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2019年11月21日 16:24

【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【我】【的】【童】【年】【生】【活】【丰】【富】【多】【彩】【,】【像】【万】【花】【筒】【一】【样】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【记】【得】【过】【8】【岁】【生】【日】【的】【时】【候】【,】【妈】【妈】【给】【我】【买】【了】【一】【个】【塑】【料】【娃】【娃】【作】【为】【我】【的】【生】【日】【礼】【物】【。】【这】【个】【娃】【娃】【特】【别】【的】【大】【,】【有】【2】【尺】【多】【高】【,】【她】【身】【穿】【一】【件】【白】【色】【的】【连】【衣】【裙】【,】【裙】【子】【边】【上】【还】【镶】【着】【一】【圈】【金】【色】【的】【花】【边】【呢】【。】【最】【有】【趣】【的】【是】【这】【个】【娃】【娃】【还】【会】【唱】【歌】【,】【每】【当】【我】【心】【情】【不】【好】【的】【时】【候】【,】【它】【就】【会】【对】【着】【我】【唱】【歌】【,】【我】【特】【别】【喜】【欢】【这】【个】【娃】【娃】【,】【把】【她】【当】【做】【我】【的】【好】【朋】【友】【。】【当】【没】【人】【跟】【我】【玩】【的】【时】【候】【,】【我】【就】【悄】【悄】【告】【诉】【她】【我】【心】【里】【的】【秘】【密】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【在】【深】【秋】【里】【的】【一】【天】【,】【我】【看】【见】【她】【仍】【旧】【穿】【着】【那】【件】【白】【色】【的】【连】【衣】【裙】【,】【露】【着】【两】【条】【细】【长】【的】【小】【腿】【,】【心】【想】【:】【她】【多】【冷】【啊】【,】【我】【要】【给】【她】【找】【一】【个】【暖】【和】【的】【地】【方】【。】【于】【是】【,】【我】【抱】【着】【她】【走】【进】【了】【厨】【房】【,】【看】【见】【火】【炉】【烧】【得】【红】【红】【的】【,】【我】【想】【,】【如】【果】【把】【娃】【娃】【放】【在】【炉】【子】【边】【一】【定】【会】【非】【常】【暖】【和】【。】【于】【是】【,】【我】【在】【火】【炉】【上】【放】【了】【一】【块】【小】【铁】【皮】【,】【把】【娃】【娃】【放】【在】【了】【上】【面】【,】【慢】【慢】【地】【不】【知】【道】【怎】【么】【了】【,】【娃】【娃】【越】【来】【越】【矮】【,】【还】【散】【发】【出】【一】【股】【非】【常】【刺】【鼻】【的】【味】【道】【。】【看】【到】【这】【种】【情】【景】【我】【不】【由】【得】【哭】【了】【。】【妈】【妈】【闻】【到】【这】【刺】【鼻】【的】【味】【急】【忙】【跑】【了】【过】【来】【,】【一】【把】【拽】【下】【了】【娃】【娃】【,】【丢】【到】【一】【边】【,】【说】【:】【“】【这】【是】【怎】【么】【回】【事】【?】【”】【我】【哭】【着】【说】【:】【“】【天】【气】【冷】【了】【,】【我】【怕】【它】【冷】【,】【所】【以】【…】【…】【”】【听】【完】【我】【的】【话】【,】【妈】【妈】【哈】【哈】【大】【笑】【起】【来】【,】【告】【诉】【我】【说】【:】【娃】【娃】【是】【塑】【料】【做】【成】【的】【,】【塑】【料】【是】【不】【能】【用】【火】【烤】【的】【,】【一】【烤】【就】【熔】【化】【了】【。】【从】【那】【以】【后】【,】【我】【明】【白】【了】【这】【个】【道】【理】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【在】【我】【的】【记】【忆】【里】【,】【还】【有】【一】【件】【事】【让】【我】【想】【起】【来】【就】【不】【由】【得】【发】【笑】【。】【记】【得】【那】【是】【一】【个】【星】【期】【天】【,】【我】【一】【个】【人】【在】【家】【,】【闲】【着】【没】【事】【干】【,】【便】【去】【看】【电】【视】【,】【这】【时】【电】【视】【里】【正】【在】【讲】【吃】【燕】【窝】【的】【好】【处】【。】【我】【听】【到】【“】【燕】【窝】【“】【这】【个】【词】【便】【来】【了】【神】【,】【心】【想】【:】【这】【几】【天】【,】【我】【刚】【好】【有】【点】【感】【冒】【,】【不】【知】【燕】【窝】【治】【不】【治】【感】【冒】【呢】【?】【唉】【,】【管】【它】【治】【不】【治】【呢】【,】【先】【吃】【了】【再】【说】【吧】【!】【我】【便】【把】【我】【攒】【的】【压】【岁】【钱】【拿】【了】【出】【来】【,】【数】【了】【数】【,】【嘿】【!】【还】【挺】【多】【的】【呢】【,】【够】【买】【两】【盒】【了】【吧】【。】【可】【是】【,】【“】【事】【与】【愿】【违】【”】【,】【到】【了】【商】【店】【才】【发】【现】【,】【这】【些】【钱】【连】【一】【盒】【燕】【窝】【的】【1】【/】【1】【0】【都】【买】【不】【到】【。】【唉】【!】【我】【在】【嘴】【里】【嘟】【囔】【着】【“】【燕】【窝】【燕】【窝】【你】【可】【真】【贵】【呀】【!】【”】【突】【然】【,】【我】【的】【脑】【中】【闪】【过】【了】【一】【个】【绝】【妙】【的】【主】【意】【。】【对】【呀】【!】【燕】【窝】【燕】【窝】【不】【就】【是】【燕】【子】【的】【窝】【吗】【?】【我】【家】【房】【檐】【下】【不】【就】【有】【燕】【子】【的】【窝】【吗】【?】【弄】【一】【个】【在】【锅】【里】【一】【煮】【不】【就】【好】【了】【吗】【!】【我】【急】【忙】【跑】【回】【了】【家】【,】【开】【始】【去】【找】【我】【的】【材】【料】【,】【爬】【上】【爬】【下】【地】【总】【算】【把】【“】【燕】【窝】【”】【摘】【下】【来】【了】【,】【开】【始】【煮】【了】【,】【几】【分】【钟】【后】【我】【的】【“】【燕】【窝】【”】【就】【弄】【好】【了】【,】【盛】【到】【碗】【里】【慢】【慢】【地】【放】【在】【嘴】【边】【,】【轻】【轻】【地】【用】【舌】【头】【舔】【了】【一】【下】【,】【哇】【!】【好】【苦】【呀】【!】【可】【俗】【话】【说】【得】【好】【,】【“】【良】【药】【苦】【口】【利】【于】【病】【”】【,】【于】【是】【我】【毫】【无】【顾】【忌】【地】【“】【咕】【噜】【咕】【噜】【”】【喝】【了】【下】【去】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【过】【了】【1】【个】【小】【时】【,】【我】【以】【为】【这】【样】【就】【可】【以】【百】【病】【全】【消】【呢】【!】【可】【是】【肚】【子】【却】【疼】【了】【起】【来】【。】【妈】【妈】【回】【来】【后】【马】【上】【把】【我】【送】【到】【了】【医】【院】【,】【医】【生】【问】【我】【是】【怎】【么】【回】【事】【,】【我】【把】【来】【龙】【去】【脉】【和】【医】【生】【说】【了】【,】【医】【生】【和】【妈】【妈】【听】【了】【都】【大】【笑】【起】【来】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【每】【当】【回】【想】【起】【童】【年】【的】【事】【,】【我】【都】【会】【捧】【腹】【大】【笑】【,】【因】【为】【是】【这】【一】【件】【一】【件】【的】【趣】【事】【串】【起】【了】【我】【的】【童】【年】【,】【丰】【富】【了】【我】【的】【童】【年】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【本】【文】【生】【动】【地】【记】【叙】【了】【童】【年】【时】【的】【两】【件】【趣】【事】【,】【表】【现】【了】【“】【我】【”】【的】【天】【真】【稚】【气】【,】【让】【读】【者】【仿】【佛】【亲】【身】【经】【历】【一】【般】【。】【结】【构】【严】【谨】【,】【开】【门】【见】【山】【,】【首】【尾】【呼】【应】【,】【详】【略】【得】【当】【,】【展】【现】【了】【小】【作】【者】【较】【强】【的】【文】【字】【驾】【驭】【能】【力】【。】【文】【中】【的】【语】【言】【亲】【切】【、】【真】【实】【,】【动】【作】【描】【写】【和】【心】【理】【描】【写】【使】【人】【物】【活】【了】【起】【来】【,】【这】【在】【初】【一】【的】【学】【生】【中】【可】【以】【说】【是】【可】【圈】【可】【点】【。】【(】【指】【导】【老】【师】【:】【蒋】【本】【霞】【)】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【 】【技】【巧】【点】【拨】【:】【这】【篇】【文】【章】【用】【了】【“】【一】【字】【经】【纬】【”】【法】【。】【整】【篇】【叙】【事】【都】【突】【现】【了】【一】【个】【“】【趣】【”】【字】【,】【不】【论】【是】【给】【塑】【料】【娃】【娃】【取】【暖】【,】【还】【是】【掏】【燕】【子】【窝】【做】【“】【燕】【窝】【”】【吃】【,】【都】【显】【示】【了】【儿】【童】【易】【犯】【的】【“】【想】【当】【然】【”】【的】【“】【错】【误】【”】【,】【这】【种】【富】【有】【“】【白】【色】【幽】【默】【”】【的】【“】【误】【解】【”】【,】【不】【仅】【表】【现】【出】【孩】【子】【的】【天】【真】【率】【直】【,】【还】【影】【射】【成】【人】【世】【界】【中】【常】【犯】【的】【类】【似】【错】【误】【,】【文】【中】【丰】【富】【的】【内】【涵】【,】【都】【包】【含】【在】【一】【个】【“】【趣】【”】【字】【之】【中】【,】【令】【人】【笑】【过】【之】【后】【,】【深】【有】【所】【悟】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】

