】【。】【欲】【凭】【莺】【燕】【留】【春】【住】【,】【无】【奈】【东】【风】【信】【杜】【鹃】【。】【”】【(】【过】【去】【了】【,】【这】【清】【丽】【明】【媚】【的】【艳】【阳】【天】【,】【梨】【花】【如】【雪】【飘】【飞】【,】【柳】【条】【密】【密】【如】【烟】【。】【想】【靠】【着】【黄】【莺】【和】【燕】【子】【将】【春】【天】【留】【住】【,】【无】【奈】【习】【习】【的】【东】【风】【只】【相】【信】【杜】【鹃】【鸟】【。】【)】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【【】【哲】【理】【链】【接】【】】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【事】【物】【的】【发】【展】【不】【以】【人】【们】【的】【意】【志】【为】【转】【移】【,】【即】【使】【原】【是】【美】【好】【的】【事】【物】【也】【会】【走】【向】【其】【反】【面】【。】【因】【为】【任】【何】【事】【物】【自】【身】【都】【包】【含】【着】【它】【的】【否】【定】【方】【面】【,】【事】【物】【的】【发】【展】【就】【是】【通】【过】【不】【断】【地】【否】【定】【自】【身】【来】【发】【展】【自】【己】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】

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【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【[】【题】【目】【展】【示】【]】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【在】【日】【常】【生】【活】【中】【,】【我】【们】【常】【常】【要】【帮】【助】【别】【人】【,】【也】【常】【常】【去】【接】【受】【别】【人】【的】【帮】【助】【。】【帮】【人】【时】【,】【对】【方】【有】【时】【不】【领】【情】【,】【你】【可】【能】【是】【帮】【倒】【忙】【;】【接】【受】【帮】【助】【时】【,】【有】【时】【心】【里】【并】【不】【轻】【松】【,】【有】【时】【又】【老】【希】【望】【有】【人】【帮】【助】【自】【己】【。】【看】【来】【,】【助】【人】【与】【被】【助】【并】【不】【是】【简】【单】【的】【“】【授】【”】【与】【“】【受】【”】【呢】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【请】【以】【“】【帮】【助】【”】【为】【话】【题】【,】【写】【一】【篇】【不】【少】【于】【6】【0】【0】【字】【的】【文】【章】【。】【题】【目】【自】【拟】【,】【文】【体】【自】【选】【,】【立】【意】【自】【定】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【[】【写】【作】【点】【拨】【]】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【写】【作】【时】【要】【注】【意】【以】【下】【两】【方】【面】【:】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【一】【、】【恰】【当】【选】【材】【,】【深】【化】【主】【题】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【此】【话】【题】【若】【写】【成】【记】【叙】【文】【,】【要】【选】【取】【典】【型】【的】【事】【件】【和】【感】【人】【的】【材】【料】【,】【来】【展】【现】【人】【物】【的】【内】【在】【美】【。】【你】【可】【以】【写】【你】【帮】【助】【别】【人】【的】【一】【件】【或】【几】【件】【事】【,】【通】【过】【它】【来】【表】【达】【朋】【友】【之】【间】【的】【真】【挚】【的】【情】【谊】【;】【也】【可】【以】【写】【别】【人】【帮】【助】【你】【的】【事】【例】【,】【通】【过】【具】【体】【而】【感】【人】【的】【描】【写】【,】【来】【讴】【歌】【人】【间】【的】【真】【情】【;】【还】【可】【以】【讲】【述】【他】【人】【之】【间】【因】【帮】【助】【而】【感】【人】【的】【事】【例】【,】【以】【此】【来】【抒】【发】【人】【世】【间】【博】【大】【而】【纯】【真】【的】【爱】【…】【…】【不】【论】【选】【取】【什】【么】【题】【材】【,】【都】【要】【注】【意】【突】【出】【主】【题】【,】【抓】【住】【人】【物】【的】【情】【感】【、】【心】【理】【、】【品】【质】【和】【性】【格】【,】【挖】【掘】【事】【件】【或】【故】【事】【的】【社】【会】【意】【义】【。】【叙】【事】【要】【小】【中】【见】【大】【,】【即】【通】【过】【生】【活】【中】【的】【小】【事】【反】【映】【出】【社】【会】【和】【人】【生】【的】【大】【主】【题】【;】【如】【果】【要】【展】【示】【人】【的】【思】【想】【情】【感】【和】【品】【质】【,】【一】【定】【要】【在】【真】【实】【感】【人】【的】【故】【事】【情】【节】【中】【来】【表】【现】【。】【在】【表】【达】【技】【巧】【上】【,】【要】【借】【助】【议】【论】【、】【抒】【情】【句】【,】【巧】【妙】【点】【题】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【二】【、】【观】【点】【鲜】【明】【,】【议】【论】【深】【刻】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【此】【话】【题】【若】【写】【成】【议】【论】【文】【,】【要】【恰】【当】【运】【用】【道】【理】【和】【事】【例】【论】【据】【,】【来】【表】【达】【我】【们】【对】【“】【帮】【助】【”】【这】【一】【社】【会】【风】【尚】【的】【见】【解】【,】【做】【到】【观】【点】【鲜】【明】【,】【议】【论】【深】【刻】【。】【你】【可】【尝】【试】【运】【用】【以】【下】【观】【点】【:】【帮】【助】【别】【人】【,】【也】【能】【快】【乐】【自】【己】【;】【受】【到】【帮】【助】【,】【我】【们】【要】【学】【会】【感】【恩】【,】【学】【会】【用】【感】【恩】【的】【心】【去】【面】【对】【帮】【助】【我】【们】【的】【人】【;】【帮】【助】【是】【一】【种】【自】【愿】【的】【行】【为】【,】【可】【以】【给】【我】【们】【以】【信】【心】【和】【力】【量】【;】【帮】【助】【是】【一】【种】【美】【好】【的】【境】【界】【,】【可】【以】【使】【我】【们】【走】【向】【善】【良】【;】【帮】【助】【也】【是】【一】【种】【美】【德】【,】【可】【以】【让】【受】【到】【帮】【助】【的】【人】【终】【生】【回】【味】【等】【等】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【[】【佳】【作】【一】【]】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【学】【会】【接】【受】【帮】【助】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【●】【莱】【西】【市】【孙】【受】【中】【学】【董】【晓】【东】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【人】【难】【免】【遇】【到】【困】【难】【,】【难】【免】【需】【要】【别】【人】【的】【帮】【助】【。】【或】【是】【一】【双】【友】【爱】【的】【援】【助】【之】【手】【,】【或】【是】【一】【句】【温】【馨】【的】【话】【语】【,】【或】【是】【一】【个】【善】【意】【的】【微】【笑】【,】【甚】【至】【是】【一】【个】【鼓】【励】【的】【眼】【神】【,】【都】【是】【我】【们】【想】【要】【的】【。】【你】【怀】【着】【感】【激】【的】【心】【接】【受】【了】【这】【些】【帮】【助】【,】【就】【顺】【利】【地】【越】【过】【前】【进】【路】【上】【的】【沟】【沟】【坎】【坎】【。】【可】【是】【接】【受】【帮】【助】【有】【时】【也】【不】【是】【一】【件】【简】【单】【的】【事】【。】【有】【的】【人】【自】【以】【为】【有】【自】【尊】【心】【,】【宁】【肯】【在】【困】【难】【面】【前】【徘】【徊】【不】【前】【,】【也】【不】【肯】【接】【受】【别】【人】【的】【帮】【助】【,】【这】【种】【人】【是】【“】【死】【要】【面】【子】【活】【受】【罪】【”】【。】【有】【的】【人】【则】【遇】【到】【困】【难】【就】【往】【别】【人】【身】【上】【靠】【,】【一】【副】【软】【骨】【头】【的】【样】【子】【。】【看】【来】【,】【我】【们】【还】【真】【有】【必】【要】【学】【会】【如】【何】【接】【受】【别】【人】【的】【帮】【助】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【有】【了】【困】【难】【,】【向】【人】【求】【援】【,】【接】【受】【别】【人】【的】【帮】【助】【,】【这】【没】【什】【么】【可】【羞】【耻】【的】【。】【当】【我】【们】【在】【学】【习】【中】【遇】【到】【困】【难】【时】【,】【孔】【子】【教】【导】【我】【们】【要】【“】【不】【耻】【下】【问】【”】【,】【你】【看】【,】【在】【孔】【子】【心】【目】【中】【向】【地】【位】【比】【自】【己】【低】【的】【人】【请】【求】【帮】【助】【尚】【且】【不】【必】【以】【为】【耻】【,】【更】【何】【况】【向】【同】【学】【、】【朋】【友】【,】【向】【父】【母】【、】【师】【长】【求】【援】【呢】【?】【做】【作】【业】【遇】【到】【了】【难】【题】【,】【一】【时】【解】【不】【出】【来】【,】【请】【同】【学】【帮】【帮】【忙】【,】【理】【清】【了】【思】【路】【,】【找】【到】【了】【解】【题】【的】【方】【法】【,】【这】【样】【既】【解】【决】【了】【问】【题】【又】【节】【省】【了】【时】【间】【,】【何】【乐】【而】【不】【为】【呢】【?】【生】【活】【上】【有】【了】【困】【难】【,】【跟】【同】【学】【说】【说】【,】【有】【的】【帮】【你】【解】【决】【点】【实】【际】【困】【难】【,】【有】【的】【给】【你】【点】【安】【慰】【,】【使】【你】【更】【充】【满】【信】【心】【地】【去】【克】【服】【困】【难】【,】【这】【有】【多】【好】【,】【为】【什】【么】【要】【拒】【绝】【呢】【?】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【当】【然】【,】【接】【受】【帮】【助】【的】【时】【候】【,】【的】【确】【有】【个】【自】【尊】【自】【爱】【的】【问】【题】【。】【在】【现】【实】【生】【活】【中】【,】【我】【们】【常】【见】【到】【有】【些】【四】【肢】【健】【全】【的】【乞】【丐】【,】【或】【装】【出】【痛】【苦】【的】【样】【子】【,】【或】【挤】【出】【谄】【媚】【的】【笑】【容】【,】【厚】【着】【脸】【皮】【向】【路】【人】【乞】【讨】【,】【那】【是】【真】【的】【丧】【失】【了】【自】【尊】【,】【那】【是】【拿】【自】【己】【的】【尊】【严】【去】【换】【钱】【。】【这】【当】【然】【是】【令】【人】【不】【齿】【的】【。】【我】【们】【不】【帮】【他】【,】【也】【无】【可】【厚】【非】【,】【但】【在】【现】【实】【生】【活】【中】【,】【确】【实】【有】【那】【种】【以】【救】【世】【主】【自】【居】【的】【人】【,】【他】【们】【怀】【着】【鄙】【夷】【和】【不】【屑】【神】【情】【,】【甚】【至】【带】【有】【附】【加】【条】【件】【地】【要】【给】【你】【点】【帮】【助】【,】【对】【此】【我】【们】【当】【然】【要】【拿】【出】【骨】【气】【,】【不】【能】【接】【受】【这】【“】【嗟】【来】【之】【食】【”】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【接】【受】【别】【人】【的】【帮】【助】【,】【是】【为】【了】【渡】【过】【眼】【前】【的】【难】【关】【,】【而】【真】【正】【要】【渡】【过】【难】【关】【,】【还】【要】【靠】【自】【己】【的】【努】【力】【。】【渡】【过】【难】【关】【之】【后】【,】【更】【需】【要】【自】【己】【加】【倍】【的】【努】【力】【,】【绝】【不】【能】【滋】【长】【依】【赖】【的】【思】【想】【。】【俗】【话】【说】【:】【“】【救】【急】【不】【救】【穷】【”】【,】【这】【是】【说】【别】【人】【能】【帮】【你】【一】【时】【,】【不】【能】【帮】【你】【一】【世】【。】【我】【们】【可】【以】【依】【靠】【别】【人】【的】【帮】【助】【渡】【过】【难】【关】【,】【但】【绝】【不】【可】【能】【依】【赖】【别】【人】【的】【帮】【助】【度】【过】【一】【生】【。】【德】【国】【的】【布】【莱】【西】【特】【说】【过】【:】【“】【不】【管】【我】【们】【踩】【着】【什】【么】【高】【跷】【,】【没】【有】【自】【己】【的】【脚】【是】【不】【行】【的】【。】【”】【也】【许】【你】【有】【富】【裕】【的】【家】【境】【,】【也】【许】【你】【有】【身】【在】【仕】【途】【的】【父】【母】【,】【也】【许】【你】【的】【家】【人】【已】【为】【你】【铺】【就】【好】【了】【人】【生】【路】【,】【这】【些】【用】【金】【钱】【、】【地】【位】【、】【宠】【爱】【做】【成】【的】【“】【高】【跷】【”】【会】【使】【你】【在】【人】【生】【路】【上】【昂】【首】【阔】【步】【,】【可】【一】【旦】【“】【高】【跷】【”】【倒】【了】【,】【你】【便】【会】【重】【重】【地】【摔】【在】【地】【上】【,】【除】【了】【鼻】【青】【脸】【肿】【外】【一】【无】【所】【有】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【当】【然】【,】【接】【受】【了】【别】【人】【的】【帮】【助】【,】【还】【应】【当】【心】【存】【感】【激】【。】【“】【滴】【水】【之】【恩】【,】【当】【涌】【泉】【相】【报】【”】【,】【这】【是】【一】【种】【美】【德】【。】