【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【外】【婆】【,】【您】【知】【道】【吗】【?】【我】【很】【想】【您】【,】【每】【当】【我】【想】【起】【您】【时】【我】【真】【的】【很】【想】【哭】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【那】【天】【,】【您】【打】【电】【话】【过】【来】【,】【问】【我】【想】【不】【想】【您】【,】【不】【知】【您】【是】【否】【知】【道】【,】【在】【我】【回】【答】【您】【时】【,】【我】【已】【经】【哭】【了】【。】【您】【对】【我】【说】【您】【很】【想】【我】【,】【在】【我】【还】【没】【回】【来】【时】【您】【就】【想】【我】【,】【不】【知】【道】【这】【是】【为】【什】【么】【?】【我】【听】【得】【出】【来】【,】【您】【的】【声】【音】【已】【经】【哽】【咽】【了】【,】【我】【也】【猜】【想】【得】【出】【来】【,】【这】【时】【的】【您】【应】【该】【已】【经】【泪】【流】【满】【面】【了】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【我】【小】【时】【候】【,】【您】【是】【那】【样】【疼】【我】【,】【我】【永】【远】【都】【会】【记】【得】【您】【对】【我】【的】【好】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【记】【得】【那】【一】【年】【,】【连】【续】【几】【个】【月】【都】【没】【有】【人】【家】【杀】【猪】【,】【好】【长】【时】【间】【我】【都】【没】【有】【吃】【到】【猪】【肉】【。】【每】【天】【每】【顿】【饭】【我】【都】【向】【您】【要】【肉】【吃】【,】【有】【时】【,】【看】【见】【没】【有】【肉】【,】【我】【甚】【至】【生】【气】【地】【扔】【下】【碗】【筷】【,】【不】【想】【吃】【饭】【。】【您】【总】【是】【又】【哄】【又】【骗】【,】【喂】【我】【吃】【饭】【。】【终】【于】【有】【人】【杀】【猪】【了】【,】【您】【便】【多】【买】【了】【一】【些】【回】【来】【。】【那】【天】【中】【午】【,】【您】【在】【炒】【菜】【,】【我】【也】【没】【有】【像】【往】【常】【一】【样】【出】【去】【玩】【,】【而】【是】【站】【在】【锅】【旁】【目】【不】【转】【睛】【地】【看】【着】【那】【肉】【一】【点】【点】【地】【煮】【熟】【,】【香】【味】【一】【点】【点】【散】【发】【出】【来】【。】【开】【饭】【了】【,】【我】【吃】【得】【津】【津】【有】【味】【,】【您】【把】【肉】【都】【夹】【在】【我】【碗】【里】【,】【终】【于】【,】【您】【夹】【了】【一】【块】【,】【正】【要】【往】【自】【己】【碗】【里】【送】【。】【被】【我】【看】【见】【了】【,】【我】【连】【忙】【说】【:】【“】【外】【婆】【,】【您】【是】【不】【吃】【肉】【的】【,】【对】【吗】【?】【您】【把】【肉】【买】【回】【来】【都】【是】【给】【我】【吃】【的】【!】【”】【您】【一】【听】【,】【连】【忙】【把】【肉】【放】【在】【我】【碗】【里】【。】【如】【今】【,】【您】【也】【只】【是】【当】【成】【茶】【余】【饭】【后】【的】【笑】【话】【讲】【给】【大】【家】【听】【,】【外】【公】【、】【妈】【妈】【他】【们】【都】【不】【相】【信】【,】【但】【它】【却】【勾】【起】【了】【我】【内】【心】【深】【处】【的】【记】【忆】【!】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【外】【婆】【,】【您】【是】【否】【记】【得】【今】【年】【正】【月】【里】【的】【一】【件】【事】【呢】【?】【那】【天】【,】【妹】【妹】【找】【我】【一】【起】【打】【羽】【毛】【球】【,】【我】【不】【小】【心】【,】【把】【您】【撞】【摔】【了】【。】【外】【婆】【,】【我】【明】【知】【道】【您】【身】【子】【弱】【,】【但】【我】【却】【害】【您】【摔】【跤】【,】【妈】【妈】【在】【一】【旁】【指】【责】【我】【,】【看】【着】【您】【那】【难】【受】【的】【表】【情】【,】【我】【那】【不】【争】【气】【的】【眼】【泪】【来】【了】【。】【我】【也】【不】【知】【是】【怎】【么】【了】【,】【一】【向】【能】【说】【会】【道】【的】【我】【竟】【连】【一】【声】【对】【不】【起】【都】【无】【法】【说】【出】【口】【,】【而】【您】【却】【反】【而】【过】【来】【安】【慰】【我】【。】【当】【时】【我】【更】【加】【难】【受】【了】【,】【眼】【泪】【也】【越】【流】【越】【多】【,】【今】【天】【,】【在】【这】【儿】【我】【就】【跟】【您】【说】【一】【声】【:】【“】【对】【不】【起】【,】【外】【婆】【,】【我】【真】【的】【不】【是】【故】【意】【的】【!】【”】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【外】【婆】【,】【我】【真】【的】【很】【爱】【您】【!】【您】【的】【眼】【睛】【有】【病】【,】【动】【不】【动】【就】【流】【泪】【,】【给】【我】【印】【象】【最】【深】【的】【就】【是】【那】【块】【手】【帕】【,】【每】【当】【眼】【泪】【掉】【下】【来】【时】【,】【您】【总】【是】【拿】【它】【擦】【。】【如】【今】【,】【它】【也】【“】【退】【休】【”】【了】【,】【可】【您】【的】【眼】【睛】【却】【还】【没】【好】【。】【我】【以】【后】【一】【定】【要】【挣】【钱】【治】【好】【您】【的】【眼】【睛】【,】【让】【您】【彻】【底】【不】【再】【需】【要】【手】【帕】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【外】【婆】【,】【我】【好】【想】【您】【,】【每】【次】【想】【起】【您】【,】【眼】【泪】【总】【是】【自】【己】【跑】【出】【来】【,】【不】【听】【我】【的】【指】【挥】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【小】【作】【者】【以】【细】【腻】【的】【笔】【调】【写】【了】【发】【生】【在】【“】【我】【”】【和】【外】【婆】【之】【间】【的】【琐】【事】【。】【“】【我】【”】【长】【时】【间】【没】【有】【吃】【到】【猪】【肉】【,】【老】【是】【吵】【着】【要】【吃】【,】【外】【婆】【“】【又】【哄】【又】【骗】【”】【,】【终】【于】【有】【一】【天】【,】【外】【婆】【买】【了】【肉】【回】【来】【,】【“】【我】【”】【在】【锅】【旁】【目】【不】【转】【睛】【地】【看】【着】【猪】【肉】【“】【一】【点】【点】【煮】【熟】【”】【“】【香】【味】【一】【点】【点】【散】【发】【出】【来】【”】【,】【活】【灵】【活】【现】【表】【现】【出】【“】【我】【”】【的】【嘴】【馋】【,】【符】【合】【一】【个】【孩】【子】【的】【心】【理】【。】【习】【作】【还】【讲】【述】【了】【“】【我】【”】【把】【外】【婆】【撞】【摔】【后】【,】【连】【一】【声】【对】【不】【起】【都】【未】【说】【出】【口】【,】【外】【婆】【不】【但】【不】【怪】【“】【我】【”】【,】【反】【而】【还】【安】【慰】【“】【我】【”】【,】【现】【在】【想】【起】【来】【,】【仍】【然】【后】【悔】【得】【不】【得】【了】【。】【习】【作】【结】【尾】【抒】【发】【了】【对】【外】【婆】【的】【强】【烈】【的】【思】【念】【之】【情】【。】【纵】【观】【全】【文】【,】【字】【里】【行】【间】【透】【露】【出】【浓】【浓】【的】【祖】【孙】【情】【,】【自】【始】【至】【终】【贯】【穿】【一】【个】【“】【想】【”】【字】【,】【扣】【住】【一】【个】【“】【情】【”】【字】【,】【通】【过】【一】【系】【列】【动】【作】【、】【神】【情】【表】【现】【出】【来】【。】【文】【从】【字】【顺】【,】【感】【染】【力】【强】【。】【(】【指】【导】【老】【师】【:】【史】【根】【银】【)】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【 】【技】【巧】【点】【拨】【:】【文】【章】【采】【用】【第】【二】【人】【称】【视】【点】【写】【法】【。】【运】【用】【这】【种】【叙】【述】【手】【法】【,】【叙】【述】【者】【(】【“】【我】【”】【)】【和】【人】【物】【(】【“】【您】【”】【或】【“】【你】【”】【)】【之】【间】【能】【更】【直】【接】【地】【倾】【诉】【衷】【曲】【,】【表】【现】【自】【己】【的】【喜】【怒】【悲】【欢】【。】【在】【文】【中】【抒】【写】【的】【祖】【孙】【间】【的】【心】【灵】【交】【流】【中】【,】【我】【们】【看】【到】【了】【血】【浓】【于】【水】【的】【感】【人】【亲】【情】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【微】【格】【素】【材】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【失】【势】【一】【落】【千】【丈】【强】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【[】【出】【处】【]】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【唐】【·】【韩】【愈】【《】【听】【颖】【师】【弹】【琴】【》】【(】【节】【录】【)】【:】【“】【跻】【攀】【分】【寸】【不】【可】【上】【,】【失】【势】【一】【落】【千】【丈】【强】【。】【”】【(】【琴】【声】【起】【伏】【抑】【扬】【一】【会】【儿】【高】【到】【极】【点】【,】【连】【一】【分】【一】【寸】【也】【不】【能】【再】【高】【了】【,】【一】【会】【儿】【又】【从】【高】【处】【一】【下】【子】【跌】【落】【千】【丈】【。】【)】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【[】【哲】【理】【链】【接】【]】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【事】【物】【的】【变】【化】【,】【经】【历】【着】【发】【生】【、】【发】【展】【和】【衰】【落】【、】【灭】【亡】【。】【“】【势】【”】【就】【是】【事】【物】【向】【上】【发】【展】【的】【形】【态】【。】【一】【失】【了】【“】【势】【”】【,】【发】【展】【就】【走】【向】【其】【反】【面】【,】【从】【向】【上】【的】【运】【动】【变】【为】【向】【下】【的】【运】【动】【。】【后】【来】【,】【这】【句】【诗】【演】【变】【为】【成】【语】【“】【一】【落】【千】【丈】【”】【,】【形】【容】【景】【况】【、】【地】【位】【的】【急】【剧】【下】【降】【。】【〔】【例】【〕】【“】【而】【且】【后】【来】【因】【为】【他】【的】【父】【亲】【去】【世】【,】【家】【庭】【生】【活】【更】【加】【一】【落】【千】【丈】【。】【”】【(】【《】【邓】【拓】【散】【文】【·】【曹】【雪】【芹】【和】【〈】【红】【楼】【梦】【〉】【》】【)】【<】【b】【r】【>】唐太宗李世民墓【<】【p】【>】【<】【s】【t】【r】【o】【n】【g】【>】【【】【篇】【九】【:】【我】【的】【多】【彩】【童】【年】【梦】【作】【文】【】】【<】【/】【s】【t】【r】【o】【n】【g】【>】【<】【/】【p】【>】

【<】【p】【>】【来】【到】【校】【园】【正】【门】【,】【首】【先】【映】【入】【眼】【帘】【的】【是】【一】【幅】【对】【联】【:】【天】【行】【健】【,】【稚】【子】【当】【自】【强】【不】【息】【;】【地】【势】【坤】【,】【师】【者】【以】【厚】【德】【载】【物】【。】【内】【容】【气】【势】【宏】【伟】【,】【奋】【发】【向】【上】【。】【<】【/】【p】【>】唐太宗李世民墓【<】【p】【>】【三】【年】【的】【幼】【儿】【园】【时】【光】【过】【去】【了】【,】【我】【迎】【来】【了】【小】【学】【一】【年】【级】【,】【你】【就】【开】【始】【每】【天】【查】【我】【背】【语】【文】【课】【文】【、】【数】【学】【乘】【法】【口】【诀】【、】【英】【语】【单】【词】【和】【短】【语】【。】【渐】【渐】【地】【我】【的】【年】【级】【越】【来】【越】【高】【,】【您】【为】【我】【操】【的】【心】【就】【越】【来】【越】【多】【了】【,】【因】【为】【我】【五】【年】【级】【了】【,】【明】【年】【六】【年】【级】【上】【完】【就】【要】【考】【初】【中】【了】【,】【您】【害】【怕】【我】【考】【不】【上】【好】【初】【中】【,】【老】【为】【我】【担】【心】【。】【<】【/】【p】【>】

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【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【【】【真】【题】【回】【放】【】】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【根】【据】【下】【面】【要】【求】【作】【文】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【微】【笑】【,】【标】【志】【着】【自】【信】【、】【雅】【量】【和】【大】【度】【,】【它】【是】【一】【种】【胸】【怀】【,】【一】【种】【境】【界】【。】【微】【笑】【着】【面】【对】【人】【生】【,】【品】【味】【生】【活】【的】【甘】【苦】【,】【失】【去】【的】【只】【是】【烦】【恼】【,】【赢】【得】【的】【则】【是】【整】【个】【世】【界】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【请】【以】【“】【微】【笑】【”】【为】【话】【题】【,】【自】【选】【角】【度】【,】【自】【拟】【题】【目】【,】【写】【一】【篇】【文】【章】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【要】【求】【:】【①】【除】【诗】【歌】【外】【,】【文】【体】【不】【限】【;】【②】【文】【中】【不】【得】【出】【现】【真】【实】【的】【姓】【名】【和】【学】【校】【名】【;】【③】【思】【想】【健】【康】【,】【内】【容】【充】【实】【,】【不】【少】【于】【5】【0】【0】【字】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【【】【试】【题】【解】【读】【】】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【2】【0】【1】【0】【年】【清】【远】【市】【中】【考】【语】【文】【的】【作】【文】【题】【目】【是】【以】【“】【微】【笑】【”】【为】【话】【题】【的】【话】【题】【作】【文】【。】【对】【于】【这】【类】【话】【题】【作】【文】【,】【可】【以】【说】【给】【了】【考】【生】【极】【大】【的】【自】【由】【选】【择】【的】【空】【间】【。】【考】【生】【可】【以】【根】【据】【自】【己】【的】【生】【活】【、】【写】【作】【特】【长】【等】【情】【况】【,】【选】【择】【内】【容】【、】【题】【目】【和】【写】【法】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【“】【微】【笑】【”】【一】【词】【,】【作】【动】【词】【用】【时】【是】【指】【不】【显】【著】【地】【、】【不】【出】【声】【地】【笑】【;】【作】【名】【词】【用】【时】【,】【意】【思】【是】【不】【显】【著】【的】【笑】【容】【。】【话】【题】【作】【文】【需】【要】【自】【己】【拟】【题】【,】【类】【似】【于】【半】【命】【题】【作】【文】【的】【拟】【题】【,】【甚】【至】【比】【半】【命】【题】【作】【文】【的】【拟】【题】【更】【灵】【活】【。】【通】【常】【的】【拟】【题】【方】【法】【是】【在】【话】【题】【词】【语】【的】【前】【面】【或】【后】【面】【加】【些】【字】【词】【,】【如】【“】【醉】【人】【的】【微】【笑】【”】【“】【珍】【藏】【心】【中】【的】【微】【笑】【”】【“】【微】【笑】【的】【魅】【力】【”】【“】【微】【笑】【着】【面】【对】【挫】【折】【”】【等】【;】【也】【可】【在】【前】【后】【都】【加】【些】【字】【词】【,】【如】【“】【那】【个】【微】【笑】【令】【我】【难】【忘】【”】【“】【老】【师】【的】【微】【笑】【使】【我】【不】【再】【自】【卑】【”】【等】【;】【当】【然】【,】【还】【可】【以】【不】【用】【话】【题】【的】【词】【语】【,】【另】【拟】【恰】【当】【的】【题】【目】【,】【如】【“】【生】【活】【的】【润】【滑】【剂】【”】【等】【。】【只】【要】【紧】【扣】【“】【微】【笑】【”】【这】【个】【中】【心】【内】【容】【,】【或】【清】【新】【别】【致】【,】【或】【意】【味】【深】【长】【,】【或】【真】【情】【洋】【溢】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【在】【内】【容】【上】【,】【试】【题】【中】【提】【示】【了】【两】【句】【话】【:】【“】【微】【笑】【,】【标】【志】【着】【自】【信】【、】【雅】【量】【和】【大】【度】【,】【它】【是】【一】【种】【胸】【怀】【,】【一】【种】【境】【界】【。】【”】【“】【微】【笑】【着】【面】【对】【人】【生】【,】【品】【味】【生】【活】【的】【甘】【苦】【,】【失】【去】【的】【只】【是】【烦】【恼】【,】【赢】【得】【的】【则】【是】【整】【个】【世】【界】【。】【”】【在】【众】【多】【的】【内】【容】【中】【,】【应】【选】【取】【有】【意】【义】【,】【能】【反】【映】【时】【代】【气】【息】【、】【社】【会】【风】【貌】【、】【人】【生】【价】【值】【而】【又】【是】【别】【人】【所】【没】【有】【的】【来】【写】【。】【我】【们】【可】【以】【写】【自】【己】【亲】【身】【经】【历】【的】【事】【,】【也】【可】【以】【写】【别】【人】【经】【历】【的】【事】【;】【可】【以】【从】【正】【面】【写】【,】【也】【可】【以】【从】【反】【面】【(】【没】【有】【笑】【容】【)】【写】【(】【当】【然】【,】【最】【后】【还】【是】【要】【点】【出】【我】【们】【需】【要】【微】【笑】【这】【个】【内】【容】【)】【。】【我】【们】【可】【以】【抓】【住】【微】【笑】【的】【瞬】【间】【,】【折】【射】【人】【物】【的】【情】【感】【;】【或】【用】【几】【个】【微】【笑】【的】【画】【面】【,】【串】【起】【一】【个】【感】【人】【的】【故】【事】【,】【让】【读】【者】【从】【笑】【容】【里】【窥】【探】【到】【人】【物】【的】【美】【好】【性】【情】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【在】【文】【体】【的】【确】【定】【上】【,】【可】【写】【成】【记】【叙】【文】【、】【说】【明】【文】【、】【议】【论】【文】【。】【还】【可】【以】【写】【成】【童】【话】【、】【寓】【言】【故】【事】【,】【揭】【示】【一】【个】【有】【教】【育】【意】【义】【的】【道】【理】【;】【也】【可】【以】【写】【成】【微】【型】【小】【说】【,】【以】【曲】【折】【的】【情】【节】【和】【深】【刻】【的】【主】【题】【感】【动】【人】【。】【总】【之】【,】【我】【们】【只】【要】【选】【择】【自】【己】【最】【熟】【悉】【、】【最】【擅】【长】【的】【,】【而】【且】【尽】【可】【能】【做】【到】【新】【颖】【别】【致】【就】【行】【了】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【【】【考】【场】【佳】【作】【一】【】】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【微】【笑】【着】【生】【活】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【●】【清】【远】【一】【考】【生】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【所】【谓】【生】【活】【,】【可】【以】【简】【单】【解】【释】【为】【生】【命】【的】【活】【法】【。】【不】【同】【的】【人】【有】【不】【同】【的】【活】【法】【,】【因】【此】【不】【同】【的】【人】【对】【生】【命】【也】【有】【不】【同】【的】【感】【悟】【,】【关】【键】【是】【看】【你】【如】【何】【来】【把】【握】【生】【活】【,】【享】【受】【生】【命】【。】【我】【们】【要】【用】【一】【种】【乐】【观】【的】【态】【度】【去】【面】【对】【生】【命】【,】【微】【笑】【着】【生】【活】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【人】【生】【在】【世】【,】【痛】【苦】【、】【失】【败】【和】【挫】【折】【在】【所】【难】【免】【,】【我】【们】【应】【以】【积】【极】【的】【态】【度】【对】【待】【生】【活】【,】【管】【它】【一】【切】【如】【何】【,】【都】【要】【微】【笑】【去】【面】【对】【。】