【我】【们】【要】【感】【激】【帮】【助】【自】【己】【的】【人】【,】【更】【要】【努】【力】【实】【践】【助】【人】【者】【的】【爱】【心】【,】【也】【给】【周】【围】【的】【人】【多】【一】【些】【关】【心】【,】【多】【一】【些】【帮】【助】【。】【我】【们】【学】【会】【了】【接】【受】【别】【人】【的】【帮】【助】【,】【还】【要】【学】【会】【去】【帮】【助】【别】【人】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【这】【是】【一】【篇】【议】【论】【文】【,】【紧】【扣】【话】【题】【,】【题】【目】【就】【是】【中】【心】【论】【点】【,】【鲜】【明】【简】【洁】【。】【文】【章】【层】【次】【清】【楚】【:】【第】【一】【段】【提】【出】【问】【题】【,】【指】【出】【对】【如】【何】【接】【受】【帮】【助】【上】【两】【种】【错】【误】【的】【态】【度】【—】【—】【拒】【绝】【帮】【助】【和】【依】【赖】【帮】【助】【;】【第】【二】【段】【正】【面】【阐】【述】【应】【当】【乐】【意】【接】【受】【帮】【助】【;】【第】【三】【段】【阐】【明】【接】【受】【帮】【助】【与】【自】【尊】【自】【爱】【的】【关】【系】【,】【指】【出】【要】【拒】【绝】【那】【种】【有】【损】【自】【尊】【的】【“】【帮】【助】【”】【;】【第】【四】【段】【阐】【述】【不】【能】【滋】【长】【依】【赖】【思】【想】【;】【最】【后】【一】【段】【把】【思】【想】【内】【容】【推】【进】【一】【步】【—】【—】【接】【受】【帮】【助】【,】【还】【要】【努】【力】【实】【践】【助】【人】【者】【的】【爱】【心】【。】【全】【文】【构】【思】【缜】【密】【,】【语】【言】【流】【畅】【灵】【动】【,】【节】【奏】【和】【谐】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【(】【指】【导】【、】【点】【评】【老】【师】【:】【吴】【培】【光】【)】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【[】【佳】【作】【二】【]】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【学】【会】【帮】【助】【别】【人】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【“】【杯】【水】【车】【薪】【”】【这】【成】【语】【是】【说】【一】【车】【柴】【着】【了】【火】【,】【有】【人】【拿】【一】【杯】【水】【去】【救】【,】【这】【当】【然】【无】【济】【于】【事】【。】【我】【们】【且】【撇】【开】【结】【果】【不】【说】【,】【单】【就】【这】【人】【的】【做】【法】【看】【,】【他】【有】【一】【腔】【热】【情】【想】【帮】【助】【别】【人】【,】【难】【能】【可】【贵】【,】【但】【没】【能】【收】【到】【预】【期】【的】【效】【果】【。】【可】【见】【要】【帮】【助】【别】【人】【而】【且】【要】【有】【效】【果】【,】【还】【是】【有】【点】【学】【问】【的】【,】【还】【是】【需】【要】【学】【习】【的】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【首】【先】【要】【有】【诚】【心】【,】【所】【谓】【“】【精】【诚】【所】【至】【,】【金】【石】【为】【开】【”】【。】【你】【真】【心】【实】【意】【地】【帮】【助】【人】【,】【人】【家】【才】【会】【乐】【意】【接】【受】【帮】【助】【。】【读】【初】【二】【时】【,】【一】【个】【同】【学】【因】【为】【对】【学】【习】【失】【去】【信】【心】【,】【辍】【学】【回】【家】【。】【我】【们】【几】【个】【同】【学】【去】【动】【员】【他】【回】【来】【,】【我】【们】【说】【了】【许】【多】【关】【于】【读】【书】【的】【大】【道】【理】【,】【那】【同】【学】【就】【是】【一】【句】【也】【听】【不】【进】【去】【。】【我】【们】【不】【灰】【心】【,】【又】【去】【了】【几】【次】【,】【我】【们】【不】【再】【说】【大】【道】【理】【,】【而】【是】【真】【心】【实】【意】【地】【帮】【他】【分】【析】【学】【习】【不】【好】【的】【原】【因】【,】【真】【心】【实】【意】【地】【表】【示】【要】【帮】【助】【他】【补】【习】【功】【课】【,】【最】【后】【,】【他】【回】【校】【了】【。】【他】【说】【:】【“】【我】【被】【你】【们】【的】【真】【诚】【感】【动】【了】【。】【”】【帮】【助】【人】【本】【来】【就】【是】【送】【温】【暖】【,】【只】【有】【真】【诚】【的】【心】【才】【能】【带】【去】【温】【暖】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【其】【次】【,】【要】【有】【平】【等】【心】【。】【帮】【助】【别】【人】【,】【最】【不】【能】【怀】【着】【施】【舍】【的】【心】【理】【,】【把】【自】【己】【当】【成】【救】【世】【主】【。】【有】【困】【难】【的】【人】【,】【并】【不】【都】【是】【丧】【失】【尊】【严】【、】【人】【格】【的】【人】【,】【“】【嗟】【来】【之】【食】【”】【是】【经】【常】【会】【遭】【到】【拒】【绝】【的】【。】【乞】【丐】【缠】【着】【人】【乞】【讨】【,】【那】【人】【鄙】【夷】【不】【屑】【地】【扔】【给】【他】【一】【个】【硬】【币】【。】【我】【常】【想】【,】【乞】【丐】【固】【然】【丧】【失】【了】【尊】【严】【、】【人】【格】【,】【但】【那】【人】【在】【扔】【硬】【币】【的】【时】【候】【,】【不】【也】【把】【自】【己】【的】【尊】【严】【、】【人】【格】【扔】【掉】【了】【吗】【?】【古】【训】【有】【“】【施】【人】【慎】【勿】【念】【”】【,】【我】【们】【给】【别】【人】【一】【点】【帮】【助】【,】【应】【当】【出】【自】【平】【等】【心】【,】【如】【果】【把】【给】【人】【的】【一】【点】【帮】【助】【老】【挂】【在】【心】【上】【,】【那】【你】【就】【不】【是】【在】【帮】【助】【人】【,】【而】【是】【在】【做】【一】【笔】【买】【卖】【了】【。】【虽】【然】【说】【“】【滴】【水】【之】【恩】【,】【当】【涌】【泉】【相】【报】【”】【,】【但】【那】【是】【被】【帮】【助】【者】【的】【感】【激】【之】【心】【,】【不】【是】【我】【们】【帮】【助】【人】【的】【出】【发】【点】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【帮】【助】【人】【还】【要】【讲】【究】【方】【式】【方】【法】【。】【古】【语】【云】【:】【“】【授】【之】【以】【鱼】【,】【不】【如】【授】【之】【以】【渔】【。】【”】【就】【是】【说】【,】【帮】【人】【要】【帮】【在】【点】【子】【上】【,】【最】【好】【的】【帮】【助】【不】【仅】【要】【帮】【人】【解】【决】【燃】【眉】【之】【急】【,】【更】【要】【帮】【人】【自】【立】【自】【强】【。】【一】【个】【商】【人】【遇】【见】【一】【个】【落】【魄】【的】【铅】【笔】【推】【销】【员】【,】【他】【给】【推】【销】【员】【1】【0】【元】【钱】【,】【拿】【起】【了】【一】【支】【铅】【笔】【,】【然】【后】【对】【推】【销】【员】【说】【:】【“】【你】【和】【我】【一】【样】【也】【是】【个】【商】【人】【。】【”】【几】【年】【后】【,】【两】【人】【相】【遇】【,】【推】【销】【员】【真】【的】【成】【了】【颇】【有】【成】【就】【的】【商】【人】【,】【他】【感】【激】【地】【对】【那】【名】【商】【人】【说】【:】【“】【是】【你】【给】【了】【我】【自】【尊】【。】【”】【我】【想】【,】【当】【年】【那】【个】【商】【人】【是】【很】【懂】【得】【助】【人】【的】【方】【法】【的】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【在】【相】【当】【长】【的】【一】【段】【时】【间】【里】【,】【我】【们】【的】【扶】【贫】【工】【作】【只】【是】【财】【政】【拨】【款】【、】【发】【动】【民】【众】【捐】【钱】【捐】【物】【,】【这】【确】【实】【也】【解】【决】【了】【一】【时】【的】【困】【难】【,】【但】【没】【能】【从】【根】【本】【上】【解】【决】【贫】【困】【地】【区】【的】【落】【后】【问】【题】【。】【如】【今】【,】【实】【施】【科】【技】【扶】【贫】【、】【文】【化】【扶】【贫】【,】【帮】【助】【贫】【困】【地】【区】【从】【实】【际】【出】【发】【,】【发】【挥】【优】【势】【,】【挖】【掘】【潜】【力】【,】【发】【展】【经】【济】【,】【变】【“】【输】【血】【”】【为】【“】【造】【血】【”】【,】【这】【才】【是】【真】【正】【的】【扶】【贫】【,】【真】【正】【的】【帮】【助】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【帮】【助】【别】【人】【无】【疑】【是】【一】【种】【美】【德】【,】【但】【是】【如】【果】【不】【讲】【究】【方】【式】【方】【法】【,】【有】【时】【结】【果】【会】【适】【得】【其】【反】【。】【人】【们】【常】【常】【惊】【叹】【现】【在】【娇】【生】【惯】【养】【的】【孩】【子】【多】【了】【,】【其】【实】【这】【怨】【不】【得】【孩】【子】【,】【过】【错】【在】【孩】【子】【的】【家】【长】【身】【上】【。】【家】【庭】【的】【收】【入】【多】【了】【,】【生】【养】【的】【孩】【子】【少】【了】【,】【家】【长】【的】【溺】【爱】【多】【了】【,】【正】【确】【的】【教】【育】【少】【了】【,】【想】【不】【娇】【生】【惯】【养】【都】【难】【。】【所】【以】【,】【帮】【助】【别】【人】【时】【大】【包】【大】【揽】【,】【越】【俎】【代】【庖】【,】【这】【样】【你】【也】【许】【能】【享】【受】【到】【助】【人】【的】【乐】【趣】【,】【可】【是】【受】【帮】【助】【的】【人】【却】【可】【能】【因】【此】【产】【生】【依】【赖】【的】【思】【想】【。】【那】【么】【你】【就】【不】【是】【在】【帮】【助】【一】【个】【人】【,】【而】【可】【能】【是】【在】【毁】【掉】【一】【个】【人】【。】【这】【绝】【不】【是】【危】【言】【耸】【听】【,】【世】【上】【被】【父】【母】【的】【溺】【爱】【毁】【掉】【的】【孩】【子】【还】【少】【吗】【?】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【我】【们】【要】【弘】【扬】【助】【人】【为】【乐】【的】【精】【神】【,】【但】【我】【们】【首】【先】【要】【学】【会】【如】【何】【正】【确】【地】【帮】【助】【人】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【本】【文】【能】【紧】【扣】【话】【题】【,】【论】【点】【鲜】【明】【,】【内】【容】【集】【中】【。】【作】【者】【先】【提】【出】【帮】【助】【人】【也】【需】【要】【学】【习】【的】【问】【题】【,】【然】【后】【罗】【列】【了】【三】【个】【理】【由】【,】【重】【点】【谈】【要】【讲】【究】【方】【式】【方】【法】【,】【详】【略】【得】【当】【。】【能】【对】【一】【个】【问】【题】【作】【出】【分】【析】【,】【这】【是】【很】【可】【贵】【的】【。】【议】【论】【中】【观】【点】【统】【率】【材】【料】【,】【材】【料】【为】【观】【点】【服】【务】【,】【处】【理】【得】【比】【较】【好】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【(】【指】【导】【、】【点】【评】【老】【师】【:】【吴】【培】【光】【)】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【[】【素】【材】【链】【接】【]】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【1】【.】【 】【一】【个】【小】【孩】【儿】【在】【草】【地】【上】【发】【现】【了】【一】【个】【蛹】【,】【他】【把】【它】【带】【回】【了】【家】【。】【过】【了】【几】【天】【,】【蛹】【上】【出】【现】【了】【一】【道】【小】【裂】【缝】【,】【里】【面】【的】【蝴】【蝶】【在】【挣】【扎】【着】【,】【但】【身】【体】【似】【乎】【被】【卡】【住】【了】【,】【出】【不】【来】【。】【小】【孩】【儿】【看】【着】【于】【心】【不】【忍】【,】【于】【是】【,】【他】【拿】【起】【剪】【刀】【把】【蛹】【壳】【剪】【开】【,】【帮】【助】【蝴】【蝶】【脱】【蛹】【而】【出】【。】【可】【是】【,】【这】【只】【蝴】【蝶】【身】【躯】【臃】【肿】【,】【翅】【膀】【瘪】【小】【,】【根】【本】【飞】【不】【起】【来】【。】【小】【孩】【儿】【内】【疚】【地】【把】【它】【捧】【回】【草】【地】【上】【…】【…】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【2】【.】【 】【著】【名】【歌】【手】【丛】【飞】【利】【用】【自】【己】【的】【演】【出】【所】【得】【捐】【资】【3】【0】【0】【万】【,】【资】【助】【了】【1】【7】【8】【个】【贫】【困】【学】【生】【,】【但】【当】【丛】【飞】【患】【胃】【癌】【时】【,】【他】【所】【捐】【助】【的】【在】【本】【地】【已】【经】【完】【成】【学】【业】【的】【学】【生】【却】【没】【有】【一】【个】【人】【来】【看】【他】【,】【媒】【体】【报】【道】【后】【,】【其】【中】【一】【个】【曾】【接】【受】【过】【他】【的】【捐】【助】【的】【学】【生】【居】【然】【埋】【怨】【说】【这】【让】【他】【们】【很】【没】【面】【子】【。】【丛】【飞】【却】【说】【别】【责】【怪】【他】【们】【,】【我】【已】【经】【是】【不】【需】【要】【治】【疗】【的】【人】【了】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【3】【.】