【微】【笑】【去】【面】【对】【失】【败】【,】【在】【失】【败】【中】【总】【结】【经】【验】【教】【训】【,】【你】【会】【变】【得】【坚】【强】【;】【微】【笑】【去】【面】【对】【痛】【苦】【,】【一】【切】【会】【烟】【消】【云】【散】【,】【烦】【恼】【将】【不】【再】【纠】【缠】【。】【相】【信】【大】【家】【都】【知】【道】【海】【伦】【·】【凯】【勒】【吧】【。】【1】【8】【8】【2】【年】【,】【因】【为】【一】【次】【高】【烧】【使】【她】【失】【去】【了】【视】【力】【和】【听】【力】【,】【她】【仿】【佛】【置】【身】【在】【黑】【暗】【的】【牢】【不】【可】【破】【的】【笼】【中】【无】【法】【摆】【脱】【。】【万】【幸】【的】【是】【海】【伦】【并】【不】【是】【个】【轻】【易】【认】【输】【的】【人】【,】【虽】【然】【她】【看】【不】【见】【也】【听】【不】【见】【,】【但】【是】【她】【总】【是】【那】【么】【的】【坚】【强】【,】【总】【是】【那】【么】【的】【努】【力】【,】【总】【是】【用】【她】【那】【灿】【烂】【的】【微】【笑】【面】【对】【生】【活】【,】【终】【于】【创】【造】【了】【她】【的】【人】【生】【辉】【煌】【。】【而】【我】【们】【都】【是】【拥】【有】【健】【康】【体】【魄】【的】【人】【,】【在】【生】【活】【中】【也】【会】【遇】【到】【一】【点】【点】【挫】【折】【、】【一】【点】【点】【磨】【难】【,】【那】【么】【和】【海】【伦】【·】【凯】【勒】【所】【遭】【受】【的】【苦】【难】【相】【比】【,】【又】【算】【得】【了】【什】【么】【呢】【?】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【微】【笑】【着】【生】【活】【很】【简】【单】【,】【只】【要】【你】【学】【会】【乐】【观】【地】【思】【考】【就】【能】【做】【到】【。】【同】【一】【个】【问】【题】【,】【乐】【观】【和】【悲】【观】【的】【人】【会】【作】【出】【相】【反】【的】【结】【论】【,】【产】【生】【相】【反】【的】【感】【受】【,】【关】【键】【是】【看】【你】【自】【己】【怎】【么】【想】【。】【做】【一】【个】【微】【笑】【面】【对】【生】【活】【的】【人】【,】【你】【自】【己】【的】【人】【生】【也】【会】【从】【此】【改】【观】【。】【曾】【听】【说】【过】【一】【个】【故】【事】【:】【有】【一】【位】【老】【太】【太】【,】【她】【的】【大】【女】【儿】【嫁】【给】【了】【伞】【店】【老】【板】【,】【小】【女】【儿】【当】【上】【了】【洗】【衣】【作】【坊】【的】【主】【管】【。】【于】【是】【老】【太】【太】【雨】【天】【担】【心】【小】【女】【儿】【洗】【衣】【作】【坊】【的】【衣】【服】【晾】【不】【干】【,】【晴】【天】【担】【心】【大】【女】【婿】【伞】【店】【的】【雨】【伞】【卖】【不】【出】【去】【,】【成】【天】【忧】【心】【忡】【忡】【。】【后】【来】【有】【人】【说】【:】【“】【你】【真】【有】【福】【气】【,】【雨】【天】【大】【女】【儿】【家】【生】【意】【兴】【隆】【,】【晴】【天】【小】【女】【儿】【家】【顾】【客】【盈】【门】【,】【天】【天】【都】【有】【好】【消】【息】【啊】【!】【”】【老】【太】【太】【这】【么】【一】【想】【,】【还】【真】【是】【啊】【,】【从】【此】【无】【忧】【无】【虑】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【微】【笑】【着】【面】【对】【生】【活】【中】【的】【一】【切】【,】【是】【人】【生】【的】【一】【种】【坦】【然】【。】【身】【处】【顺】【境】【时】【不】【张】【扬】【、】【不】【狂】【妄】【,】【身】【处】【逆】【境】【时】【不】【气】【馁】【、】【不】【放】【弃】【,】【从】【容】【地】【迎】【接】【命】【运】【的】【挑】【战】【。】【我】【们】【要】【把】【眼】【光】【放】【远】【,】【学】【会】【从】【名】【利】【中】【解】【脱】【。】【生】【命】【的】【意】【义】【在】【于】【求】【索】【,】【只】【要】【你】【扬】【起】【理】【想】【的】【风】【帆】【,】【荡】【起】【奋】【斗】【的】【双】【桨】【,】【就】【会】【寻】【找】【到】【真】【正】【属】【于】【自】【己】【的】【最】【宝】【贵】【的】【东】【西】【。】【维】【持】【生】【命】【的】【是】【事】【业】【,】【贵】【重】【的】【财】【富】【是】【健】【康】【的】【身】【体】【,】【真】【正】【的】【价】【值】【是】【为】【人】【民】【做】【了】【什】【么】【。】【人】【生】【只】【是】【一】【个】【过】【程】【,】【赤】【条】【条】【地】【来】【,】【赤】【条】【条】【地】【去】【。】【不】【要】【奢】【望】【太】【多】【,】【要】【珍】【惜】【拥】【有】【的】【,】【从】【中】【挖】【掘】【出】【满】【足】【、】【自】【信】【和】【快】【乐】【。】【凡】【事】【保】【持】【健】【康】【的】【心】【态】【,】【就】【能】【微】【笑】【着】【生】【活】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【微】【笑】【着】【面】【对】【生】【活】【,】【不】【是】【无】【所】【作】【为】【和】【不】【思】【进】【取】【,】【而】【是】【以】【一】【颗】【明】【净】【的】【心】【平】【静】【地】【对】【待】【生】【活】【。】【微】【笑】【面】【对】【生】【活】【是】【一】【种】【积】【极】【的】【态】【度】【、】【乐】【观】【的】【精】【神】【。】【微】【笑】【着】【生】【活】【,】【生】【活】【会】【更】【精】【彩】【!】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【这】【是】【一】【篇】【议】【论】【文】【。】【文】【章】【开】【头】【亮】【出】【观】【点】【:】【我】【们】【要】【用】【一】【种】【乐】【观】【的】【态】【度】【去】【面】【对】【生】【命】【,】【微】【笑】【着】【生】【活】【;】【中】【间】【部】【分】【从】【以】【积】【极】【的】【态】【度】【对】【待】【痛】【苦】【、】【失】【败】【和】【挫】【折】【,】【学】【会】【乐】【观】【地】【思】【考】【问】【题】【,】【保】【持】【健】【康】【的】【心】【态】【等】【几】【方】【面】【,】【摆】【事】【实】【、】【讲】【道】【理】【告】【诉】【我】【们】【该】【怎】【么】【做】【;】【结】【尾】【呼】【应】【开】【头】【,】【重】【申】【观】【点】【。】【全】【文】【说】【理】【透】【彻】【,】【结】【构】【严】【谨】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【【】【考】【场】【佳】【作】【二】【】】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【充】【满】【母】【爱】【的】【微】【笑】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【●】【清】【远】【一】【考】【生】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【“】【谁】【言】【寸】【草】【心】【,】【报】【得】【三】【春】【晖】【”】【,】【每】【当】【我】【想】【起】【孟】【郊】【《】【游】【子】【吟】【》】【中】【的】【这】【句】【诗】【时】【,】【那】【一】【幕】【,】【那】【微】【笑】【便】【又】【出】【现】【在】【我】【眼】【前】【…】【…】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【汽】【车】【在】【公】【路】【上】【慢】【慢】【地】【向】【前】【爬】【行】【,】【车】【里】【很】【拥】【挤】【。】【这】【时】【的】【我】【真】【希】【望】【自】【己】【能】【变】【小】【,】【能】【找】【个】【舒】【适】【的】【座】【位】【。】【好】【不】【容】【易】【到】【了】【下】【一】【个】【站】【,】【这】【时】【我】【才】【能】【活】【动】【活】【动】【我】【那】【双】【发】【麻】【的】【双】【腿】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【在】【车】【门】【关】【了】【一】【半】【的】【时】【候】【,】【忽】【然】【传】【来】【一】【位】【妇】【女】【的】【呼】【叫】【:】【“】【等】【等】【!】【等】【等】【!】【”】【这】【时】【车】【停】【了】【下】【来】【,】【车】【上】【一】【阵】【哄】【乱】【,】【“】【少】【赚】【点】【不】【行】【吗】【?】【车】【里】【已】【经】【够】【挤】【了】【,】【想】【把】【我】【们】【挤】【死】【呀】【!】【”】【一】【些】【不】【耐】【烦】【的】【人】【向】【售】【票】【员】【喊】【着】【。】【这】【时】【售】【票】【员】【对】【外】【面】【大】【声】【地】【喊】【:】【“】【快】【点】【,】【车】【要】【走】【了】【!】【”】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【车】【厢】【里】【,】【在】【窗】【边】【的】【乘】【客】【往】【窗】【外】【看】【,】【忽】【然】【他】【们】【不】【约】【而】【同】【的】【“】【呀】【”】【了】【一】【声】【。】【车】【上】【的】【乘】【客】【都】【往】【外】【面】【看】【,】【原】【来】【那】【位】【赶】【车】【的】【妇】【女】【不】【小】【心】【被】【路】【上】【的】【一】【块】【石】【头】【绊】【倒】【了】【,】【传】【来】【一】【阵】【婴】【儿】【的】【哭】【泣】【声】【。】【妇】【女】【连】【忙】【向】【前】【抱】【起】【那】【用】【围】【裙】【裹】【着】【的】【婴】【儿】【,】【来】【不】【及】【拍】【拍】【自】【己】【身】【上】【的】【泥】【土】【,】【就】【向】【车】【门】【跑】【来】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【车】【门】【关】【上】【了】【,】【一】【个】【背】【着】【画】【板】【的】【小】【伙】【子】【给】【那】【位】【妇】【女】【让】【了】【座】【。】【车】【上】【除】【了】【那】【位】【妇】【女】【低】【声】【哄】【小】【孩】【的】【声】【音】【之】【外】【,】【再】【也】【听】【不】【到】【其】【他】【声】【音】【了】【。】