【 】【华】【农】【大】【的】【一】【个】【学】【生】【把】【收】【废】【品】【挣】【的】【钱】【全】【部】【捐】【献】【给】【一】【所】【希】【望】【小】【学】【,】【帮】【助】【学】【生】【上】【学】【,】【而】【后】【自】【己】【却】【被】【查】【出】【患】【有】【白】【血】【病】【。】【一】【名】【受】【捐】【助】【的】【学】【生】【得】【知】【此】【事】【,】【将】【自】【己】【辛】【辛】【苦】【苦】【攒】【的】【1】【0】【元】【压】【岁】【钱】【全】【部】【捐】【献】【给】【了】【她】【。】【有】【人】【问】【这】【个】【孩】【子】【为】【什】【么】【捐】【这】【么】【多】【钱】【。】【孩】【子】【说】【就】【是】【做】【到】【了】【姐】【姐】【说】【的】【一】【句】【话】【。】【记】【者】【问】【姐】【姐】【说】【的】【是】【什】【么】【。】【孩】【子】【说】【姐】【姐】【说】【过】【:】【当】【别】【人】【帮】【助】【自】【己】【的】【时】【候】【,】【你】【也】【要】【学】【会】【帮】【助】【别】【人】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【4】【.】【 】【《】【伊】【索】【寓】【言】【》】【中】【有】【一】【个】【《】【马】【和】【驴】【》】【的】【故】【事】【。】【某】【人】【有】【一】【匹】【马】【和】【一】【头】【驴】【,】【在】【旅】【途】【中】【,】【驴】【对】【马】【说】【:】【“】【你】【如】【果】【肯】【救】【我】【一】【命】【,】【请】【分】【担】【一】【点】【我】【的】【负】【担】【。】【”】【马】【不】【听】【。】【驴】【精】【疲】【力】【竭】【,】【倒】【下】【死】【了】【。】【主】【人】【把】【所】【有】【的】【货】【物】【,】【连】【同】【那】【张】【驴】【皮】【,】【都】【放】【在】【马】【背】【上】【。】【马】【哭】【着】【说】【:】【“】【真】【倒】【霉】【!】【我】【怎】【么】【这】【样】【不】【幸】【!】【我】【不】【肯】【分】【担】【一】【点】【负】【担】【,】【却】【驮】【上】【了】【所】【有】【的】【货】【物】【,】【还】【加】【上】【这】【张】【皮】【!】【”】【帮】【助】【别】【人】【也】【是】【帮】【助】【自】【己】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】全国污染源普查条例【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【当】【明】【媚】【的】【阳】【光】【再】【次】【照】【到】【我】【们】【灿】【烂】【的】【脸】【庞】【时】【,】【他】【已】【经】【来】【到】【我】【们】【身】【边】【三】【周】【了】【,】【他】【像】【一】【杯】【清】【爽】【的】【可】【乐】【,】【成】【了】【我】【们】【平】【静】【的】【学】【习】【生】【活】【中】【鲜】【活】【的】【调】【味】【剂】【。】【在】【温】【暖】【的】【春】【日】【里】【,】【唤】【醒】【了】【我】【们】【沉】【沉】【欲】【睡】【的】【英】【语】【细】【胞】【,】【犹】【如】【给】【它】【们】【注】【入】【了】【“】【咖】【啡】【因】【”】【,】【让】【英】【语】【细】【胞】【在】【这】【个】【季】【节】【里】【兴】【奋】【起】【来】【了】【。】【—】【—】【题】【记】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【“】【唉】【,】【你】【听】【说】【了】【没】【有】【,】【今】【天】【下】【午】【第】【三】【节】【课】【,】【是】【那】【个】【来】【自】【非】【洲】【的】【外】【教】【讲】【课】【耶】【!】【”】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【“】【对】【,】【对】【,】【好】【像】【叫】【T】【o】【m】【n】【y】【,】【听】【起】【来】【好】【像】【‘】【淘】【米】【’】【,】【真】【逗】【!】【”】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【“】【哈】【哈】【,】【不】【就】【是】【学】【校】【新】【招】【的】【那】【个】【老】【外】【吗】【!】【中】【文】【名】【字】【叫】【左】【大】【伟】【,】【真】【好】【玩】【,】【怎】【么】【不】【叫】【右】【大】【伟】【,】【或】【左】【小】【伟】【!】【”】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【人】【群】【中】【迸】【发】【出】【一】【阵】【开】【心】【的】【笑】【声】【…】【…】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【看】【来】【这】【个】【非】【洲】【的】【外】【教】【—】【—】【T】【o】【m】【n】【y】【还】【是】【很】【受】【关】【注】【的】【,】【刚】【来】【一】【周】【,】【关】【注】【率】【达】【百】【分】【之】【百】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【铃】【铃】【铃】【…】【…】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【随】【着】【清】【脆】【的】【上】【课】【铃】【声】【,】【外】【教】【拎】【着】【教】【案】【健】【步】【走】【上】【讲】【台】【,】【同】【学】【们】【早】【已】【坐】【到】【坐】【位】【上】【,】【怀】【着】【好】【奇】【的】【心】【情】【安】【静】【地】【注】【视】【着】【外】【教】【的】【到】【来】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【小】【脑】【袋】【、】【大】【眼】【睛】【、】【厚】【嘴】【唇】【、】【白】【牙】【齿】【、】【高】【个】【子】【、】【黑】【皮】【肤】【,】【还】【真】【有】【个】【性】【、】【引】【人】【注】【目】【呢】【!】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【“】【H】【e】【l】【l】【o】【,】【 】【e】【v】【e】【r】【y】【o】【n】【e】【,】【 】【m】【y】【 】【E】【n】【g】【l】【i】【s】【h】【 】【n】【a】【m】【e】【 】【i】【s】【 】【T】【o】【m】【n】【y】【,】【 】【y】【o】【u】【 】【k】【n】【o】【w】【 】【m】【y】【 】【C】【h】【i】【n】【e】【s】【e】【 】【n】【a】【m】【e】【 】【i】【s】【 】【Z】【u】【o】【 】【D】【a】【w】【e】【i】【.】【”】【随】【后】【他】【很】【不】【自】【然】【地】【用】【他】【那】【“】【特】【别】【”】【的】【字】【体】【书】【写】【出】【“】【左】【大】【伟】【”】【三】【个】【汉】【字】【,】【活】【像】【个】【稚】【童】【的】【“】【天】【书】【”】【,】【实】【在】【不】【敢】【恭】【维】【,】【真】【让】【我】【们】【忍】【俊】【不】【禁】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【他】【转】【过】【身】【来】【了】【,】【也】【莫】【名】【其】【妙】【地】【笑】【了】【,】【有】【些】【不】【好】【意】【思】【地】【说】【:】【“】【I】【?】【蒺】【m】【 】【n】【o】【t】【 】【g】【o】【o】【d】【 】【a】【t】【 】【C】【h】【i】【n】【e】【s】【e】【.】【 】【I】【t】【 】【i】【s】【 】【v】【e】【r】【y】【 】【h】【a】【r】【d】【!】【 】【S】【o】【 】【y】【o】【u】【 】【t】【e】【a】【c】【h】【 】【m】【e】【 】【C】【h】【i】【n】【e】【s】【e】【 】【a】【n】【d】【 】【I】【 】【t】【e】【a】【c】【h】【 】【e】【v】【e】【r】【y】【o】【n】【e】【 】【E】【n】【g】【l】【i】【s】【h】【!】【 】【O】【K】【?】【”】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【同】【学】【们】【的】【脸】【上】【溢】【满】【了】【笑】【容】【,】【用】【夸】【张】【的】【语】【调】【挤】【眉】【弄】【眼】【地】【对】【T】【o】【m】【n】【y】【说】【:】【“】【O】【K】【!】【”】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【T】【o】【m】【n】【y】【笑】【了】【,】【很】【天】【真】【,】【稚】【气】【,】【从】【他】【真】【诚】【的】【目】【光】【里】【,】【我】【能】【感】【应】【到】【对】【我】【们】【传】【达】【的】【丝】【丝】【善】【意】【,】【忽】【然】【就】【觉】【得】【眼】【前】【的】【T】【o】【m】【n】【y】【很】【可】【亲】【可】【爱】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【随】【后】【课】【堂】【气】【氛】【很】【活】【跃】【,】【同】【学】【们】【积】【极】【地】【向】【T】【o】【m】【n】【y】【提】【问】【题】【,】【去】【询】【问】【他】【,】【有】【几】【次】【,】【T】【o】【m】【n】【y】【被】【同】【学】【们】【问】【得】【不】【知】【所】【措】【,】【也】【像】【个】【孩】【子】【似】【的】【抓】【耳】【挠】【腮】【,】【显】【得】【有】【些】【尴】【尬】【。】【看】【到】【他】【这】【个】【样】【子】【,】【我】【们】【又】【忍】【不】【住】【笑】【了】【起】【来】【,】【他】【也】【不】【好】【意】【思】【地】【笑】【了】【,】【于】【是】【爽】【朗】【的】【笑】【声】【在】【教】【室】【里】【回】【荡】【…】【…】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【以】【后】【的】【两】【周】【外】【教】【课】【,】【同】【学】【们】【与】【T】【o】【m】【n】【y】【配】【合】【得】【越】【加】【默】【契】【,】【他】【还】【常】【常】【教】【我】【们】【唱】【英】【语】【歌】【曲】【,】【一】【起】【做】【游】【戏】【,】【进】【行】【口】【语】【对】【话】【训】【练】【,】【我】【们】【那】【些】【沉】【沉】【欲】【睡】【的】【英】【语】【细】【胞】【被】【悄】【悄】【地】【激】【活】【了】【,】【英】【语】【学】【习】【在】【不】【知】【不】【觉】【中】【开】【始】【进】【入】【最】【佳】【的】【状】【态】【。】【渐】【渐】【地】【我】【们】【接】【受】【了】【这】【个】【不】【同】【肤】【色】【、】【不】【同】【国】【籍】【的】【T】【o】【m】【n】【y】【,】【这】【个】【阳】【光】【般】【的】【非】【洲】【大】【男】【孩】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【自】【从】【T】【o】【m】【n】【y】【来】【到】【我】【们】【班】【之】【后】【,】【在】【他】【用】【稚】【幼】【的】【笔】【体】【写】【下】【他】【中】【文】【名】【字】【的】【时】【候】【,】【在】【他】【说】【中】【国】【话】【逗】【我】【们】【笑】【的】【时】【候】【,】【在】【他】【用】【真】【诚】【友】【善】【的】【眸】【子】【传】【达】【他】【的】【感】【情】【的】【时】【候】【,】【在】【他】【与】【我】【们】【交】【流】【的】【时】【候】【,】【在】【他】【希】【望】【我】【们】【学】【好】【E】【n】【g】【l】【i】【s】【h】【的】【时】【候】【…】【…】【T】【o】【m】【n】【y】【就】【已】【经】【进】【入】【了】【我】【们】【的】【心】【田】【,】【我】【们】【之】【间】【种】【下】【了】【友】【谊】【的】【种】【子】【,】【它】【在】【生】【根】【、】【发】【芽】【、】【开】【花】【结】【果】【。】【我】【们】【学】【习】【英】【语】【的】【兴】【趣】【和】【T】【o】【m】【n】【y】【友】【情】【与】【日】【俱】【增】【。】【“】【喜】【欢】【和】【爱】【好】【”】【是】【一】【对】【孪】【生】【的】【好】【老】【师】【,】【这】【个】【“】【好】【老】【师】【”】【是】【T】【o】【m】【n】【y】【送】【给】【我】【们】【的】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【(】【指】【导】【老】【师】【:】【刘】【惜】【春】【)】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【消】【灭】【错】【别】【字】【!】【!】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【同】【学】【们】【,】【错】【别】【字】【又】【来】【了】【,】【大】【家】【可】【要】【注】【意】【了】【!】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【在】【同】【学】【们】【的】【文】【章】【中】【,】【我】【们】【发】【现】【了】【很】【多】【错】【别】【字】【。】【比】【如】【有】【的】【同】【学】【将】【“】【描】【摹】【”】【写】【成】【了】【“】【描】【摩】【”】【,】【这】【是】【不】【对】【的】【。】【因】【为】【“】【描】【摹】【”】【有】【两】【层】【意】【思】【。】【一】【个】【是】【指】【照】【着】【底】【样】【写】【和】【画】【。】【另】【一】【个】【是】【说】【用】【语】【言】【文】【字】【表】【现】【人】【或】【事】【物】【的】【形】【象】【、】【特】【性】【等】【,】【如】【:】【小】【说】【和】【戏】【剧】【常】【常】【用】【对】【话】【描】【摹】【个】【人】【的】【性】【格】【。】【而】【“】【描】【摩】【”】【属】【于】【生】【造】【词】【,】【是】【不】【存】【在】【的】【,】【是】【错】【误】【的】【,】【同】【学】【们】【一】【定】【要】【注】【意】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【有】【的】【同】【学】【们】【将】【“】【缥】【缈】【”】【 】【写】【成】【了】【“】【飘】【缈】【”】【。】【“】【缥】【缈】【”】【是】【形】【容】【隐】【隐】【约】【约】【,】【若】【有】【若】【无】【,】【如】【虚】【无】【缥】【缈】【、】【云】【雾】【缥】【缈】【等】【。】【“】【缥】【缈】【”】【 】【也】【可】【以】【写】【成】【“】【飘】【渺】【”】【,】【但】【就】【是】【没】【有】【“】【飘】【缈】【”】【一】【词】【,】【它】【是】【错】【误】【的】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【有】【人】【还】【把】【“】【淡】【泊】【名】【利】【”】【写】【成】【了】【“】【淡】【薄】【名】【利】【”】【。】【“】【淡】【泊】【名】【利】【”】【独】【指】【的】【是】【不】【追】【求】【名】【利】【。】【而】【“】【淡】【薄】【”】【却】【是】【指】【不】【浓】【、】【不】【厚】【或】【印】【象】【模】【糊】【,】【没】【有】【“】【淡】【泊】【名】【利】【”】【的】【意】【思】【,】【所】【以】【也】【是】【错】【误】【的】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【还】【有】【的】【同】【学】【将】【“】【白】【头】【偕】【老】【”】【写】【成】【了】【“】【白】【头】【谐】【老】【”】【。】【其】【实】【,】【“】【偕】【”】【是】【一】【同】【、】【偕】【同】【的】【意】【思】【。】【而】【“】【谐】【”】【却】【指】【和】【谐】【、】【诙】【谐】【。】【没】【有】【偕】【同】【的】【意】【思】【。】【所】【以】【应】【该】【是】【“】【白】【头】【偕】【老】【”】【。】【大】【家】【要】【记】【住】【了】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【同】【学】【们】【,】【在】【今】【后】【的】【学】【习】【中】【,】【如】【果】【哪】【里】【还】【有】【疑】【问】【,】【可】【以】【马】【上】【写】【信】【给】【我】【们】【,】【我】【们】【一】【定】【会】【帮】【助】【你】【的】【!】【<】【b】【r】【>】