【不】【久】【,】【婴】【儿】【睡】【着】【了】【,】【那】【位】【妇】【女】【脸】【上】【露】【出】【了】【笑】【容】【。】【她】【亲】【了】【亲】【婴】【儿】【可】【爱】【的】【脸】【,】【显】【出】【怜】【爱】【的】【表】【情】【。】【突】【然】【,】【惊】【恐】【又】【爬】【上】【了】【那】【位】【妇】【女】【的】【脸】【,】【原】【来】【那】【位】【妇】【女】【的】【手】【上】【有】【鲜】【红】【的】【血】【迹】【。】【她】【解】【开】【裹】【婴】【儿】【的】【围】【裙】【,】【在】【婴】【儿】【身】【上】【找】【了】【一】【遍】【又】【一】【遍】【,】【可】【是】【没】【有】【发】【现】【血】【迹】【。】【最】【后】【那】【位】【妇】【女】【的】【脸】【上】【又】【露】【出】【了】【灿】【烂】【的】【笑】【容】【,】【似】【乎】【所】【有】【美】【好】【的】【事】【情】【都】【发】【生】【在】【她】【身】【上】【—】【—】【原】【来】【她】【发】【现】【伤】【口】【是】【在】【自】【己】【的】【胳】【膊】【肘】【上】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【眼】【前】【这】【一】【幕】【深】【深】【地】【烙】【在】【我】【的】【心】【底】【,】【虽】【然】【它】【无】【法】【与】【大】【师】【达】【·】【芬】【奇】【的】【“】【蒙】【娜】【丽】【莎】【的】【微】【笑】【”】【相】【提】【并】【论】【,】【但】【它】【在】【我】【的】【心】【里】【却】【已】【成】【为】【一】【幅】【名】【画】【。】【那】【微】【笑】【是】【那】【样】【的】【美】【,】【因】【为】【那】【是】【充】【满】【母】【爱】【的】【微】【笑】【!】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【文】【章】【写】【的】【是】【作】【者】【亲】【眼】【所】【见】【的】【事】【情】【。】【文】【章】【不】【长】【,】【倒】【数】【第】【二】【段】【是】【事】【件】【的】【高】【潮】【:】【妇】【女】【哄】【小】【孩】【、】【亲】【小】【孩】【,】【忽】【然】【发】【现】【自】【己】【手】【上】【有】【血】【迹】【,】【以】【为】【是】【孩】【子】【受】【伤】【了】【,】【脸】【上】【露】【出】【惊】【恐】【的】【神】【色】【;】【当】【知】【道】【孩】【子】【没】【有】【受】【伤】【时】【,】【“】【脸】【上】【露】【出】【了】【灿】【烂】【的】【笑】【容】【,】【似】【乎】【所】【有】【美】【好】【的】【事】【情】【都】【发】【生】【在】【她】【身】【上】【”】【。】【母】【亲】【的】【爱】【子】【之】【心】【可】【见】【一】【斑】【。】【文】【章】【以】【“】【微】【笑】【”】【为】【中】【心】【去】【展】【开】【,】【这】【“】【微】【笑】【”】【最】【终】【是】【定】【格】【在】【题】【目】【、】【开】【头】【和】【结】【尾】【上】【,】【并】【提】【到】【“】【蒙】【娜】【丽】【莎】【的】【微】【笑】【”】【,】【寓】【意】【很】【深】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】唐太宗李世民墓【<】【p】【>】【姜】【,】【在】【很】【多】【人】【看】【来】【,】【无】【疑】【是】【一】【种】【&】【l】【d】【q】【u】【o】【;】【张】【牙】【舞】【爪】【&】【r】【d】【q】【u】【o】【;】【的】【怪】【物】【,】【但】【为】【了】【锻】【炼】【自】【己】【坚】【强】【的】【意】【志】【和】【过】【硬】【的】【承】【受】【能】【力】【,】【我】【决】【定】【向】【姜】【宣】【战】【!】【于】【是】【&】【l】【d】【q】【u】【o】【;】【翟】【睿】【冰】【v】【s】【老】【姜】【&】【r】【d】【q】【u】【o】【;】【的】【战】【役】【全】【面】【打】【响】【。】【<】【/】【p】【>】

【<】【p】【>】【&】【l】【d】【q】【u】【o】【;】【水】【带】【了】【吗】【?】【&】【r】【d】【q】【u】【o】【;】【耳】【畔】【又】【响】【起】【了】【妈】【妈】【重】【复】【了】【无】【数】【次】【的】【话】【。】【每】【天】【都】【会】【说】【一】【遍】【,】【她】【不】【觉】【得】【烦】【,】【我】【还】【觉】【得】【烦】【了】【。】【<】【/】【p】【>】唐太宗李世民墓【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【[】【新】【题】【设】【计】【]】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【观】【察】【秋】【天】【的】【景】【物】【,】【写】【一】【篇】【文】【章】【,】【记】【下】【所】【观】【察】【的】【景】【物】【和】【当】【时】【的】【感】【受】【。】【题】【目】【自】【拟】【,】【但】【标】【题】【中】【必】【须】【含】【“】【秋】【”】【字】【,】【如】【《】【校】【园】【的】【秋】【天】【》】【《】【秋】【到】【山】【村】【》】【《】【秋】【天】【的】【田】【野】【》】【《】【月】【到】【中】【秋】【》】【等】【。】【不】【少】【于】【6】【0】【0】【字】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【[】【可】【以】【这】【样】【写】【]】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【这】【道】【题】【是】【要】【为】【秋】【天】【写】【一】【曲】【颂】【歌】【,】【表】【达】【对】【秋】【天】【的】【赞】【美】【之】【情】【。】【应】【该】【说】【同】【学】【们】【对】【秋】【天】【比】【较】【熟】【悉】【,】【值】【得】【写】【的】【地】【方】【也】【很】【多】【。】【可】【写】【大】【自】【然】【的】【风】【、】【雨】【、】【日】【、】【月】【、】【霜】【等】【,】【也】【可】【写】【花】【草】【树】【木】【中】【的】【典】【型】【物】【,】【如】【菊】【花】【、】【枫】【叶】【、】【青】【松】【等】【;】【可】【以】【写】【动】【物】【的】【变】【化】【,】【如】【秋】【虫】【四】【起】【,】【阵】【雁】【高】【飞】【,】【也】【可】【以】【写】【秋】【天】【收】【获】【的】【情】【景】【;】【可】【以】【通】【过】【对】【比】【,】【来】【写】【秋】【天】【与】【其】【他】【季】【节】【的】【不】【同】【,】【抒】【发】【对】【秋】【天】【的】【独】【特】【感】【情】【,】【也】【可】【以】【由】【自】【然】【的】【秋】【天】【联】【想】【到】【人】【生】【的】【秋】【天】【,】【即】【生】【命】【的】【成】【熟】【,】【或】【人】【生】【耕】【耘】【后】【的】【收】【获】【,】【或】【人】【生】【的】【衰】【老】【;】【可】【由】【秋】【菊】【联】【想】【到】【高】【洁】【的】【人】【品】【,】【可】【由】【秋】【风】【秋】【雨】【触】【发】【离】【别】【相】【思】【之】【苦】【,】【也】【可】【以】【展】【开】【想】【象】【的】【翅】【膀】【,】【写】【心】【中】【的】【秋】【天】【美】【景】【或】【理】【想】【中】【的】【秋】【天】【;】【可】【以】【从】【声】【音】【即】【听】【觉】【的】【角】【度】【来】【写】【秋】【天】【,】【也】【可】【以】【从】【色】【彩】【方】【面】【来】【写】【秋】【天】【…】【…】【总】【之】【,】【秋】【天】【可】【写】【的】【内】【容】【是】【丰】【富】【多】【彩】【的】【,】【写】【作】【的】【方】【法】【也】【是】【灵】【活】【多】【样】【的】【。】【但】【要】【特】【别】【提】【醒】【同】【学】【们】【注】【意】【的】【是】【,】【不】【管】【选】【择】【什】【么】【内】【容】【来】【写】【,】【都】【必】【须】【安】【排】【好】【文】【章】【的】【结】【构】【。】【写】【景】【的】【顺】【序】【很】【多】【,】【考】【虑】【到】【同】【学】【们】【初】【学】【写】【景】【的】【文】【章】【,】【宜】【运】【用】【“】【移】【步】【换】【景】【”】【法】【,】【就】【是】【描】【写】【景】【物】【时】【,】【人】【走】【景】【移】【,】【随】【着】【观】【察】【点】【的】【变】【换】【,】【不】【断】【展】【现】【新】【画】【面】【。】【采】【用】【移】【步】【换】【景】【法】【描】【写】【秋】【天】【的】【景】【物】【时】【,】【首】【先】【要】【把】【观】【察】【点】【的】【变】【换】【交】【代】【清】【楚】【。】【这】【样】【,】【读】【者】【才】【能】【清】【楚】【地】【知】【道】【游】【览】【或】【参】【观】【的】【路】【线】【。】【其】【次】【要】【把】【移】【步】【中】【或】【移】【步】【后】【所】【见】【到】【的】【景】【物】【具】【体】【地】【展】【现】【出】【来】【,】【使】【读】【者】【看】【到】【一】【幅】【幅】【绚】【丽】【多】【彩】【、】【内】【容】【丰】【富】【的】【生】【动】【画】【面】【。】【再】【次】【要】【围】【绕】【一】【个】【中】【心】【精】【心】【剪】【裁】【,】【展】【示】【不】【同】【的】【画】【面】【,】【避】【免】【有】【支】【离】【破】【碎】【的】【感】【觉】【;】【要】【把】【一】【路】【上】【最】【有】【特】【色】【的】【景】【物】【描】【绘】【出】【来】【,】【删】【去】【一】【般】【性】【的】【描】【写】【,】【避】【免】【记】【流】【水】【账】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【[】【佳】【作】【展】【示】【]】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【秋】【天】【的】【色】【彩】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【●】【陈】【佳】【秋】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【文】【人】【墨】【客】【笔】【下】【的】【秋】【天】【总】【是】【那】【么】【迷】【人】【,】【在】【我】【们】【青】【少】【年】【的】【眼】【里】【,】【最】【迷】【人】【的】【还】【是】【秋】【天】【的】【色】【彩】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【走】【进】【秋】【天】【的】【校】【园】【,】【火】【红】【的】【枫】【树】【在】【绿】【色】【的】【树】【丛】【中】【炫】【耀】【着】【自】【己】【红】【色】【的】【身】【姿】【。】