【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【【】【中】【考】【原】【题】【】】【(】【5】【0】【分】【)】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【阅】【读】【下】【面】【材】【料】【,】【按】【要】【求】【作】【文】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【镜】【头】【一】【:】【运】【动】【场】【上】【。】【“】【跳】【高】【健】【将】【”】【王】【山】【纵】【身】【一】【跃】【,】【跨】【过】【了】【1】【.】【5】【米】【的】【横】【竿】【;】【小】【个】【子】【李】【川】【连】【跳】【三】【次】【,】【也】【没】【能】【越】【过】【1】【.】【2】【米】【的】【高】【度】【。】【老】【师】【说】【,】【尽】【力】【去】【跳】【就】【好】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【镜】【头】【二】【:】【春】【游】【途】【中】【。】【在】【一】【处】【悬】【崖】【的】【石】【缝】【里】【,】【生】【长】【着】【一】【棵】【小】【松】【树】【。】【同】【学】【们】【驻】【足】【观】【望】【,】【担】【心】【它】【难】【以】【枝】【繁】【叶】【茂】【。】【老】【师】【说】【,】【尽】【力】【去】【长】【就】【好】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【尽】【力】【而】【为】【就】【好】【。】【这】【一】【点】【引】【起】【你】【哪】【些】【联】【想】【和】【思】【考】【?】【请】【自】【拟】【题】【目】【,】【自】【选】【文】【体】【(】【诗】【歌】【、】【戏】【剧】【除】【外】【)】【,】【写】【一】【篇】【不】【少】【于】【6】【0】【0】【字】【的】【文】【章】【。】【文】【中】【不】【要】【出】【现】【自】【己】【的】【姓】【名】【和】【校】【名】【。】【 】【(】【2】【0】【0】【9】【年】【湖】【北】【武】【汉】【中】【考】【作】【文】【题】【)】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【[】【失】【误】【作】【文】【]】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【有】【时】【,】【我】【也】【想】【做】【淑】【女】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【●】【武】【汉】【一】【考】【生】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【我】【打】【小】【儿】【就】【是】【一】【个】【特】【会】【闹】【腾】【的】【女】【孩】【儿】【。】【我】【妈】【很】【绝】【望】【地】【对】【我】【说】【:】【“】【你】【这】【一】【辈】【子】【也】【别】【想】【和】【‘】【淑】【女】【’】【沾】【上】【边】【了】【!】【”】【那】【会】【儿】【,】【我】【还】【不】【以】【为】【然】【,】【心】【里】【直】【嘀】【咕】【:】【“】【谁】【说】【‘】【淑】【女】【’】【就】【一】【定】【好】【呢】【!】【我】【才】【不】【稀】【罕】【呢】【。】【”】【于】【是】【,】【就】【信】【马】【由】【缰】【地】【活】【蹦】【乱】【跳】【到】【了】【今】【天】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【现】【在】【,】【我】【不】【得】【不】【承】【认】【,】【我】【妈】【那】【句】【话】【的】【确】【是】【对】【的】【。】【否】【则】【,】【我】【也】【不】【会】【有】【现】【在】【这】【么】【多】【的】【无】【奈】【和】【苦】【恼】【了】【!】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【你】【是】【否】【会】【看】【到】【这】【样】【一】【个】【“】【我】【”】【—】【—】【总】【是】【张】【着】【嘴】【,】【眯】【着】【眼】【,】【肆】【无】【忌】【惮】【地】【大】【笑】【不】【止】【。】【周】【围】【的】【人】【都】【以】【一】【种】【异】【样】【的】【眼】【光】【瞪】【着】【我】【,】【内】【心】【忿】【忿】【地】【说】【:】【“】【同】【学】【,】【你】【至】【于】【吗】【?】【别】【笑】【成】【那】【样】【好】【不】【好】【!】【”】【而】【我】【依】【然】【以】【笑】【来】【回】【敬】【他】【们】【,】【直】【到】【笑】【得】【肚】【子】【痛】【才】【罢】【休】【。】【其】【实】【,】【那】【时】【的】【我】【也】【想】【尽】【量】【克】【制】【住】【自】【己】【,】【让】【自】【己】【“】【淑】【女】【”】【一】【回】【,】【做】【到】【笑】【不】【露】【齿】【,】【含】【蓄】【内】【敛】【,】【可】【我】【的】【笑】【声】【早】【就】【溜】【出】【来】【了】【,】【哪】【收】【得】【住】【?】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【你】【是】【否】【会】【看】【到】【这】【样】【一】【个】【“】【我】【”】【—】【—】【走】【起】【路】【来】【蹦】【蹦】【跳】【跳】【,】【脚】【似】【乎】【没】【落】【过】【地】【,】【和】【在】【蹦】【蹦】【床】【上】【走】【路】【没】【什】【么】【两】【样】【。】【同】【时】【,】【手】【臂】【以】【最】【大】【幅】【度】【摆】【动】【着】【,】【似】【乎】【甩】【掉】【了】【我】【都】【不】【会】【心】【疼】【一】【下】【。】【其】【实】【,】【那】【时】【的】【我】【也】【想】【让】【自】【己】【走】【慢】【一】【些】【,】【步】【履】【优】【雅】【些】【,】【让】【自】【己】【“】【淑】【女】【”】【一】【回】【,】【不】【那】【么】【随】【便】【随】【意】【。】【可】【是】【,】【这】【样】【走】【的】【感】【觉】【更】【轻】【松】【惬】【意】【呀】【!】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【你】【是】【否】【还】【会】【看】【到】【这】【样】【一】【个】【“】【我】【”】【—】【—】【在】【网】【上】【同】【人】【聊】【天】【,】【总】【不】【忘】【要】【打】【上】【个】【“】【哈】【哈】【”】【,】【心】【血】【来】【潮】【时】【甚】【至】【用】【很】【大】【号】【的】【字】【。】【和】【陌】【生】【人】【侃】【时】【,】【也】【是】【如】【此】【。】【他】【们】【都】【很】【狐】【疑】【地】【问】【:】【“】【你】【到】【底】【是】【男】【是】【女】【?】【”】【我】【便】【很】【迅】【速】【地】【回】【过】【去】【:】【“】【女】【的】【。】【怎】【么】【了】【?】【”】【我】【甚】【至】【可】【以】【想】【象】【对】【方】【一】【副】【“】【啊】【,】【我】【被】【你】【骗】【了】【”】【的】【神】【情】【。】【其】【实】【,】【那】【时】【的】【我】【何】【尝】【不】【想】【特】【含】【蓄】【地】【说】【“】【呵】【呵】【”】【呢】【?】【这】【样】【比】【较】【符】【合】【一】【个】【淑】【女】【的】【形】【象】【呀】【!】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【正】【如】【老】【妈】【所】【预】【言】【的】【那】【样】【,】【我】【这】【一】【辈】【子】【休】【想】【与】【“】【淑】【女】【”】【沾】【边】【。】【只】【是】【现】【在】【想】【起】【平】【时】【的】【所】【作】【所】【为】【,】【也】【会】【悄】【悄】【地】【希】【望】【自】【己】【偶】【尔】【“】【淑】【女】【”】【一】【回】【,】【哪】【怕】【是】【2】【4】【小】【时】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【【】【望】【闻】【问】【切】【】】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【应】【该】【说】【,】【这】【是】【一】【篇】【不】【错】【的】【考】【场】【作】【文】【。】【文】【章】【选】【取】【了】【三】【个】【片】【断】【:】【肆】【无】【忌】【惮】【地】【大】【笑】【,】【活】【蹦】【乱】【跳】【地】【走】【路】【,】【毫】【无】【遮】【拦】【地】【与】【陌】【生】【人】【聊】【天】【,】【凸】【现】【出】【“】【我】【”】【大】【大】【咧】【咧】【、】【自】【由】【自】【在】【的】【性】【格】【。】【文】【章】【的】【三】【个】【片】【断】【写】【法】【各】【有】【侧】【重】【,】【人】【物】【对】【话】【描】【写】【凸】【显】【人】【物】【性】【格】【;】【心】【理】【描】【写】【细】【腻】【入】【微】【;】【语】【言】【流】【畅】【清】【新】【,】【且】【不】【乏】【有】【文】【采】【的】【句】【子】【;】【文】【章】【结】【构】【严】【谨】【,】【首】【尾】【呼】【应】【。】【仅】【凭】【此】【应】【该】【进】【入】【一】【类】【文】【行】【列】【。】【但】【这】【篇】【文】【章】【最】【终】【被】【打】【入】【二】【类】【文】【的】【行】【列】【。】【其】【中】【原】【因】【,】【可】【用】【“】【差】【之】【毫】【厘】【,】【谬】【以】【千】【里】【”】【概】【括】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【由】【第】【二】【则】【材】【料】【中】【“】【同】【学】【们】【担】【心】【生】【长】【在】【悬】【崖】【的】【石】【缝】【里】【小】【松】【树】【难】【以】【枝】【繁】【叶】【茂】【”】【,】【老】【师】【却】【说】【“】【尽】【力】【去】【长】【就】【好】【”】【,】【将】【这】【句】【的】【言】【外】【之】【意】【理】【解】【为】【:】【只】【要】【悬】【崖】【上】【松】【树】【“】【尽】【力】【长】【就】【好】【”】【,】【至】【于】【能】【否】【长】【成】【参】【天】【大】【树】【,】【无】【关】【紧】【要】【,】【以】【此】【可】【顺】【理】【成】【章】【地】【将】【材】【料】【主】【旨】【引】【申】【为】【“】【做】【本】【色】【的】【自】【我】【”】【。】【文】【章】【的】【毛】【病】【表】【现】【为】【:】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【1】【.】【 】【眉】【眼】【处】【错】【误】【点】【题】【。】【如】【,】【第】【二】【自】【然】【段】【画】【龙】【点】【睛】【“】【也】【不】【会】【有】【现】【在】【这】【么】【多】【的】【无】【奈】【和】【苦】【恼】【”】【一】【句】【,】【既】【为】【自】【己】【大】【大】【咧】【咧】【的】【性】【格】【而】【后】【悔】【,】【也】【彻】【底】【地】【否】【认】【了】【“】【做】【一】【个】【大】【大】【咧】【咧】【、】【自】【由】【自】【在】【”】【“】【本】【色】【自】【我】【”】【的】【欣】【慰】【。】【更】【痛】【心】【的】【是】【,】【考】【生】【还】【在】【结】【尾】【处】【再】【次】【强】【化】【般】【的】【亮】【明】【自】【己】【的】【旗】【帜】【:】【为】【自】【己】【大】【大】【咧】【咧】【的】【性】【格】【后】【悔】【,】【希】【望】【自】【己】【做】【一】【个】【真】【正】【的】【淑】【女】【,】【“】【哪】【怕】【是】【2】【4】【小】【时】【”】【,】【让】【人】【扼】【腕】【痛】【惜】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【2】【.】【 】【文】【章】【标】【题】【需】【要】【改】【头】【换】【面】【。】【标】【题】【《】【有】【时】【,】【我】【也】【想】【淑】【女】【一】【回】【》】【,】【表】【意】【相】【反】【,】【让】【人】【明】【显】【地】【感】【到】【失】【落】【和】【后】【悔】【,】【与】【文】【章】【内】【容】【矛】【盾】【,】【这】【是】【原】【则】【问】【题】【,】【需】【要】【改】【头】【换】【面】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【3】【.】【 】【细】【微】【处】【也】【需】【修】【改】【。】【文】【章】【倒】【数】【第】【二】【自】【然】【段】【“】【其】【实】【,】【那】【时】【的】【我】【何】【尝】【不】【想】【特】【含】【蓄】【地】【说】【‘】【呵】【呵】【’】【呢】【?】【这】【样】【比】【较】【符】【合】【一】【个】【淑】【女】【的】【形】【象】【呀】【”】【一】【句】【,】【与】【否】【认】【本】【色】【的】【我】【打】【了】【一】【个】【擦】【边】【球】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【【】【升】【格】【作】【文】【】】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【我】【不】【想】【做】【淑】【女】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【●】【武】【汉】【一】【考】【生】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【我】【打】【小】【儿】【就】【是】【一】【个】【特】【会】【折】【腾】【的】【女】【孩】【儿】【。】【妈】【妈】【很】【绝】【望】【地】【对】【我】【说】【:】【“】【丫】【头】【,】【你】【这】【一】【辈】【子】【也】【别】【想】【和】【‘】【淑】【女】【’】【沾】【上】【边】【了】【!】【”】【那】【会】【儿】【,】【我】【不】【以】【为】【然】【,】【心】【里】【直】【嘀】【咕】【:】【“】【谁】【说】【‘】【淑】【女】【’】【就】【一】【定】【好】【呢】【!】【我】【才】【不】【稀】【罕】【呢】【。】【”】【于】【是】【,】【就】【信】【马】【由】【缰】【地】【活】【蹦】【乱】【跳】【到】【了】【今】【天】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【直】【到】【有】【一】【天】【,】【班】【主】【任】【惊】【奇】【地】【对】【大】【家】【说】【,】【全】【班】【三】【十】【个】【女】【孩】【,】【除】【了】【梦】【琪】【还】【有】【些】【个】【性】【外】【,】【其】【他】【都】【变】【成】【一】【个】【样】【了】【。】【那】【一】【刻】【,】【我】【分】【外】【得】【意】【:】【幸】【亏】【我】【没】【有】【听】【妈】【的】【话】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【只】【要】【你】【来】【到】【我】【们】【班】【。】【你】【第】【一】【眼】【就】【会】【认】【识】【“】【我】【”】【—】【—】【总】【是】【张】【着】【嘴】【,】【眯】【着】【眼】【,】【肆】【无】【忌】【惮】【地】【大】【笑】【不】【止】【。】【周】【围】【的】【人】【都】【以】【一】【种】【异】【样】【的】【眼】【光】【瞪】【着】【我】【,】【忿】【忿】【地】【说】【:】【“】【同】【学】【,】【你】【至】【于】【吗】【?】【别】【笑】【成】【那】【样】【好】【不】【好】【!】【”】【而】【我】【依】【然】【以】【笑】【来】【回】【敬】【他】【们】【,】【直】【到】【笑】【得】【肚】【子】【痛】【才】【罢】【休】【。】【其】【实】【,】【那】【时】【的】【我】【也】【想】【尽】【量】【克】【制】【住】【自】【己】【,】【让】【自】【己】【“】【淑】【女】【”】【一】【回】【,】【做】【到】【笑】【不】【露】【齿】【,】【含】【蓄】【内】【敛】【,】【可】【我】【的】【笑】【声】【早】【就】【溜】【出】【来】【了】【,】【哪】【收】【得】【住】【?】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【只】【要】【你】【来】【到】【我】【们】【的】【学】【校】【,】【你】【一】【眼】【就】【会】【认】【出】【我】【—】【—】【走】【起】【路】【来】【蹦】【蹦】【跳】【跳】【,】【脚】【似】【乎】【没】【落】【过】【地】【,】【和】【在】【蹦】【蹦】【床】【上】【走】【路】【没】【什】【么】【两】【样】【。】【同】【时】【,】【手】【臂】【以】【最】【大】【幅】【度】【摆】【动】【着】【,】【似】【乎】【甩】【掉】【了】【我】【都】【不】【会】【心】【疼】【一】【下】【。】【其】【实】【,】【那】【时】【的】【我】【也】【想】【让】【自】【己】【走】【慢】【一】【些】【,】【步】【履】【优】【雅】【些】【,】【让】【自】【己】【“】【淑】【女】【”】【一】【回】【,】【不】【那】【么】【随】【便】【随】【意】【。】【可】【是】【,】【这】【样】【走】【路】【的】【感】【觉】【实】【在】【是】【轻】【松】【而】【惬】【意】【,】【且】【个】【性】【十】【足】【,】【如】【此】【,】【多】【好】【!】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【如】【果】【你】【喜】【欢】【上】【网】【,】【你】【也】【会】【发】【现】【这】【样】【一】【个】【“】【我】【”】【—】【—】【在】【网】【上】【同】【人】【聊】【天】【,】【总】【不】【忘】【要】【打】【上】【个】【“】【哈】【哈】【”】【,】【心】【血】【来】【潮】【时】【甚】【至】【用】【很】【大】【号】【的】【字】【。】【和】【陌】【生】【人】【互】【侃】【时】【,】【也】【是】【如】【此】【。】【他】【们】【都】【很】【狐】【疑】【地】【问】【:】【“】【你】【到】【底】【是】【男】【是】【女】【?】【”】【我】【便】【很】【迅】【速】【地】【回】【过】【去】【:】【“】【女】【的】【。】【怎】【么】【了】【?】【”】【我】【甚】【至】【可】【以】【想】【象】【对】【方】【一】【副】【“】【啊】【,】【我】【被】【你】【骗】【了】【”】【的】【神】【情】【。】【其】【实】【,】【那】【时】【的】【我】【何】【尝】【不】【想】【含】【蓄】【地】【说】【“】【呵】【呵】【”】【呢】【?】【这】【样】【比】【较】【符】【合】【一】【个】【淑】【女】【的】【形】【象】【呀】【!】【但】【这】【个】【念】【头】【只】【在】【头】【脑】【中】【存】【在】【一】【瞬】【,】【做】【一】【个】【无】【拘】【无】【束】【的】【本】【我】【,】【有】【什】【么】【不】【好】【?】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【正】【如】【老】【妈】【所】【预】【言】【的】【那】【样】【,】【我】【这】【一】【辈】【子】【恐】【怕】【再】【也】【与】【“】【淑】【女】【”】【无】【缘】【了】【。】【即】【使】【是】【这】【样】【,】【我】【也】【不】【会】【收】【敛】【我】【的】【性】【格】【,】【你】【想】【,】【做】【一】【个】【自】【由】【自】【在】【、】【热】【情】【奔】【放】【的】【我】【,】【多】【好】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【【】【升】【格】【点】【评】【】】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【修】【改】【后】【的】【文】【章】【在】【眉】【眼】【处】【,】【有】【效】【纠】【偏】【,】【旗】【帜】【鲜】【明】【地】【亮】【明】【观】【点】【。】【标】【题】【《】【我】【不】【想】【做】【淑】【女】【》】【,】【颇】【具】【悬】【念】【,】【巧】【亮】【旗】【帜】【;】【第】【二】【段】【变】【换】【角】【度】【,】【巧】【用】【老】【师】【的】【话】【亮】【明】【旗】【帜】【,】【体】【现】【出】【保】【持】【本】【我】【的】【自】【豪】【与】【得】【意】【;】【结】【尾】【,】【发】【出】【青】【春】【誓】【言】【:】【做】【一】【个】【自】【由】【自】【在】【、】【热】【情】【奔】【放】【的】【我】【,】【再】【次】【旗】【帜】【鲜】【明】【地】【重】【申】【观】【点】【。】【除】【此】【之】【外】【,】【文】【章】【还】【在】【叙】【述】【描】【写】【之】【后】【,】【运】【用】【简】【短】【的】【议】【论】【,】【点】【明】【题】【旨】【。】【如】【此】【一】【修】【改】【,】【这】【篇】【文】【章】【就】【堂】【而】【皇】【之】【的】【成】【了】【满】【分】【作】【文】【。】【你】【看】【,】【缔】【造】【满】【分】【文】【章】【,】【也】【不】【太】【难】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【那】【么】【,】【如】【何】【在】【文】【章】【关】【键】【处】【亮】【明】【旗】【帜】【呢】【?】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【一】【、】【开】【头】【,】【多】【一】【点】【点】【题】【的】【技】【巧】【。】【所】【谓】【“】【点】【题】【”】【是】【指】【在】【文】【章】【关】【键】【处】【,】【用】【简】【明】【扼】【要】【的】【语】【句】【交】【代】【、】【提】【示】【或】【点】【明】【文】【章】【的】【主】【题】【,】【以】【便】【阅】【卷】【者】【能】【迅】【速】【准】【确】【地】【把】【握】【文】【章】【的】【主】【旨】【,】【了】【解】【写】【作】【意】【图】【。】【一】【般】【说】【来】【,】【点】【题】【之】【句】【常】【在】【首】【段】【结】【尾】【,】【以】【防】【止】【下】【文】【东】【拉】【西】【扯】【,】【也】【便】【于】【下】【文】【切】【题】【。】【如】【,】【改】【后】【文】【章】【标】【题】【旗】【帜】【鲜】【明】【—】【—】【《】【我】【不】【想】【做】【淑】【女】【》】【,】【掷】【地】【有】【声】【。】【在】【关】【键】【处】【借】【用】【班】【主】【任】【的】【评】【价】【,】【侧】【面】【亮】【明】【旗】【帜】【,】【还】【巧】【用】【“】【我】【”】【的】【心】【理】【描】【写】【“】【那】【一】【刻】【,】【我】【分】【外】【得】【意】【:】【幸】【亏】【我】【没】【有】【听】【妈】【的】【话】【”】【,】【再】【次】【强】【化】【主】【题】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【如】【何】【更】【好】【地】【点】【题】【?】【可】【用】【诗】【意】【的】【语】【言】【抒】【发】【情】【感】【,】【可】【先】【援】【引】【他】【人】【或】【自】【撰】【蕴】【涵】【哲】【理】【的】【话】【做】【题】【记】【,】【揭】【示】【文】【章】【的】【主】【旨】【,】【也】【可】【紧】【扣】【文】【章】【题】【目】【点】【题】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【二】【、】【中】【间】【,】【叙】【事】【描】【写】【中】【融】【入】【。】【除】【了】【在】【文】【章】【关】【键】【处】【抒】【情】【议】【论】【外】【,】【还】【要】【把】【浓】【郁】【的】【情】【感】【融】【于】【叙】【述】【中】【,】【融】【于】【对】【人】【物】【、】【景】【物】【的】【具】【体】【刻】【画】【中】【,】【在】【叙】【事】【中】【抒】【情】【,】【在】【描】【写】【中】【抒】【情】【。】【当】【然】【,】【还】【要】【在】【叙】【事】【描】【写】【的】【基】【础】【上】【,】【略】【加】【抒】【情】【议】【论】【,】【画】【龙】【点】【睛】【。】【修】【改】【后】【的】【三】【个】【片】【断】【在】【叙】【述】【描】【写】【“】【我】【”】【的】【个】【性】【后】【,】【都】【用】【一】【句】【精】【炼】【的】【议】【论】【句】【强】【化】【点】【题】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【三】【、】【结】【尾】【,】【多】【一】【点】【心】【思】【深】【化】【主】【题】【。】【文】【章】【结】【尾】【要】【像】【咀】【嚼】【橄】【榄】【、】【品】【尝】【香】【茗】【,】【令】【人】【回】【味】【再】【三】【。】【考】【场】【作】【文】【结】【尾】【尤】【其】【追】【求】【“】【卒】【章】【显】【志】【”】【“】【画】【龙】【点】【睛】【”】【,】【让】【主】【题】【再】【一】【次】【点】【亮】【阅】【卷】【者】【的】【双】【眸】【。】【可】【用】【议】【论】【句】【点】【明】【事】【件】【意】【义】【或】【人】【物】【对】【自】【己】【的】【影】【响】【;】【可】【浓】【郁】【地】【抒】【情】【,】【激】【起】【读】【者】【情】【感】【的】【波】【澜】【,】【引】【起】【读】【者】【的】【共】【鸣】【;】【也】【可】【用】【名】【言】【、】【警】【句】【、】【诗】【句】【收】【尾】【,】【揭】【示】【人】【生】【的】【真】【谛】【,】【起】【到】【“】【言】【已】【尽】【,】【意】【无】【穷】【”】【的】【效】【果】【。】【改】【后】【的】【结】【尾】【彻】【底】【地】【改】【变】【了】【原】【来】【的】【结】【尾】【,】【掷】【地】【有】【声】【,】【铿】【锵】【有】【力】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】全国污染源普查条例【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【试】【题】【导】【入】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【我】【们】【的】【家】【乡】【每】【天】【都】【在】【变】【化】【着】【,】【城】【市】【在】【变】【化】【,】【农】【村】【在】【变】【化】【,】【人】【们】【的】【生】【活】【在】【变】【化】【。】【楼】【房】【越】【来】【越】【多】【,】【房】【屋】【越】【来】【越】【亮】【堂】【,】【道】【路】【越】【来】【越】【宽】【,】【路】【边】【绿】【化】【也】【越】【来】【越】【美】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【人】【们】【在】【追】【求】【物】【质】【生】【活】【的】【同】【时】【,】【对】【精】【神】【生】【活】【也】【有】【了】【新】【的】【追】【求】【。】【衣】【食】【无】【忧】【的】【人】【们】【开】【始】【关】【注】【外】【面】【的】【世】【界】【,】【关】【注】【中】【国】【的】【经】【济】【发】【展】【,】【关】【注】【世】【界】【的】【热】【点】【问】【题】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【你】【留】【心】【身】【边】【的】【这】【种】【变】【化】【了】【吗】【?】