【远】【远】【望】【去】【,】【就】【像】【一】【丛】【丛】【的】【火】【焰】【在】【熊】【熊】【地】【燃】【烧】【着】【,】【让】【人】【觉】【得】【一】【阵】【阵】【的】【温】【暖】【。】【走】【近】【一】【看】【,】【火】【红】【火】【红】【的】【枫】【叶】【随】【着】【秋】【风】【摇】【晃】【着】【,】【就】【像】【一】【双】【双】【带】【着】【红】【手】【套】【的】【小】【手】【向】【同】【学】【们】【表】【示】【欢】【迎】【呢】【!】【 】【“】【停】【车】【坐】【爱】【枫】【林】【晚】【,】【霜】【叶】【红】【于】【二】【月】【花】【。】【”】【的】【确】【如】【此】【,】【体】【会】【着】【诗】【人】【的】【这】【种】【意】【境】【,】【我】【不】【禁】【赞】【叹】【道】【:】【哦】【,】【原】【来】【秋】【天】【是】【红】【色】【的】【!】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【走】【进】【秋】【天】【的】【小】【河】【旁】【,】【河】【旁】【开】【满】【了】【不】【起】【眼】【的】【白】【色】【野】【菊】【花】【。】【有】【的】【花】【瓣】【全】【展】【开】【了】【,】【露】【出】【嫩】【白】【色】【的】【花】【芯】【;】【有】【的】【才】【展】【开】【两】【三】【瓣】【;】【还】【有】【的】【刚】【打】【着】【朵】【儿】【,】【好】【像】【马】【上】【就】【要】【展】【开】【花】【瓣】【似】【的】【。】【它】【们】【虽】【然】【没】【有】【公】【园】【里】【展】【出】【的】【菊】【花】【那】【么】【娇】【贵】【,】【没】【有】【校】【园】【里】【的】【枫】【树】【那】【么】【显】【眼】【,】【但】【它】【与】【大】【自】【然】【抗】【争】【,】【顽】【强】【地】【生】【长】【着】【,】【为】【了】【这】【短】【暂】【的】【绽】【开】【,】【积】【聚】【一】【年】【的】【力】【量】【。】【花】【虽】【小】【,】【那】【股】【乡】【村】【的】【泥】【土】【气】【息】【却】【让】【我】【百】【闻】【不】【厌】【。】【我】【不】【禁】【赞】【叹】【道】【:】【哦】【,】【原】【来】【秋】【天】【是】【白】【色】【的】【!】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【走】【进】【秋】【雨】【后】【的】【野】【外】【,】【碧】【空】【如】【洗】【,】【高】【远】【湛】【蓝】【的】【天】【,】【明】【净】【、】【旷】【达】【。】【只】【有】【秋】【的】【天】【空】【才】【有】【这】【般】【舒】【适】【的】【蓝】【!】【那】【令】【人】【心】【醉】【的】【蓝】【,】【洗】【去】【人】【们】【心】【灵】【上】【的】【尘】【埃】【。】【我】【不】【禁】【赞】【叹】【道】【:】【哦】【,】【原】【来】【秋】【天】【是】【蓝】【色】【的】【!】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【走】【进】【秋】【天】【的】【田】【野】【里】【,】【正】【是】【丰】【收】【的】【季】【节】【。】【微】【风】【吹】【过】【,】【金】【黄】【的】【稻】【田】【,】【金】【黄】【的】【稻】【秆】【,】【金】【黄】【的】【稻】【穗】【,】【金】【黄】【的】【稻】【粒】【,】【金】【灿】【灿】【的】【微】【笑】【,】【都】【印】【在】【脑】【海】【里】【。】【看】【着】【那】【遍】【野】【的】【金】【黄】【,】【听】【着】【那】【沉】【甸】【甸】【的】【稻】【穗】【在】【风】【中】【的】【轻】【唱】【,】【我】【不】【禁】【赞】【叹】【道】【:】【哦】【,】【原】【来】【秋】【天】【是】【金】【黄】【的】【!】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【走】【进】【秋】【天】【的】【果】【园】【里】【,】【映】【入】【眼】【帘】【的】【是】【:】【浑】【圆】【饱】【满】【的】【柿】【子】【挂】【在】【树】【上】【,】【黄】【澄】【澄】【的】【,】【实】【在】【逗】【人】【喜】【欢】【;】【葡】【萄】【架】【上】【挂】【满】【了】【一】【串】【串】【熟】【透】【了】【的】【葡】【萄】【,】【五】【光】【十】【色】【,】【晶】【莹】【透】【亮】【;】【高】【大】【的】【栗】【子】【树】【上】【挂】【满】【了】【绿】【色】【的】【栗】【子】【球】【;】【苹】【果】【树】【上】【长】【满】【了】【涨】【红】【了】【脸】【的】【苹】【果】【;】【橘】【子】【顶】【着】【绿】【叶】【,】【像】【挂】【在】【树】【上】【的】【小】【灯】【笼】【一】【般】【;】【娃】【娃】【脸】【般】【的】【石】【榴】【咧】【开】【了】【小】【嘴】【,】【露】【出】【了】【满】【满】【的】【籽】【儿】【,】【急】【切】【地】【扒】【开】【绿】【色】【的】【叶】【子】【向】【外】【张】【望】【,】【向】【人】【们】【报】【告】【成】【熟】【的】【喜】【讯】【…】【…】【芬】【芳】【在】【透】【明】【的】【光】【中】【流】【荡】【,】【果】【园】【被】【染】【透】【了】【。】【我】【被】【陶】【醉】【了】【,】【不】【禁】【赞】【叹】【道】【:】【哦】【,】【秋】【天】【是】【斑】【斓】【多】【彩】【的】【!】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【啊】【!】【走】【进】【秋】【天】【,】【我】【已】【成】【了】【一】【个】【小】【画】【家】【,】【正】【在】【描】【绘】【秋】【天】【的】【五】【彩】【和】【生】【活】【的】【灿】【烂】【:】【红】【的】【是】【年】【轻】【是】【希】【望】【,】【白】【的】【是】【善】【良】【是】【纯】【洁】【,】【蓝】【的】【是】【天】【是】【博】【大】【,】【黄】【的】【是】【收】【获】【是】【辉】【煌】【…】【…】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【这】【篇】【习】【作】【运】【用】【“】【移】【步】【换】【景】【”】【的】【写】【法】【,】【选】【取】【并】【描】【写】【了】【五】【幅】【画】【面】【:】【红】【色】【的】【校】【园】【、】【白】【色】【的】【野】【菊】【花】【、】【蓝】【色】【的】【天】【空】【、】【金】【黄】【的】【田】【野】【、】【斑】【斓】【多】【彩】【的】【果】【园】【等】【,】【且】【用】【饱】【含】【感】【情】【的】【“】【走】【进】【秋】【天】【的】【…】【…】【”】【来】【标】【志】【全】【文】【结】【构】【的】【“】【移】【步】【”】【,】【 】【细】【腻】【而】【生】【动】【地】【表】【现】【了】【秋】【色】【多】【彩】【的】【特】【点】【,】【写】【出】【了】【自】【己】【对】【秋】【天】【的】【色】【彩】【的】【真】【切】【感】【悟】【:】【“】【红】【的】【是】【年】【轻】【是】【希】【望】【,】【白】【的】【是】【善】【良】【是】【纯】【洁】【,】【蓝】【的】【是】【天】【是】【博】【大】【,】【黄】【的】【是】【收】【获】【是】【辉】【煌】【…】【…】【”】【从】【而】【将】【秋】【的】【神】【韵】【传】【达】【得】【栩】【栩】【如】【生】【,】【给】【人】【以】【美】【的】【享】【受】【和】【哲】【理】【的】【思】【考】【。】【结】【尾】【在】【排】【比】【句】【式】【中】【升】【华】【主】【题】【,】【让】【文】【章】【的】【容】【量】【增】【大】【,】【拓】【展】【了】【文】【章】【的】【深】【度】【。】【另】【外】【文】【章】【语】【言】【顺】【畅】【如】【流】【,】【十】【分】【讲】【究】【词】【语】【的】【运】【用】【,】【多】【种】【修】【辞】【手】【法】【的】【综】【合】【使】【用】【,】【为】【“】【秋】【天】【的】【色】【彩】【”】【增】【添】【了】【色】【彩】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【[】【也】【可】【以】【这】【样】【写】【]】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【同】【学】【们】【还】【可】【以】【尝】【试】【运】【用】【以】【时】【间】【推】【移】【为】【序】【的】【写】【法】【。】【以】【时】【间】【推】【移】【为】【序】【,】【即】【同】【一】【个】【地】【方】【(】【譬】【如】【校】【园】【、】【乡】【村】【等】【)】【在】【不】【同】【的】【时】【间】【里】【(】【譬】【如】【由】【早】【到】【晚】【)】【,】【其】【景】【物】【是】【有】【变】【化】【的】【,】【按】【一】【定】【的】【时】【段】【有】【层】【次】【地】【依】【次】【写】【来】【,】【可】【以】【表】【现】【出】【景】【物】【的】【丰】【富】【多】【彩】【,】【使】【人】【产】【生】【美】【的】【感】【受】【。】【要】【做】【到】【这】【一】【点】【,】【必】【须】【深】【入】【秋】【景】【之】【中】【多】【角】【度】【、】【多】【侧】【面】【地】【观】【察】【,】【或】【远】【观】【、】【或】【近】【觑】【,】【或】【仰】【视】【、】【或】【俯】【瞰】【,】【或】【从】【前】【到】【后】【、】【从】【里】【到】【外】【,】【或】【由】【主】【到】【次】【、】【由】【浅】【入】【深】【、】【由】【表】【及】【里】【地】【观】【察】【,】【发】【现】【秋】【天】【的】【丰】【富】【多】【彩】【。】【行】【文】【时】【按】【照】【观】【察】【的】【顺】【序】【进】【行】【描】【写】【,】【文】【章】【才】【会】【更】【加】【条】【理】【清】【晰】【、】【层】【次】【分】【明】【。】【以】【时】【间】【为】【序】【不】【能】【像】【列】【清】【单】【一】【样】【地】【把】【所】【有】【景】【物】【都】【写】【下】【来】【,】【要】【根】【据】【主】【题】【的】【需】【要】【决】【定】【材】【料】【的】【取】【舍】【、】【详】【略】【,】【写】【出】【秋】【天】【景】【物】【的】【特】【征】【。】【秋】【天】【有】【特】【点】【的】【景】【物】【有】【哪】【些】【呢】【?】【譬】【如】【,】【菊】【花】【、】【松】【柏】【、】【枫】【树】【、】【成】【熟】【的】【果】【实】【、】【落】【叶】【等】【。】【秋】【天】【的】【景】【物】【有】【哪】【些】【特】【点】【呢】【?】【譬】【如】【,】【菊】【花】【的】【形】【、】【枫】【叶】【的】【色】【、】【果】【实】【的】【味】【、】【落】【叶】【的】【态】【等】【等】【。】