【细】【致】【观】【察】【并】【深】【切】【感】【受】【你】【身】【边】【的】【这】【种】【变】【化】【,】【用】【生】【动】【的】【文】【笔】【描】【绘】【你】【的】【所】【察】【所】【思】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【以】【“】【家】【乡】【新】【变】【化】【”】【为】【话】【题】【写】【一】【篇】【作】【文】【,】【文】【体】【不】【限】【,】【题】【目】【自】【拟】【,】【6】【0】【0】【字】【以】【上】【。】【要】【写】【出】【真】【感】【受】【、】【真】【变】【化】【,】【既】【可】【写】【事】【物】【,】【又】【可】【写】【人】【物】【,】【切】【忌】【泛】【泛】【而】【谈】【,】【空】【洞】【乏】【味】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【写】【作】【指】【导】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【一】【、】【描】【写】【家】【乡】【的】【新】【变】【化】【,】【必】【须】【细】【致】【观】【察】【并】【深】【切】【感】【受】【这】【种】【变】【化】【:】【感】【受】【社】【会】【现】【象】【的】【变】【化】【,】【感】【受】【发】【展】【动】【力】【的】【变】【化】【;】【感】【受】【物】【质】【生】【活】【的】【变】【化】【,】【感】【受】【精】【神】【世】【界】【的】【变】【化】【。】【比】【如】【乡】【村】【的】【城】【镇】【化】【,】【农】【业】【的】【现】【代】【化】【,】【手】【机】【的】【普】【及】【化】【,】【衣】【着】【的】【时】【尚】【化】【,】【轿】【车】【的】【家】【庭】【化】【,】【城】【市】【的】【园】【林】【化】【,】【街】【道】【的】【宽】【敞】【化】【,】【建】【筑】【的】【个】【性】【化】【,】【饮】【食】【的】【营】【养】【化】【,】【科】【技】【的】【尖】【端】【化】【,】【精】【神】【的】【多】【彩】【化】【…】【…】【要】【把】【握】【自】【己】【最】【感】【兴】【趣】【的】【一】【点】【,】【积】【累】【感】【受】【和】【灵】【感】【,】【有】【话】【可】【说】【,】【以】【小】【见】【大】【,】【能】【感】【染】【人】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【写】【变】【化】【,】【就】【要】【注】【重】【写】【今】【昔】【的】【对】【比】【。】【既】【可】【写】【人】【物】【、】【事】【物】【的】【变】【化】【,】【又】【可】【写】【景】【物】【的】【变】【化】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【二】【、】【描】【写】【家】【乡】【的】【新】【变】【化】【,】【自】【然】【要】【以】【记】【叙】【为】【主】【,】【要】【选】【取】【典】【型】【而】【生】【动】【的】【事】【例】【,】【由】【“】【点】【”】【入】【手】【,】【以】【点】【示】【面】【,】【从】【而】【充】【分】【地】【表】【达】【意】【旨】【。】【比】【如】【写】【人】【,】【要】【写】【出】【人】【物】【精】【神】【世】【界】【的】【变】【化】【;】【写】【事】【物】【,】【要】【写】【出】【事】【物】【变】【化】【的】【过】【程】【,】【要】【注】【重】【事】【例】【的】【细】【节】【化】【、】【故】【事】【化】【、】【生】【动】【化】【,】【切】【忌】【面】【面】【俱】【到】【,】【泛】【泛】【而】【述】【,】【空】【洞】【无】【物】【。】【比】【如】【下】【面】【这】【段】【文】【字】【—】【—】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【来】【到】【了】【家】【乡】【,】【啊】【!】【真】【美】【!】【难】【道】【这】【是】【我】【的】【眼】【睛】【花】【了】【?】【我】【揉】【了】【揉】【眼】【睛】【,】【没】【有】【呀】【?】【本】【来】【以】【前】【那】【坑】【坑】【洼】【洼】【、】【崎】【岖】【不】【平】【的】【小】【路】【,】【现】【在】【已】【变】【成】【一】【条】【平】【平】【坦】【坦】【的】【柏】【油】【路】【,】【路】【两】【旁】【种】【满】【了】【花】【草】【树】【木】【,】【蜜】【蜂】【在】【唱】【歌】【,】【蝴】【蝶】【在】【跳】【舞】【,】【高】【楼】【大】【厦】【拔】【地】【而】【起】【。】【我】【和】【爸】【爸】【来】【到】【叔】【叔】【家】【,】【哇】【,】【叔】【叔】【家】【也】【变】【了】【,】【房】【子】【很】【大】【很】【大】【,】【墙】【壁】【刷】【得】【雪】【白】【雪】【白】【的】【,】【装】【修】【豪】【华】【。】【家】【具】【也】【是】【崭】【新】【的】【,】【刻】【着】【龙】【凤】【图】【案】【。】【他】【们】【再】【也】【不】【用】【灶】【头】【煮】【东】【西】【了】【,】【都】【换】【成】【煤】【气】【炉】【,】【方】【便】【快】【捷】【…】【…】【我】【好】【像】【到】【了】【人】【间】【仙】【境】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【以】【上】【文】【字】【缺】【乏】【深】【切】【的】【感】【受】【,】【蜻】【蜓】【点】【水】【,】【面】【面】【俱】【到】【,】【泛】【泛】【堆】【砌】【,】【且】【有】【一】【些】【说】【大】【话】【、】【喊】【口】【号】【的】【意】【味】【,】【自】【然】【空】【洞】【乏】【味】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【三】【、】【在】【叙】【述】【手】【法】【上】【,】【可】【巧】【用】【倒】【叙】【,】【以】【求】【详】【略】【得】【当】【,】【举】【重】【若】【轻】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【□】【佳】【作】【展】【示】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【家】【有】【电】【视】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【○】【 】【孟】【庆】【杰】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 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】【 】【对】【奶】【奶】【话】【最】【感】【兴】【趣】【的】【是】【妈】【妈】【。】【妈】【妈】【接】【上】【话】【茬】【:】【“】【我】【像】【你】【们】【这】【么】【大】【的】【时】【候】【,】【最】【爱】【看】【电】【影】【了】【。】【”】【“】【你】【到】【哪】【儿】【的】【电】【影】【院】【去】【看】【啊】【?】【”】【妹】【妹】【好】【奇】【地】【问】【。】【妈】【妈】【说】【:】【“】【哪】【里】【是】【到】【什】【么】【电】【影】【院】【呐】【。】【那】【时】【候】【公】【社】【里】【的】【电】【影】【队】【一】【年】【到】【每】【个】【村】【放】【几】【次】【电】【影】【。】【电】【影】【队】【来】【本】【村】【呀】【,】【我】【就】【催】【家】【人】【早】【早】【做】【饭】【,】【吃】【饭】【。】【没】【等】【天】【黑】【,】【人】【家】【影】【布】【扯】【起】【来】【,】【我】【就】【搬】【矮】【凳】【抢】【占】【个】【好】【地】【方】【。】【有】【时】【候】【饭】【都】【顾】【不】【上】【吃】【,】【饿】【着】【肚】【子】【看】【完】【电】【影】【再】【回】【家】【吃】【。】【外】【村】【放】【电】【影】【,】【我】【就】【跟】【着】【大】【人】【们】【去】【。】【那】【时】【候】【哇】【,】【看】【电】【影】【可】【是】【新】【鲜】【事】【,】【十】【几】【个】【村】【子】【的】【人】【挤】【成】【黑】【压】【压】【一】【片】【。】【有】【时】【候】【电】【影】【放】【到】【半】【夜】【,】【人】【们】【还】【在】【看】【。】【有】【时】【有】【人】【搞】【恶】【作】【剧】【,】【说】【外】【村】【来】【了】【电】【影】【,】【我】【们】【就】【急】【匆】【匆】【赶】【了】【去】【,】【结】【果】【挨】【了】【骗】【,】【就】【只】【好】【一】【路】【吵】【吵】【嚷】【嚷】【,】【屁】【颠】【屁】【颠】【地】【赶】【回】【来】【。】【”】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【奶】【奶】【搭】【话】【:】【“】【还】【是】【你】【们】【有】【福】【。】【饭】【来】【张】【口】【,】【衣】【来】【伸】【手】【。】【没】【事】【就】【待】【在】【家】【里】【看】【电】【视】【,】【你】【们】【生】【在】【什】【么】【时】【候】【哇】【。】【”】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【“】【有】【什】【么】【福】【呀】【?】【”】【妹】【妹】【一】【努】【嘴】【,】【“】【人】【家】【都】【是】【二】【十】【五】【寸】【、】【二】【十】【九】【寸】【的】【大】【彩】【电】【了】【,】【咱】【家】【还】【是】【这】【么】【个】【二】【十】【一】【寸】【的】【!】【”】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【“】【你】【这】【个】【小】【妮】【子】【,】【身】【在】【福】【中】【还】【不】【知】【足】【!】【”】【奶】【奶】【脸】【一】【阴】【,】【有】【点】【生】【气】【了】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【妹】【妹】【吐】【了】【吐】【舌】【头】【躲】【一】【边】【。】【我】【拉】【着】【奶】【奶】【的】【手】【说】【:】【“】【奶】【奶】【,】【咱】【家】【也】【该】【买】【大】【彩】【电】【了】【,】【大】【彩】【电】【比】【小】【的】【更】【好】【看】【。】【买】【了】【大】【彩】【电】【,】【这】【小】【彩】【电】【就】【归】【你】【自】【己】【,】【光】【让】【你】【看】【戏】【。】【行】【吧】【,】【奶】【奶】【?】【”】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【“】【咱】【家】【是】【该】【买】【大】【彩】【电】【了】【。】【这】【事】【已】【列】【入】【计】【划】【,】【近】【期】【就】【办】【!】【要】【买】【,】【就】【买】【好】【的】【,】【买】【一】【台】【液】【晶】【大】【屏】【的】【,】【而】【且】【连】【电】【脑】【一】【块】【买】【。】【年】【底】【看】【中】【央】【电】【视】【台】【春】【节】【晚】【会】【,】【保】【证】【看】【的】【是】【大】【彩】【电】【!】【”】【爸】【爸】【在】【外】【屋】【发】【表】【“】【严】【正】【声】【明】【”】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【妹】【妹】【乐】【了】【:】【“】【电】【脑】【归】【我】【!】【”】【爸】【爸】【忙】【说】【:】【“】【是】【为】【了】【你】【和】【你】【姐】【姐】【的】【学】【习】【买】【的】【。】【”】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【奶】【奶】【一】【听】【笑】【了】【,】【妈】【妈】【笑】【了】【。】【我】【和】【妹】【妹】【也】【笑】【了】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【这】【时】【候】【,】【妹】【妹】【调】【换】【了】【频】【道】【,】【电】【视】【里】【播】【放】【的】【是】【奶】【奶】【最】【爱】【看】【的】【戏】【—】【—】【“】【咿】【呀】【咿】【呀】【咿】【咿】【呀】【呀】【…】【…】【”】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【点】【评】【:】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【本】【文】【围】【绕】【家】【庭】【关】【于】【电】【视】【的】【话】【题】【,】【单】【刀】【直】【入】【,】【如】【数】【家】【珍】【,】【曲】【折】【细】【腻】【,】【摇】【曳】【多】【姿】【,】【巧】【忆】【往】【事】【,】【今】【昔】【对】【比】【,】【反】【映】【了】【百】【姓】【生】【活】【水】【平】【的】【不】【断】【提】【高】【,】【折】【射】【了】【时】【代】【的】【巨】【大】【变】【化】【,】【以】【小】【见】【大】【,】【意】【旨】【深】【切】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【通】【篇】【以】【人】【物】【对】【话】【而】【制】【胜】【。】【对】【话】【富】【有】【浓】【郁】【的】【生】【活】【气】【息】【,】【个】【性】【鲜】【明】【。】【特】【别】【是】【奶】【奶】【的】【话】【,】【别】【有】【情】【趣】【。】【文】【章】【结】【构】【简】【明】【自】【然】【,】【一】【气】【呵】【成】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【开】【心】【练】【笔】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【以】【“】【身】【边】【的】【变】【化】【”】【为】【题】【,】【写】【一】【个】【作】【文】【片】【段】【,】【要】【运】【用】【细】【节】【描】【写】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【写】【法】【点】【拨】【:】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【写】【事】【物】【的】【变】【化】【过】【程】【,】【可】【运】【用】【场】【面】【描】【写】【或】【景】【物】【描】【写】【;】【写】【人】【物】【的】【变】【化】【,】【可】【灵】【活】【运】【用】【语】【言】【描】【写】【和】【行】【动】【描】【写】【等】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【素】【材】【积】【累】【:】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【我】【一】【年】【没】【回】【家】【了】【。】