【行】【文】【时】【更】【要】【忠】【实】【于】【景】【物】【所】【在】【之】【处】【,】【并】【注】【意】【随】【时】【间】【甚】【至】【人】【的】【心】【情】【的】【不】【同】【,】【紧】【扣】【景】【物】【特】【点】【来】【写】【。】【可】【以】【适】【当】【地】【加】【以】【想】【象】【,】【让】【文】【章】【更】【有】【意】【味】【,】【更】【有】【内】【涵】【;】【可】【以】【运】【用】【比】【喻】【、】【对】【比】【、】【夸】【张】【、】【拟】【人】【等】【修】【辞】【手】【法】【,】【让】【人】【深】【刻】【地】【感】【受】【到】【景】【物】【之】【美】【;】【还】【可】【以】【渗】【透】【作】【者】【的】【感】【情】【,】【体】【味】【独】【属】【于】【秋】【天】【的】【那】【份】【激】【情】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【[】【佳】【作】【展】【示】【]】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【校】【园】【秋】【色】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【●】【周】【雯】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【走】【在】【校】【园】【的】【小】【路】【上】【,】【忽】【然】【一】【阵】【风】【吹】【过】【,】【虽】【然】【只】【是】【微】【微】【一】【阵】【,】【却】【也】【带】【来】【了】【一】【丝】【凉】【意】【。】【霎】【时】【,】【才】【察】【觉】【到】【:】【色】【彩】【斑】【斓】【的】【秋】【天】【来】【到】【我】【们】【学】【校】【了】【!】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【秋】【天】【使】【杨】【树】【默】【默】【地】【更】【衣】【换】【颜】【,】【穿】【起】【了】【一】【件】【朴】【素】【的】【黄】【衣】【裙】【;】【秋】【天】【使】【苍】【松】【翠】【柏】【变】【得】【那】【样】【挺】【拔】【,】【那】【样】【苍】【翠】【;】【而】【满】【枝】【的】【枫】【叶】【也】【被】【秋】【天】【染】【得】【更】【红】【了】【。】【典】【雅】【的】【黄】【、】【真】【挚】【的】【绿】【、】【热】【烈】【的】【红】【,】【为】【校】【园】【编】【织】【出】【一】【条】【条】【绚】【丽】【的】【彩】【带】【,】【编】【织】【出】【一】【只】【只】【多】【彩】【的】【花】【篮】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【早】【晨】【,】【雾】【气】【弥】【漫】【大】【地】【,】【给】【大】【地】【蒙】【上】【了】【一】【层】【轻】【纱】【。】【太】【阳】【像】【刚】【起】【床】【的】【娃】【娃】【,】【快】【活】【地】【露】【出】【红】【扑】【扑】【的】【小】【脸】【。】【整】【个】【校】【园】【被】【雾】【笼】【罩】【,】【缕】【缕】【白】【云】【从】【教】【学】【楼】【飘】【过】【,】【令】【人】【心】【旷】【神】【怡】【。】【雾】【散】【了】【,】【校】【园】【更】【美】【了】【。】【路】【旁】【的】【秋】【菊】【亭】【亭】【玉】【立】【,】【一】【股】【冷】【香】【沁】【人】【肺】【腑】【,】【略】【带】【寒】【意】【的】【花】【瓣】【向】【外】【翻】【卷】【着】【。】【这】【些】【菊】【花】【颜】【色】【不】【一】【:】【红】【的】【、】【白】【的】【、】【紫】【的】【、】【橘】【黄】【的】【、】【绿】【的】【、】【金】【黄】【的】【…】【…】【一】【朵】【菊】【花】【,】【一】【个】【姿】【态】【。】【有】【的】【低】【垂】【着】【头】【,】【像】【害】【羞】【的】【小】【姑】【娘】【;】【有】【的】【歪】【着】【脑】【袋】【,】【像】【个】【淘】【气】【的】【孩】【子】【;】【有】【的】【高】【昂】【着】【头】【,】【像】【个】【骄】【傲】【的】【公】【主】【。】【桂】【花】【也】【争】【先】【恐】【后】【地】【盛】【开】【了】【,】【花】【香】【远】【远】【地】【就】【能】【闻】【到】【,】【难】【怪】【人】【们】【说】【十】【里】【桂】【花】【香】【呢】【!】【桂】【花】【的】【花】【瓣】【很】【小】【,】【由】【四】【瓣】【合】【成】【,】【中】【间】【有】【几】【丝】【花】【蕊】【,】【这】【样】【又】【由】【几】【朵】【小】【花】【构】【成】【一】【丝】【丝】【、】【一】【簇】【簇】【的】【花】【球】【,】【立】【在】【花】【枝】【上】【。】【桂】【花】【的】【颜】【色】【也】【多】【种】【多】【样】【。】【银】【桂】【,】【白】【亮】【亮】【的】【,】【纯】【洁】【无】【比】【;】【金】【桂】【,】【金】【灿】【灿】【的】【,】【像】【满】【天】【的】【晚】【霞】【。】【在】【这】【一】【片】【花】【香】【浓】【浓】【的】【校】【园】【里】【,】【又】【时】【时】【可】【以】【听】【到】【琅】【琅】【的】【读】【书】【声】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【中】【午】【,】【秋】【阳】【高】【照】【,】【草】【儿】【似】【乎】【变】【得】【柔】【软】【了】【,】【伏】【着】【身】【子】【,】【仿】【佛】【在】【酣】【睡】【。】【同】【学】【们】【纷】【纷】【跑】【出】【教】【室】【,】【到】【“】【地】【毯】【”】【上】【去】【放】【松】【一】【下】【心】【情】【。】【有】【的】【同】【学】【躺】【在】【“】【地】【毯】【”】【上】【,】【望】【着】【蓝】【天】【白】【云】【,】【回】【忆】【着】【在】【校】【园】【里】【的】【美】【好】【生】【活】【;】【有】【的】【同】【学】【在】【“】【地】【毯】【”】【上】【追】【逐】【打】【闹】【,】【尽】【情】【地】【玩】【耍】【。】【体】【育】【馆】【前】【的】【那】【一】【排】【枫】【树】【,】【挺】【拔】【地】【站】【着】【,】【越】【是】【秋】【风】【劲】【吹】【,】【枫】【叶】【越】【显】【得】【鲜】【艳】【火】【红】【,】【越】【显】【得】【精】【神】【抖】【擞】【,】【用】【自】【己】【朴】【素】【而】【单】【纯】【的】【红】【色】【装】【点】【着】【我】【们】【的】【校】【园】【。】【难】【怪】【古】【人】【用】【 】【“】【停】【车】【坐】【爱】【枫】【林】【晚】【,】【霜】【叶】【红】【于】【二】【月】【花】【”】【的】【诗】【句】【来】【赞】【美】【它】【。】【这】【时】【总】【有】【不】【少】【同】【学】【在】【枫】【树】【前】【驻】【足】【观】【赏】【,】【偶】【尔】【也】【会】【采】【摘】【些】【树】【叶】【拿】【回】【家】【做】【书】【签】【。】【中】【午】【的】【校】【园】【之】【秋】【,】【洋】【溢】【着】【学】【子】【们】【的】【欢】【乐】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【不】【知】【不】【觉】【,】【秋】【的】【夕】【阳】【涂】【满】【了】【梦】【幻】【般】【的】【橙】【色】【,】【向】【西】【方】【渐】【渐】【落】【下】【,】【放】【出】【柔】【和】【的】【霞】【光】【,】【从】【教】【学】【楼】【顶】【上】【抚】【过】【,】【从】【操】【场】【上】【抚】【过】【,】【也】【抚】【去】【了】【老】【师】【、】【同】【学】【们】【一】【天】【的】【劳】【累】【,】【喧】【闹】【一】【天】【的】【校】【园】【安】【静】【了】【下】【来】【,】【花】【儿】【们】【也】【都】【睡】【着】【了】【。】【一】【轮】【明】【月】【洒】【下】【如】【水】【的】【光】【辉】【,】【让】【人】【顿】【感】【一】【丝】【凉】【意】【。】【多】【美】【好】【的】【校】【园】【星】【空】【啊】【!】【我】【的】【心】【完】【全】【融】【进】【这】【宁】【静】【而】【迷】【人】【的】【夜】【色】【里】【了】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【我】【爱】【校】【园】【的】【秋】【天】【。】【它】【给】【我】【们】【带】【来】【了】【欢】【乐】【和】【希】【望】【,】【催】【促】【我】【们】【奋】【发】【向】【上】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【这】【篇】【习】【作】【主】【要】【有】【两】【个】【亮】【点】【:】【一】【是】【按】【照】【时】【间】【的】【变】【换】【,】【由】【早】【到】【晚】【来】【描】【述】【“】【校】【园】【秋】【色】【”】【,】【娓】【娓】【道】【来】【,】【条】【理】【清】【晰】【。】【“】【校】【园】【秋】【色】【”】【可】【写】【的】【东】【西】【很】【多】【,】【但】【作】【者】【选】【择】【了】【最】【能】【表】【现】【中】【心】【的】【材】【料】【—】【—】【“】【早】【晨】【”】【和】【“】【中】【午】【”】【的】【校】【园】【之】【景】【来】【详】【写】【,】【细】【致】【刻】【画】【,】【铺】【陈】【发】【挥】【,】【泼】【墨】【如】【云】【;】【而】【对】【校】【园】【秋】【夜】【的】【景】【色】【就】【略】【写】【了】【,】【惜】【墨】【如】【金】【。】【详】【略】【有】【致】【,】【使】【文】【章】【掩】【映】【多】【姿】【,】【增】【强】【了】【艺】【术】【效】【果】【。】【二】【是】【写】【出】【了】【“】【校】【园】【秋】【色】【”】【的】【独】【特】【之】【处】【。】【早】【晨】【的】【校】【园】【,】【“】【可】【以】【听】【到】【琅】【琅】【的】【读】【书】【声】【”】【;】【中】【午】【的】【校】【园】【“】【洋】【溢】【着】【学】【子】【们】【的】【欢】【乐】【”】【;】【夜】【晚】【的】【校】【园】【“】【宁】【静】【而】【迷】【人】【”】【。】【在】【写】【中】【午】【校】【园】【时】【,】【又】【着】【重】【描】【写】【了】【最】【能】【体】【现】【其】【特】【征】【的】【“】【枫】【树】【”】【,】【在】【善】【于】【观】【察】【、】【想】【象】【丰】【富】【的】【小】【作】【者】【笔】【下】【,】【将】【枫】【树】【的】【“】【美】【”】【挖】【掘】【出】【来】【,】【并】【且】【将】【树】【的】【“】【精】【神】【”】【与】【人】【的】【品】【行】【修】【养】【结】【合】【起】【来】【,】【给】【人】【以】【启】【迪】【。】【这】【样】【抓】【住】【“】【校】【园】【秋】【色】【”】【的】【特】【征】【来】【写】【,】【鲜】【明】【生】【动】【,】【使】【读】【者】【有】【身】【临】【其】【境】【之】【感】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】