【走】【在】【家】【乡】【熟】【悉】【的】【街】【道】【上】【,】【我】【却】【有】【了】【一】【种】【陌】【生】【感】【。】【不】【少】【人】【家】【新】【盖】【了】【二】【层】【小】【楼】【,】【弄】【不】【清】【到】【底】【是】【谁】【家】【了】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【奶】【奶】【见】【了】【我】【高】【兴】【地】【合】【不】【拢】【嘴】【:】【“】【妮】【子】【,】【我】【让】【你】【饱】【一】【饱】【口】【福】【。】【”】【等】【饭】【菜】【端】【上】【来】【,】【我】【愣】【了】【:】【“】【奶】【奶】【,】【我】【还】【以】【为】【你】【给】【我】【做】【了】【大】【鱼】【大】【肉】【呢】【…】【…】【”】【奶】【奶】【做】【个】【鬼】【脸】【:】【“】【傻】【妮】【子】【,】【这】【年】【头】【大】【鱼】【大】【肉】【都】【吃】【腻】【了】【,】【有】【啥】【好】【吃】【的】【?】【现】【在】【电】【视】【里】【说】【要】【吃】【绿】【色】【,】【吃】【营】【养】【。】【你】【看】【,】【这】【饭】【菜】【你】【不】【愿】【吃】【啊】【?】【”】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【饭】【桌】【上】【摆】【上】【了】【奶】【奶】【亲】【手】【酿】【的】【面】【酱】【,】【还】【有】【大】【葱】【,】【曲】【曲】【菜】【、】【婆】【婆】【丁】【等】【别】【有】【药】【效】【的】【野】【菜】【,】【香】【喷】【喷】【的】【窝】【窝】【头】【。】【外】【加】【一】【大】【盆】【紫】【菜】【鸡】【蛋】【汤】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【我】【于】【是】【埋】【头】【吃】【了】【个】【不】【亦】【乐】【乎】【。】【心】【里】【直】【感】【叹】【连】【老】【人】【的】【饮】【食】【观】【念】【都】【与】【时】【俱】【进】【了】【!】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】

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【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【“】【喝】【牛】【奶】【,】【快】【去】【吃】【早】【餐】【,】【然】【后】【刷】【牙】【洗】【脸】【!】【”】【唉】【,】【我】【的】【妈】【妈】【又】【开】【始】【唠】【叨】【了】【,】【这】【样】【的】【唠】【叨】【已】【经】【1】【2】【年】【了】【,】【听】【得】【我】【都】【快】【要】【有】【离】【家】【出】【走】【的】【冲】【动】【了】【。】【不】【过】【,】【在】【唠】【叨】【中】【,】【我】【也】【渐】【渐】【感】【到】【了】【幸】【福】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【星】【期】【六】【的】【早】【上】【,】【小】【鸟】【在】【窗】【前】【的】【树】【枝】【上】【叽】【叽】【喳】【喳】【欢】【唱】【着】【,】【商】【量】【着】【哪】【儿】【的】【虫】【子】【肥】【美】【。】【而】【此】【时】【我】【正】【梦】【见】【美】【味】【的】【“】【开】【封】【菜】【”】【K】【F】【C】【,】【巨】【大】【的】【汉】【堡】【包】【和】【香】【嫩】【的】【鸡】【腿】【…】【…】【突】【然】【,】【一】【声】【惊】【雷】【,】【妈】【妈】【大】【吼】【一】【声】【:】【“】【快】【起】【床】【叠】【被】【子】【,】【都】【8】【点】【了】【,】【怎】【么】【还】【赖】【在】【床】【上】【?】【”】【结】【果】【,】【小】【鸟】【被】【吓】【飞】【了】【,】【周】【公】【为】【我】【做】【的】【美】【味】【汉】【堡】【包】【被】【“】【收】【”】【回】【去】【了】【。】【我】【皱】【着】【眉】【,】【非】【常】【不】【情】【愿】【地】【穿】【好】【衣】【服】【,】【极】【不】【耐】【烦】【地】【叠】【着】【被】【子】【,】【然】【后】【慢】【吞】【吞】【地】【坐】【到】【餐】【桌】【旁】【。】【妈】【妈】【在】【厨】【房】【又】【喊】【了】【:】【“】【吃】【早】【餐】【、】【喝】【牛】【奶】【,】【然】【后】【刷】【牙】【洗】【脸】【准】【备】【上】【学】【!】【”】【“】【今】【天】【不】【用】【上】【学】【!】【”】【我】【抗】【议】【。】【妈】【妈】【总】【把】【我】【当】【什】【么】【都】【需】【要】【提】【醒】【的】【幼】【儿】【园】【的】【小】【娃】【娃】【,】【这】【些】【事】【情】【已】【经】【重】【复】【了】【那】【么】【多】【年】【,】【我】【知】【道】【什】【么】【时】【候】【做】【什】【么】【,】【何】【况】【我】【自】【己】【戴】【着】【表】【,】【自】【己】【可】【以】【管】【理】【时】【间】【呀】【!】【可】【是】【妈】【妈】【总】【要】【一】【而】【再】【,】【再】【而】【三】【地】【提】【醒】【我】【…】【…】【“】【早】【餐】【怎】【么】【吃】【得】【这】【么】【慢】【?】【可】【以】【边】【吃】【饭】【边】【听】【英】【语】【,】【一】【心】【二】【用】【这】【个】【可】【以】【有】【!】【…】【…】【洗】【完】【牛】【奶】【杯】【,】【赶】【紧】【做】【作】【业】【!】【”】【不】【等】【妈】【妈】【唠】【叨】【完】【,】【我】【郁】【闷】【地】【抓】【起】【书】【包】【冲】【进】【卧】【室】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【中】【午】【吃】【过】【午】【饭】【,】【我】【正】【津】【津】【有】【味】【地】【看】【着】【K】【A】【K】【U】【动】【画】【电】【视】【,】【妈】【妈】【又】【对】【我】【喊】【起】【来】【:】【“】【还】【看】【?】【还】【看】【?】【都】【快】【成】【小】【四】【眼】【了】【!】【离】【电】【视】【那】【么】【近】【!】【”】【我】【往】【后】【挪】【了】【挪】【,】【妈】【妈】【又】【补】【充】【道】【:】【“】【下】【次】【再】【让】【我】【看】【见】【你】【离】【电】【视】【机】【那】【么】【近】【,】【下】【周】【玩】【电】【脑】【的】【时】【间】【—】【—】【取】【—】【—】【消】【—】【—】【”】【到】【了】【晚】【上】【吃】【饭】【,】【我】【狼】【吞】【虎】【咽】【地】【吃】【着】【美】【味】【的】【红】【烧】【鱼】【,】【妈】【妈】【又】【絮】【絮】【叨】【叨】【起】【来】【:】【“】【小】【心】【鱼】【刺】【卡】【着】【,】【吃】【饭】【要】【细】【嚼】【慢】【咽】【,】【有】【利】【消】【化】【!】【”】【我】【只】【好】【放】【慢】【吃】【饭】【的】【速】【度】【,】【细】【细】【地】【剔】【着】【鱼】【刺】【,】【细】【嚼】【着】【米】【饭】【。】【晚】【上】【快】【睡】【觉】【的】【时】【候】【,】【母】【亲】【的】【例】【行】【功】【课】【又】【开】【始】【了】【:】【“】【降】【温】【了】【,】【晚】【上】【记】【得】【盖】【好】【被】【子】【,】【别】【着】【凉】【了】【…】【…】【”】【妈】【妈】【的】【话】【我】【都】【快】【背】【下】【来】【了】【,】【我】【不】【耐】【烦】【地】【赶】【紧】【用】【被】【子】【盖】【住】【头】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【上】【了】【初】【中】【,】【我】【住】【校】【了】【,】【终】【于】【不】【用】【再】【听】【妈】【妈】【每】【天】【的】【“】【唐】【僧】【念】【经】【”】【了】【。】【可】【是】【,】【如】【果】【没】【有】【妈】【妈】【的】【唠】【叨】【,】【我】【可】【能】【忘】【了】【每】【天】【早】【上】【和】【晚】【上】【要】【喝】【牛】【奶】【;】【如】【果】【没】【有】【妈】【妈】【的】【唠】【叨】【,】【我】【可】【能】【不】【会】【坚】【持】【刷】【牙】【,】【就】【会】【像】【隔】【壁】【的】【晓】【东】【长】【了】【满】【口】【虫】【牙】【,】【疼】【得】【龇】【牙】【咧】【嘴】【;】【如】【果】【没】【有】【妈】【妈】【的】【唠】【叨】【,】【我】【可】【能】【又】【忘】【了】【降】【温】【后】【添】【加】【衣】【服】【,】【会】【在】【教】【室】【里】【瑟】【瑟】【发】【抖】【…】【…】【如】【果】【没】【有】【妈】【妈】【的】【唠】【叨】【,】【我】【就】【会】【失】【去】【一】【种】【平】【实】【、】【温】【暖】【的】【幸】【福】【…】【…】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【周】【末】【回】【家】【时】【,】【我】【发】【现】【母】【亲】【很】【少】【唠】【叨】【了】【,】【便】【玩】【笑】【似】【的】【对】【她】【说】【:】【“】【妈】【妈】【,】【最】【近】【怎】【么】【听】【不】【到】【你】【的】【唠】【叨】【声】【了】【?】【我】【还】【有】【点】【不】【习】【惯】【了】【。】【”】【妈】【妈】【笑】【着】【说】【:】【“】【我】【以】【后】【再】【也】【不】【会】【像】【个】【老】【太】【太】【一】【样】【唠】【叨】【你】【了】【,】【你】【长】【大】【了】【,】【不】【论】【是】【学】【习】【还】【是】【生】【活】【上】【已】【经】【养】【成】【了】【好】【习】【惯】【,】【现】【在】【不】【用】【我】【唠】【叨】【,】【你】【也】【一】【样】【能】【做】【得】【很】【好】【,】【你】【老】【妈】【我】【也】【要】【歇】【歇】【喽】【!】【”】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【不】【知】【怎】【么】【,】【住】【校】【的】【日】【子】【听】【不】【到】【妈】【妈】【的】【唠】【叨】【,】【我】【心】【里】【有】【时】【会】【感】【到】【空】【虚】【,】【总】【觉】【得】【生】【活】【少】【了】【点】【什】【么】【。】【渐】【渐】【地】【,】【我】【才】【发】【现】【:】【原】【来】【,】【在】【母】【亲】【的】【唠】【叨】【声】【中】【,】【我】【一】【直】【幸】【福】【着】【!】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【(】【指】【导】【老】【师】【:】【冯】【梅】【)】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【点】【评】【:】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【文】【章】【开】【篇】【极】【力】【地】【铺】【排】【妈】【妈】【的】【唠】【叨】【,】【以】【造】【成】【一】【种】【气】【势】【,】【把】【妈】【妈】【的】【唠】【叨】【写】【到】【了】【极】【致】【。】【然】【而】【作】【者】【又】【没】【有】【停】【留】【在】【只】【写】【唠】【叨】【上】【,】【而】【是】【以】【“】【唠】【叨】【”】【形】【成】【了】【一】【种】【“】【爱】【”】【,】【最】【后】【表】【明】【没】【有】【这】【种】【唠】【叨】【(】【爱】【)】【觉】【得】【空】【虚】【,】【体】【验】【唠】【叨】【就】【是】【体】【验】【幸】【福】【了】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【在】【叙】【述】【妈】【妈】【的】【唠】【叨】【时】【,】【作】【者】【很】【少】【表】【明】【自】【己】【的】【观】【点】【,】【表】【现】【自】【己】【的】【情】【感】【,】【但】【是】【在】【文】【字】【背】【后】【,】【我】【们】【都】【能】【体】【会】【到】【唠】【叨】【实】【际】【上】【是】【一】【种】【爱】【,】【是】【一】【种】【深】【深】【的】【爱】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【其】【实】【在】【我】【们】【写】【作】【文】【时】【,】【经】【常】【会】【出】【现】【作】【者】【站】【出】【来】【表】【达】【观】【点】【的】【情】【况】【,】【其】【实】【,】【读】【者】【会】【在】【阅】【读】【中】【体】【会】【作】【者】【的】【爱】【、】【憎】【等】【情】【感】【和】【观】【点】【,】【如】【果】【作】【者】【自】【己】【站】【出】【来】【说】【,】【那】【么】【读】【后】【就】【没】【有】【回】【味】【的】【余】【地】【了】【。】【本】【文】【作】【者】【则】【与】【众】【不】【同】【,】【这】【正】【是】【此】【文】【成】【功】【之】【处】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【(】【点】【评】【老】【师】【:】【言】【成】【)】【<】【b】【r】【>】全国污染源普查条例【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【今】【天】【是】【星】【期】【天】【,】【我】【们】【全】【家】【要】【到】【镇】【上】【去】【买】【衣】【服】【。】【吃】【过】【早】【饭】【,】【爸】【爸】【推】【出】【摩】【托】【车】【便】【载】【上】【我】【和】【妈】【妈】【一】【溜】【烟】【儿】【地】【出】【了】【家】【门】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【没】【多】【久】【,】【车】【子】【拐】【到】【了】【一】【条】【一】【米】【多】【宽】【的】【田】【间】【小】【路】【。】【这】【是】【通】【向】【城】【乡】【公】【路】【的】【唯】【一】【通】【道】【,】【虽】【说】【路】【不】【算】【长】【,】【却】【很】【不】【好】【走】【,】【车】【子】【一】【颠】【一】【颠】【的】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【“】【慢】【点】【儿】【!】【别】【吓】【坏】【了】【女】【儿】【!】【”】【妈】【妈】【紧】【张】【地】【喊】【了】【起】【来】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【“】【坐】【稳】【了】【!】【别】【担】【心】【!】【”】【爸】【爸】【高】【声】【回】【答】【,】【车】【子】【慢】【了】【许】【多】【。】【微】【风】【吹】【拂】【,】【麦】【田】【泛】【起】【了】【一】【轮】【一】【轮】【的】【绿】【波】【,】【阵】【阵】【清】【香】【扑】【鼻】【而】【来】【,】【好】【美】【的】【景】【致】【啊】【!】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【忽】【然】【,】【爸】【爸】【的】【车】【子】【停】【了】【下】【来】【。】【怎】【么】【了】【?】【我】【和】【妈】【妈】【同】【时】【探】【出】【头】【。】【前】【方】【道】【路】【两】【边】【各】【有】【一】【块】【油】【菜】【地】【,】【那】【油】【菜】【棵】【棵】【高】【大】【,】【正】【在】【结】【籽】【。】【因】【为】【太】【茂】【盛】【,】【又】【因】【为】【与】【田】【埂】【的】【间】【隙】【太】【小】【,】【蓬】【蓬】【茸】【茸】【的】【油】【菜】【已】【将】【小】【路】【盖】【住】【了】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【“】【下】【来】【吧】【!】【”】【爸】【爸】【果】【断】【地】【招】【呼】【着】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【“】【直】【接】【冲】【过】【去】【吧】【,】【大】【不】【了】【染】【一】【身】【露】【水】【!】【”】【我】【嚷】【了】【起】【来】【,】【不】【愿】【在】【此】【耽】【搁】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【“】【先】【看】【看】【再】【说】【!】【”】【还】【没】【等】【我】【再】【开】【口】【,】【妈】【妈】【已】【敏】【捷】【地】【跳】【下】【车】【,】【跑】【到】【前】【边】【去】【了】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【“】【唉】【,】【真】【可】【惜】【,】【看】【这】【菜】【籽】【被】【糟】【蹋】【成】【啥】【样】【了】【!】【”】【妈】【妈】【拾】【起】【一】【棵】【被】【踩】【断】【的】【油】【菜】【,】【连】【连】【摇】【头】【。】【原】【来】【,】【由】【于】【道】【路】【被】【遮】【住】【,】【路】【人】【硬】【是】【从】【菜】【地】【趟】【过】【去】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【“】【真】【残】【忍】【!】【”】【看】【到】【饱】【满】【可】【爱】【的】【菜】【籽】【被】【踩】【得】【遍】【体】【鳞】【伤】【,】【我】【忍】【不】【住】【大】【叫】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【“】【快】【来】【扶】【吧】【!】【我】【扶】【这】【边】【,】【你】【们】【扶】【那】【边】【!】【”】【妈】【妈】【挥】【了】【挥】【手】【。】【她】【弯】【下】【腰】【,】【将】【倒】【伏】【的】【菜】【籽】【小】【心】【拢】【向】【左】【边】【的】【菜】【地】【。】【我】【也】【照】【样】【行】【动】【起】【来】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【“】【慢】【慢】【扶】【!】【我】【马】【上】【就】【回】【来】【!】【”】【爸】【爸】【观】【察】【了】【一】【下】【,】【忽】【然】【掉】【转】【车】【头】【,】【飞】【驰】【而】【去】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【菜】【地】【不】【长】【,】【只】【有】【五】【六】【十】【米】【。】【我】【和】【妈】【妈】【刚】【把】【油】【菜】【拢】【好】【,】【爸】【爸】【就】【满】【头】【大】【汗】【地】【回】【来】【了】【。】【他】【从】【车】【上】【解】【下】【几】【根】【不】【足】【一】【米】【的】【竹】【竿】【,】【又】【打】【开】【后】【备】【箱】【,】【取】【出】【一】【团】【塑】【料】【绳】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【“】【知】【道】【这】【些】【是】【干】【啥】【用】【的】【吗】【?】【”】【爸】【爸】【微】【笑】【着】【问】【。】【我】【有】【点】【摸】【不】【着】【头】【脑】【,】【妈】【妈】【朝】【我】【使】【了】【个】【眼】【色】【,】【又】【向】【路】【边】【的】【油】【菜】【努】【了】【努】【嘴】【。】【我】【仔】【细】【一】【看】【,】【刚】【才】【扶】【好】【的】【油】【菜】【,】【有】【一】【些】【又】【倒】【向】【了】【路】【边】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【“】【哦】【,】【知】【道】【了】【,】【固】【定】【!】【”】【我】【恍】【然】【大】【悟】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【“】【真】【聪】【明】【!】【那】【就】【快】【来】【固】【定】【吧】【!】【”】【爸】【爸】【在】【竹】【竿】【上】【系】【好】【绳】【子】【,】【用】【力】【插】【进】【田】【埂】【,】【吩】【咐】【我】【小】【心】【扶】【着】【,】【别】【让】【竹】【竿】【弯】【腰】【。】【他】【又】【拉】【着】【绳】【子】【跑】【向】【菜】【地】【的】【另】【一】【头】【。】【妈】【妈】【则】【负】【责】【将】【绳】【子】【固】【定】【在】【菜】【籽】【腰】【部】【以】【上】【的】【位】【置】【。】【为】【了】【减】【少】【两】【端】【竹】【竿】【的】【负】【荷】【,】【爸】【爸】【还】【在】【中】【间】【位】【置】【上】【加】【了】【一】【根】【竹】【竿】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【十】【几】【分】【钟】【后】【,】【终】【于】【固】【定】【好】【了】【。】【我】【们】【身】【上】【却】【已】【是】【湿】【一】【块】【,】【污】【一】【块】【。】【那】【是】【油】【菜】【上】【的】【露】【水】【及】【路】【人】【践】【踏】【后】【的】【污】【泥】【留】【下】【的】【印】【记】【。】【我】【望】【着】【爸】【妈】【,】【爸】【妈】【望】【着】【我】【,】【我】【们】【会】【心】【地】【笑】【了】【,】【笑】【声】【在】【田】【野】【上】【飘】【荡】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【瞧】【我】【们】【一】【家】【子】【,】【多】【么】【善】【良】【,】【多】【么】【默】【契】【,】【多】【么】【幸】【福】【!】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【摩】【托】【车】【载】【着】【我】【们】【一】【家】【三】【口】【,】【一】【路】【欢】【歌】【,】【奔】【向】【前】【方】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【这】【是】【一】【篇】【令】【人】【感】【动】【的】【记】【叙】【文】【。】【油】【菜】【挡】【道】【,】【爸】【爸】【完】【全】【可】【以】【开】【着】【摩】【托】【车】【冲】【过】【去】【,】【但】【他】【却】【果】【断】【地】【选】【择】【了】【停】【车】【。】【妈】【妈】【察】【看】【了】【菜】【籽】【被】【损】【坏】【的】【情】【形】【后】【,】【毫】【不】【犹】【豫】【地】【下】【令】【扶】【起】【。】【一】【家】【三】【口】【无】【怨】【无】【悔】【地】【投】【入】【了】【开】【辟】【道】【路】【,】【保】【护】【油】【菜】【的】【劳】【动】【中】【。】【这】【是】【纯】【朴】【善】【良】【的】【真】【实】【写】【照】【,】【也】【是】【和】【谐】【家】【庭】【,】【和】【谐】【社】【会】【的】【美】【丽】【缩】【影】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【(】【指】【导】【老】【师】【:】【杨】【在】【华】【)】【<】【b】【r】【>】

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【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【瀑】【布】【选】【择】【在】【悬】【崖】【放】【歌】【,】【一】【泻】【万】【丈】【;】【小】【溪】【选】【择】【在】【山】【间】【低】【吟】【,】【涓】【涓】【细】【流】【;】【雄】【鹰】【选】【择】【在】【高】【空】【翱】【翔】【,】【搏】【击】【长】【空】【;】【麻】【雀】【选】【择】【在】【屋】【檐】【下】【筑】【巢】【,】【嬉】【戏】【作】【乐】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【有】【人】【选】【择】【做】【金】【钱】【的】【奴】【仆】【,】【纸】【醉】【金】【迷】【,】【丢】【弃】【了】【做】【人】【的】【尊】【严】【;】【有】【人】【选】【择】【投】【机】【取】【巧】【,】【贪】【得】【无】【厌】【,】【舍】【弃】【了】【心】【灵】【的】【宁】【静】【;】【有】【人】【选】【择】【趋】【炎】【附】【势】【,】【沽】【名】【钓】【誉】【,】【贪】【赃】【枉】【法】【,】【他】【的】【灵】【魂】【已】【降】【到】【地】【狱】【;】【有】【人】【选】【择】【醉】【生】【梦】【死】【,】【消】【耗】【了】【时】【间】【,】【浪】【费】【了】【生】【命】【。】【他】【们】【建】【碑】【题】【名】【,】【想】【不】【朽】【,】【到】【头】【来】【,】【却】【落】【得】【个】【遭】【世】【人】【唾】【骂】【,】【遗】【臭】【万】【年】【的】【下】【场】【!】【有】【人】【选】【择】【一】【视】【同】【仁】【,】【秉】【公】【执】【法】【,】【得】【到】【了】【灵】【魂】【的】【升】【华】【;】【有】【人】【选】【择】【做】【人】【民】【的】【公】【仆】【,】【为】【民】【请】【命】【,】【受】【到】【了】【人】【民】【的】【爱】【戴】【;】【有】【人】【选】【择】【两】【袖】【清】【风】【,】【为】【民】【谋】【利】【,】【得】【到】【了】【心】【灵】【的】【富】【足】【;】【有】【人】【选】【择】【淡】【泊】【名】【利】【,】【兢】【兢】【业】【业】【,】【一】【生】【无】【憾】【,】【默】【默】【无】【闻】【,】【他】【们】【的】【名】【字】【却】【流】【芳】【百】【世】【,】【永】【垂】【不】【朽】【!】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【有】【人】【选】【择】【仕】【途】【上】【的】【飞】【黄】【腾】【达】【,】【金】【钱】【上】【的】【贪】【得】【无】【厌】【。】【他】【们】【勾】【心】【斗】【角】【,】【尔】【虞】【我】【诈】【,】【等】【到】【白】【发】【苍】【苍】【,】【才】【猛】【然】【惊】【悟】【,】【可】【早】【已】【错】【过】【了】【人】【生】【最】【美】【丽】【的】【风】【景】【,】【得】【到】【的】【只】【是】【心】【灵】【的】【空】【虚】【和】【冰】【冷】【的】【钞】【票】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【有】【人】【选】【择】【失】【败】【,】【他】【说】【:】【“】【失】【败】【乃】【成】【功】【之】【母】【。】【”】【有】【人】【选】【择】【成】【功】【,】【他】【说】【:】【“】【成】【功】【最】【诱】【人】【。】【”】【有】【人】【选】【择】【风】【风】【雨】【雨】【,】【他】【说】【:】【“】【不】【经】【历】【风】【雨】【,】【怎】【能】【见】【彩】【虹】【?】【”】【有】【人】【选】【择】【风】【和】【日】【丽】【,】【他】【认】【为】【:】【“】【平】【凡】【的】【人】【生】【最】【真】【实】【。】【”】【有】【人】【选】【择】【惊】【涛】【骇】【浪】【,】【他】【豪】【迈】【地】【说】【:】【“】【我】【要】【挑】【战】【生】【命】【。】【”】【有】【人】【选】【择】【风】【平】【浪】【静】【,】【他】【总】【爱】【说】【:】【“】【我】【这】【个】【人】【不】【能】【冒】【风】【险】【。】【”】【有】【人】【选】【择】【努】【力】【拼】【搏】【,】【他】【认】【为】【拼】【搏】【才】【会】【有】【五】【彩】【斑】【斓】【的】【人】【生】【。】【有】【人】【选】【择】【及】【时】【行】【乐】【,】【他】【认】【为】【“】【人】【生】【得】【意】【须】【尽】【欢】【,】【莫】【使】【金】【樽】【空】【对】【月】【”】【。】【有】【人】【选】【择】【幻】【想】【,】【他】【陶】【醉】【地】【说】【:】【“】【王】【子】【与】【灰】【姑】【娘】【的】【事】【时】【有】【发】【生】【。】【”】【有】【人】【选】【择】【现】【实】【,】【他】【坚】【定】【地】【说】【:】【“】【这】【世】【界】【是】【透】【明】【的】【,】【我】【看】【得】【很】【清】【楚】【。】【”】【有】【人】【选】【择】【浪】【漫】【的】【情】【节】【,】【不】【在】【乎】【天】【长】【地】【久】【,】【只】【求】【曾】【经】【拥】【有】【。】【有】【人】【选】【择】【美】【好】【的】【结】【果】【,】【要】【笑】【到】【最】【后】【,】【他】【要】【做】【最】【后】【的】【胜】【利】【者】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【人】【各】【有】【志】【,】【无】【论】【你】【选】【择】【了】【什】【么】【,】【只】【要】【问】【心】【无】【愧】【、】【无】【怨】【无】【悔】【就】【可】【以】【了】【。】【至】【少】【,】【你】【可】【以】【大】【声】【地】【向】【世】【人】【宣】【告】【:】【今】【生】【,】【我】【没】【白】【走】【这】【一】【遭】【!】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【(】【指】【导】【老】【师】【:】【孙】【剑】【飞】【)】【<】【b】【r】【>】

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