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【<】【p】【>】【出】【发】【,】【划】【起】【行】【动】【的】【双】【桨】【。】【<】【/】【p】【>】唐太宗李世民墓【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【我】【的】【童】【年】【生】【活】【丰】【富】【多】【彩】【,】【像】【万】【花】【筒】【一】【样】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【记】【得】【过】【8】【岁】【生】【日】【的】【时】【候】【,】【妈】【妈】【给】【我】【买】【了】【一】【个】【塑】【料】【娃】【娃】【作】【为】【我】【的】【生】【日】【礼】【物】【。】【这】【个】【娃】【娃】【特】【别】【的】【大】【,】【有】【2】【尺】【多】【高】【,】【她】【身】【穿】【一】【件】【白】【色】【的】【连】【衣】【裙】【,】【裙】【子】【边】【上】【还】【镶】【着】【一】【圈】【金】【色】【的】【花】【边】【呢】【。】【最】【有】【趣】【的】【是】【这】【个】【娃】【娃】【还】【会】【唱】【歌】【,】【每】【当】【我】【心】【情】【不】【好】【的】【时】【候】【,】【它】【就】【会】【对】【着】【我】【唱】【歌】【,】【我】【特】【别】【喜】【欢】【这】【个】【娃】【娃】【,】【把】【她】【当】【做】【我】【的】【好】【朋】【友】【。】【当】【没】【人】【跟】【我】【玩】【的】【时】【候】【,】【我】【就】【悄】【悄】【告】【诉】【她】【我】【心】【里】【的】【秘】【密】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【在】【深】【秋】【里】【的】【一】【天】【,】【我】【看】【见】【她】【仍】【旧】【穿】【着】【那】【件】【白】【色】【的】【连】【衣】【裙】【,】【露】【着】【两】【条】【细】【长】【的】【小】【腿】【,】【心】【想】【:】【她】【多】【冷】【啊】【,】【我】【要】【给】【她】【找】【一】【个】【暖】【和】【的】【地】【方】【。】【于】【是】【,】【我】【抱】【着】【她】【走】【进】【了】【厨】【房】【,】【看】【见】【火】【炉】【烧】【得】【红】【红】【的】【,】【我】【想】【,】【如】【果】【把】【娃】【娃】【放】【在】【炉】【子】【边】【一】【定】【会】【非】【常】【暖】【和】【。】【于】【是】【,】【我】【在】【火】【炉】【上】【放】【了】【一】【块】【小】【铁】【皮】【,】【把】【娃】【娃】【放】【在】【了】【上】【面】【,】【慢】【慢】【地】【不】【知】【道】【怎】【么】【了】【,】【娃】【娃】【越】【来】【越】【矮】【,】【还】【散】【发】【出】【一】【股】【非】【常】【刺】【鼻】【的】【味】【道】【。】【看】【到】【这】【种】【情】【景】【我】【不】【由】【得】【哭】【了】【。】【妈】【妈】【闻】【到】【这】【刺】【鼻】【的】【味】【急】【忙】【跑】【了】【过】【来】【,】【一】【把】【拽】【下】【了】【娃】【娃】【,】【丢】【到】【一】【边】【,】【说】【:】【“】【这】【是】【怎】【么】【回】【事】【?】【”】【我】【哭】【着】【说】【:】【“】【天】【气】【冷】【了】【,】【我】【怕】【它】【冷】【,】【所】【以】【…】【…】【”】【听】【完】【我】【的】【话】【,】【妈】【妈】【哈】【哈】【大】【笑】【起】【来】【,】【告】【诉】【我】【说】【:】【娃】【娃】【是】【塑】【料】【做】【成】【的】【,】【塑】【料】【是】【不】【能】【用】【火】【烤】【的】【,】【一】【烤】【就】【熔】【化】【了】【。】【从】【那】【以】【后】【,】【我】【明】【白】【了】【这】【个】【道】【理】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【在】【我】【的】【记】【忆】【里】【,】【还】【有】【一】【件】【事】【让】【我】【想】【起】【来】【就】【不】【由】【得】【发】【笑】【。】【记】【得】【那】【是】【一】【个】【星】【期】【天】【,】【我】【一】【个】【人】【在】【家】【,】【闲】【着】【没】【事】【干】【,】【便】【去】【看】【电】【视】【,】【这】【时】【电】【视】【里】【正】【在】【讲】【吃】【燕】【窝】【的】【好】【处】【。】【我】【听】【到】【“】【燕】【窝】【“】【这】【个】【词】【便】【来】【了】【神】【,】【心】【想】【:】【这】【几】【天】【,】【我】【刚】【好】【有】【点】【感】【冒】【,】【不】【知】【燕】【窝】【治】【不】【治】【感】【冒】【呢】【?】【唉】【,】【管】【它】【治】【不】【治】【呢】【,】【先】【吃】【了】【再】【说】【吧】【!】【我】【便】【把】【我】【攒】【的】【压】【岁】【钱】【拿】【了】【出】【来】【,】【数】【了】【数】【,】【嘿】【!】【还】【挺】【多】【的】【呢】【,】【够】【买】【两】【盒】【了】【吧】【。】【可】【是】【,】【“】【事】【与】【愿】【违】【”】【,】【到】【了】【商】【店】【才】【发】【现】【,】【这】【些】【钱】【连】【一】【盒】【燕】【窝】【的】【1】【/】【1】【0】【都】【买】【不】【到】【。】【唉】【!】【我】【在】【嘴】【里】【嘟】【囔】【着】【“】【燕】【窝】【燕】【窝】【你】【可】【真】【贵】【呀】【!】【”】【突】【然】【,】【我】【的】【脑】【中】【闪】【过】【了】【一】【个】【绝】【妙】【的】【主】【意】【。】【对】【呀】【!】【燕】【窝】【燕】【窝】【不】【就】【是】【燕】【子】【的】【窝】【吗】【?】【我】【家】【房】【檐】【下】【不】【就】【有】【燕】【子】【的】【窝】【吗】【?】【弄】【一】【个】【在】【锅】【里】【一】【煮】【不】【就】【好】【了】【吗】【!】【我】【急】【忙】【跑】【回】【了】【家】【,】【开】【始】【去】【找】【我】【的】【材】【料】【,】【爬】【上】【爬】【下】【地】【总】【算】【把】【“】【燕】【窝】【”】【摘】【下】【来】【了】【,】【开】【始】【煮】【了】【,】【几】【分】【钟】【后】【我】【的】【“】【燕】【窝】【”】【就】【弄】【好】【了】【,】【盛】【到】【碗】【里】【慢】【慢】【地】【放】【在】【嘴】【边】【,】【轻】【轻】【地】【用】【舌】【头】【舔】【了】【一】【下】【,】【哇】【!】【好】【苦】【呀】【!】【可】【俗】【话】【说】【得】【好】【,】【“】【良】【药】【苦】【口】【利】【于】【病】【”】【,】【于】【是】【我】【毫】【无】【顾】【忌】【地】【“】【咕】【噜】【咕】【噜】【”】【喝】【了】【下】【去】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【过】【了】【1】【个】【小】【时】【,】【我】【以】【为】【这】【样】【就】【可】【以】【百】【病】【全】【消】【呢】【!】【可】【是】【肚】【子】【却】【疼】【了】【起】【来】【。】【妈】【妈】【回】【来】【后】【马】【上】【把】【我】【送】【到】【了】【医】【院】【,】【医】【生】【问】【我】【是】【怎】【么】【回】【事】【,】【我】【把】【来】【龙】【去】【脉】【和】【医】【生】【说】【了】【,】【医】【生】【和】【妈】【妈】【听】【了】【都】【大】【笑】【起】【来】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【每】【当】【回】【想】【起】【童】【年】【的】【事】【,】【我】【都】【会】【捧】【腹】【大】【笑】【,】【因】【为】【是】【这】【一】【件】【一】【件】【的】【趣】【事】【串】【起】【了】【我】【的】【童】【年】【,】【丰】【富】【了】【我】【的】【童】【年】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【本】【文】【生】【动】【地】【记】【叙】【了】【童】【年】【时】【的】【两】【件】【趣】【事】【,】【表】【现】【了】【“】【我】【”】【的】【天】【真】【稚】【气】【,】【让】【读】【者】【仿】【佛】【亲】【身】【经】【历】【一】【般】【。】【结】【构】【严】【谨】【,】【开】【门】【见】【山】【,】【首】【尾】【呼】【应】【,】【详】【略】【得】【当】【,】【展】【现】【了】【小】【作】【者】【较】【强】【的】【文】【字】【驾】【驭】【能】【力】【。】【文】【中】【的】【语】【言】【亲】【切】【、】【真】【实】【,】【动】【作】【描】【写】【和】【心】【理】【描】【写】【使】【人】【物】【活】【了】【起】【来】【,】【这】【在】【初】【一】【的】【学】【生】【中】【可】【以】【说】【是】【可】【圈】【可】【点】【。】【(】【指】【导】【老】【师】【:】【蒋】【本】【霞】【)】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【 】【技】【巧】【点】【拨】【:】【这】【篇】【文】【章】【用】【了】【“】【一】【字】【经】【纬】【”】【法】【。】【整】【篇】【叙】【事】【都】【突】【现】【了】【一】【个】【“】【趣】【”】【字】【,】【不】【论】【是】【给】【塑】【料】【娃】【娃】【取】【暖】【,】【还】【是】【掏】【燕】【子】【窝】【做】【“】【燕】【窝】【”】【吃】【,】【都】【显】【示】【了】【儿】【童】【易】【犯】【的】【“】【想】【当】【然】【”】【的】【“】【错】【误】【”】【,】【这】【种】【富】【有】【“】【白】【色】【幽】【默】【”】【的】【“】【误】【解】【”】【,】【不】【仅】【表】【现】【出】【孩】【子】【的】【天】【真】【率】【直】【,】【还】【影】【射】【成】【人】【世】【界】【中】【常】【犯】【的】【类】【似】【错】【误】【,】【文】【中】【丰】【富】【的】【内】【涵】【,】【都】【包】【含】【在】【一】【个】【“】【趣】【”】【字】【之】【中】【,】【令】【人】【笑】【过】【之】【后】【,】【深】【有】【所】【悟】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】

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